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改错一
I
have
a
good
friend
who
’
s
name
is
Liu
Mei.
She
is
our
monitor
and
one
of
the
excellent
student in our
class. Although she is clever, but she works very
hard. We have a lot on common
and have
a lot to talk about. One evening she
told me that something happened when
her parents
was out. She was doing her
homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt
something burning.
She
stopped
look
out
of
the
window
and
find
a
cloud
of
smoke
coming
out of
her
neighbour
’
s
house.
She
called
119
immediate.
Ten
minutes
later,
the
firemen
came
and
put
out
fire.
Her
neighbour was very
thankful for her help.
改错二
I went to see
the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met
an English woman, who lost
her way. I
gave up the chance see the film and took her to
her hotel. While go there, I told her
about great changes that had been taken
place in the past few years and she had told me
anything
about her country.
Although I missed the film, I still
felt very happy, for I had not only helped her
out of trouble but practise my spoken
English. If I had not worked hard on English, I
would have
been able to help him.
改错三
Dear Ralph,
I'm
a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in
my class. But I have fallen in love with
him for almost half a year. He is shy
boy, so I wrote him a letter first
to
express
my
feeling.
He
wrote
back. In his letter
he said,
whether we have some chance after
graduation.
about going out. But he said
he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and
watched TV.
What
do
you think I should do? Do
you think I should continue to love him and give
up?
改错四
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my
English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your
penfriend, and
get to know more about
your country.
First,
let
me tell
you something more
about myself. My name
is
Li
Hua. I
live in
Beijing,
where is the capital of China. I go to
Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few
subject, such as
maths, Chinese,
English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot
on my spare time, but now I am
interesting in football. Do you play
any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look
forward to
hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
改错五
Two months
ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I
left, I was given a lot present.
Among
them
，
there were
two presents which were really interested me. My
sister buys me a book
with
color
pictures
about
body
language
and
with
words
about
customs
of
different
country
in
them.
My
brother
gave
me
a
note
which
read,
“My
present
has
put
in
your
bedroom.”
When
I
hurried into my bedroom, I found a box,
in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was
very glad
but a few surprised to
receive these two presents.
改错六
Dear Li Ming,
I have received
your letter yesterday. Don’t
worry about you. I’m getting
along well with my
research
works in the lab.
But, to
my surprising,
you say
you
will give up learn English. The
reason
is that you have not done well in it recently
and you have lost interesting. I’m
afraid I can’t
agree with you. I know
it is not easy to learn English, and English is
widely used in the world
today and it
will be important tool in your future work.
Besides, it is becoming more and more
important at our daily life. If you
study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is
a will, there
is a way.
改错七
Some students
don’t like talking about their parents often as if
their parents love them very
much. Are
you going on well with your parents? You and your
parents will be very happy if you
can
be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk
with them.
Find a good time to talk,
like
when
you’re
eating
dinner,
going
out
for
walk
and
watching
TV
.
Tell
them
something
you’re
interested in, or ask
them about their life when they are young. They
love to talk about our past!
Meet them
face to face and listen to them carefully. Be
honesty, and your parents will trust you
more.
改错八
One afternoon Jack is walking down a
river along. It was very cold day and on the river
few
boats could be
seen
．
When he stopped on a
bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A
boy
fell of a
canoe(
独木舟
) and was
struggling in the
water
．
Without think about
herself, Jack jumped
into the river and
to save the boy
．
He was about to
drag
（拖）
the boy
to the river bank then he
saw some
people stand in a motor boat under the
bridge
．
One of
them stared Jack and said angrily,
“They are making a film and you’ve
spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”