高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：转折,语言,词库

高中英语新高考

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英语作文：

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读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：转折

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语言

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词库

目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的，说来就来。这不，各 种证据证明，未来作文会变成

文章续写，即：给一篇

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词左右的记叙文给你，结尾没有，让考生自由发挥。限制是

:

需要

用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。目前浙江已经明确在考试说明 中说了，后面的高考就要

采用这种形式。

（孙三五）

这种改革给考生一种恐慌，

< br>为什么呢？因为从未写过这样的文章，

而且续写听起来好高大上。

但是，我看来，这种作文最好发挥。我给出的技巧是：内容上要注意两个转折；语言上要注

意倒装和非谓语动词；另外，我给考生们准备了万能的九个小词库。

一、何为内容上的两个转折

写记叙文，英汉是同理的。故事要有曲折即：

twist

。而高考作文

150

作文只能让你写顶多两

个曲折。曲折分：情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。

英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别，我们的曲折不要 一味追求离奇，而是讲究逻辑的连贯。

二、语言的运用

< br>记叙文是动作和语言的干活，不需要你写复杂句，这是文体的需要。常用的是：非谓语动词

和倒装句。为什么呢？因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。

三、关于九个小词库

我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的，你有什么样的 心情就有什么样的动作。笔者

平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。

省略了伴随心情的手、

脚、

脸等词库，进行粗线条的概括。虽然不多，但我认为也足够应付高考了。我将它们分为九大< /p>

类：

一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：

二、如何表达同情和关心

三、如何表达轻松

四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情

五、如何表达胆小、害怕

六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬

七、如何表达悲伤

八、如何表达疲劳

九、如何表达疼痛

四、实战演练

（这道题是浙江考试说明上的例子，但没有给答案）

步骤一：

第一个转折：

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The young man; suitcases in the back seat;loud noise of an alarm; the bank; robbery; the shouts;

people; the bank thief

报警：群众拦阻；警察赶到

心情：害怕；困惑；疼痛

第二个转折：

真相：一箱书；赶往学校报到

心情：生气；轻松；关心

步骤二：

He dared not stop and dashed to the was struck dead with terror. His heart was beating

painfully fast and banging against his ribs. However, hearing the shouts, several strong young men

in front of the bank blocked and arrested him. Now, every nerve in Authur’s body warned him not

to go any further. “I doubt that guy is the bank thief.” said Authur, pointing the man behind.[

用非

谓语动词

] The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of his throat.

Luckily,

just

then

up

came

the

policemen[

倒装句

].

Authur

began

to

calm

down,

his

breathing

growing slower.[

用非谓语动词

] He could feel the blood surging round his body and releasing the

tension. When the suitcases were opened, many books came in sight. The young man gave Authur

a look of concern, saying“I really hope you are not hurt. Maybe we can

be friends.” Both of them

smiled.

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划线部分都是来自九小词库）

五、九小词库【以下均摘自文学作品，部分词汇需要你查词典 理解】

一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：

词语：

Nouns Thoughts, concentration, determination

Verbs Felt, tried, resolved, determined

Heard, remembered

词块：

* Deep in thought

* Lost in her own thoughts

* Tried desperately to remember

* Heard little of what was being said around her

* Nothing was going to stop him now

* Felt a hard ball of determination tightening in his stomach

佳句：

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She tried desperately to remember where she had seen him before.

She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.

He shuddered and tensed, as a hard ball of determination tightened in his stomach.

二、如何表达同情和关心

词语：

Nouns Face, mouth, smile, eyebrows

Concern, sympathy, comfort, warmth

Adjectives Soft, warm, calm, sympathetic, comforting

Verbs Gave, flashed

Drew, turned

词块：

* Face turned soft and sympathetic

* Gave her a look of concern

* Drew her eyebrows together

* Mouth turned down at the corners

* Flashed a comforting smile

佳句：

His face turned soft and sympathetic and his voice sank to a murmur.

She drew her eyebrows together and turned her mouth down in a look of concern.

三、如何表达轻松

词语：

Nouns Heart, pulse, blood

Chest, head, brow, scalp, sweat

Adjectives Calm, grateful

Verbs Eased, slowed, calmed, released ached

词块：

* Pounding eased in her chest

* Breathing slowed

* Rapid beat of her heart became calmer

* Sweat dried on her brow

* Blood surged round her body

* Released the tension in her body

* Grateful for his narrow escape

佳句：

She began to calm down and her heart started to slow, but the panic had left an ache in her head

and a ringing in her ears.

Slowly, the pounding eased in her chest and the sweat dried on her brow.

She could feel the blood surging round her body and releasing the tension.

Her breathing grew slower, as a new calm settled over her.

四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情

词语：

Nouns Heart, pulse, breath, throat

Anger, rage, fury, temper, wrath, disgust, contempt, resentment

Adjectives Cross, furious, raging

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Jealous, envious, resentful

Irritating, frustrating

Bitter, vicious, poisonous

Breathless, sweating

Verbs Swept, poured

Pounded, exploded, erupted

Shook, trembled, writhed

Raced, hammered

Clenched, gripped

词块：

* Red mist

* Spitting bundle of rage

* Vicious flash of temper

* Hard lump at the back of her throat

* Left him breathless

* Made his heart race

* Hammered in his head

* Swept through him like a tidal wave

* Burning with rage

* Wrath exploded like a volcano

* Poured from her like an acid

* Surrounded him like a foul stench

* Poisoned the air around him

佳句：

He was sweating and burning with rage.

She saw his face through narrowed eyes and a fog of rage.

Her reply fuelled his anger and he erupted like a volcano.

The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of her throat.

His fury knew no limits

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one vicious flash of temper after another.

Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.

五、如何表达胆小、害怕

词语：

Nouns Fear, dread, panic, terror, horror, turmoil

Thoughts, instinct

Heart, chest, pulse, blood

Head, brain, temples, forehead

Breath, throat, windpipe, cheeks, tongue, bile

Stomach, gut, cramps

Skin, hair, shivers, tingle, prickle

Adjectives Numb, sick, nervous, uneasy

Dry, tight, thick, heavy

Long, deep, short, shallow

Unsteady, shuddering, rasping

Quick, fast, painful

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