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高考英语读后续写素材汇总
What
is a climax of a story?
(什么是故事高潮
< br>?
)
More
tension=satisfying climax
文学故事中的高潮(
climax
)
----
故事的主要场景(
key scene
)也通常是故事的转折
点
(
turning point
),
是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的
< br>
危机
点。有时候
,
它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点
,
发生了一些事情
,
或者主角必须
做出决定
,
从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常
用下面的图表来表示故事情节。
常见故事高潮示例:
1. A
little girl has been searching for her lost dog.
All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from
around the corner, and she looks around
to see . . .
2. Kevin has worked very
hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The
coach has posted a list of
this year's
team members on his office door. Kevin walks
forward to look at the list . . . .
3.
Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not
to move to another state. They call Mary and
her sister down to talk with them about
their decision . . .
4. Lois has
performed in the state gymnastics finals. She
waits anxiously to hear the names of the
winners. The announcer says,
文学名著中的一些故事高潮
1.
The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he
thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who
kills herself when she awakes and sees
Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare
(罗密
第
1
页
共
8
页
欧和朱丽叶,莎士比亚)
2.
When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the
beast, and Belle admits her love for
the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney
(美女与野兽,迪士尼)
3. In
and the wolf. This confrontation is the
climax.
(三只小猪)
How
to create a climax of a story?
(
如何营造故事的高潮?
)
方法
1.
增加外部冲突
增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。
冲突
带来紧迫感
,
将故事推向
必要的解决或崩溃。
1
)角色之间的冲突
(
人物观点差异
,
竞争需要等
)
如:
On the fourth or fifth
night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a
vacancy. After driving
in
vain
for
some
time,
Mom
suddenly
got
a
great
idea:
Why
didn't
we
find
a
house
with
a
likely-looking
backyard
and
ask
if
we
could
set
up
tent
there?
David
and
I
became
nervous.
开车找旅馆
---
徒劳无功
---
母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院
---Davi
d
和我倍感紧张,
心
有不悦(母子的观
点不一)
2)
角色与环境之间的冲突
如:
Then Mac heard
quick and loud breathing behind him. ……he saw
instantly that it
wasn't
a
dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with
him. Mac's heart
jumped. ……, he fired
the
spray at the wolf. A bright red
cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief,
it fell back,
shaking its head. But a
minute later, ……. Then it ……, tearing
open his tent bag. He fired at
the wolf
a second time, and again, it fell back
……
Mac
骑车独自行,路遇饿狼,
与之搏斗,险象环生。(人(角色)
----
狼(环境)大战)
3)
时间依赖的发展
:决策变得紧急
如:
The
car
abruptly
stopped
in
front
of
him.
into
the
car.
shouted
at
Mac.
Mac
jumped off
the
bike
and
slid
into
the
car
without
delay
as
the
wolf
was
just
two
steps
away
and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a
narrow escape!
骑车突停面前
---
急喊上
车
---Max
上车避险
---
饿狼近在咫尺(此情此景,刻不容缓)
4)
增加的障碍
:人物角色必须克服
挑战
,
以达到他们的目标
例如:
But
before
we
jumped
off
the
horses,
we
found
that
we
had
been
off
the
beaten
track
and got lost. We
had no idea
where
we
were
and it
got
dark.
Exhausted
and
hungry,
I
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