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作文万能开头结尾
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2010-05-03 09:28
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结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了
,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总
而
言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然
要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously
(此为过渡短语)
, we can draw the conclusion that good manners
arise from
politeness and respect for
others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on
account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…,
Therefore, we can find that…
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结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说
“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为
这
里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took
some measures to solve the problem.
这里
的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考
官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some
measures be taken.
Consequently, to
solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
写作的“七项基本原则”
一、
长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,
老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到
画龙点睛的作用。
而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As
a
creature,
I
eat;
as
a
man,
I
read.
Although
one
action
is
to
meet
the
primary
need
of
my body and the other is to satisfy the
intellectual need of mind, they are in a
way quite similar.
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
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强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短
句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分
妙笔
生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、
主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,
文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一
些破烂文学,故意
把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位
一定要写一个
主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To
begin
with,
you
must
work
hard
at
your
lessons
and
be
fully
prepared
before
the
exam
(主题句)
.
Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly
expect to answer all the
questions
correctly.
三、
一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可
毕竟还
是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是
否结构清楚,
条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要
点前就清楚了。
1
)
first, second,
third, last
(不推荐,原因:俗)
2
)
firstly,
secondly, thirdly,
finally
(不推荐,原因:俗)
3
)
the first, the
second, the third, the
last
(不推荐,原因:俗)
4
)
in the first
place, in the second place, in the third place,
lastly
(不推荐,原
因:俗)
5
)
to begin with,
then, furthermore,
finally
(强烈推荐)
6
)
to start with,
next, in addition,
finally
(强烈推荐)
7
)
first and
foremost, besides, last but not
least
(强烈推荐)
8
)
most important
of all, moreover, finally
9
)
on the one
hand, on the other
hand
(适用于两点的情况)
10
)
for one thing,
for another thing
(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
六、
多变句式原则
1
)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是
这些,可以在任何句子之间加
and,
但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing
guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it
is also warm.
其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise,
moreover
2
)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种
方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前<
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先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in
excellent condition.
The coat was
thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:
despite
that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
despite, notwithstanding
3
)因果(
so, so,
so
)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女
孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后
我们成为了朋友…可见
,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这
个词就变得很常见
了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The
snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:
then,
therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
result, for this reason, so
that
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