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一、环境描写的素材
环境描写分为客
观和主观两种角度
:
客观为从环境事物本身入手
,
主观则从观察者角度描写。通
常在描写时主客观交替
进行
,
主观描写比重稍大。
客观环境描写
:
Part 1
环境描写的
adj
要求
:
有声
,
有色
,
有质感
,
有味道
the blue
sky(
蓝天
)the songs of
birds(
鸟鸣
)the thundering
clouds(
电光闪雷鸣
)
the
fragile
flowers
(
娇嫩的花
);(the
dark,
raining
evening
雨夜交加的夜晚
)the
green
grass(
青草
)
the fragrant
roses(
艳丽的玫瑰
); the
setting/rising sun(
落日
/
冉冉升起的太阳
)…
Part 2
环境描写的
verb
(vi&vt)
要求
一
).Wind
(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)
1.A gust of
wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the
weeping willow like a curtain,…
一阵
风吹
,
吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条
,
就像卷起的窗帘。
wind,
soft
and
cold,
clicked
through
tree
branches
and
stirred
the
bushes
that
sprinkled
the
slo
pe.
风
,
轻柔却寒冷
,
轻点着树枝
,
搅动着斜坡下
的灌木丛。
3.A cool breeze blew
through the quiet
park.
凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.
(
冷风吹拂过我的头发
)
The
wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just
hard enough to give some lift.
(
今日正是放风筝的好天气
,
强劲的风力带动了风筝的上
升。
)
二
).Water
(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)
声音
: one point, the faint
sound of water tumbling through the valley.
在某处
,
潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
颜色
water was deep blue
and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear
surface.
水是深蓝色
的
,
阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。
3.A
little way off was a small brook, rushing and
sparkling along between green bank.
离此不
远
,
有一条小溪
,
在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。
4. It
murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent
girl whispered to her loving mother.
似乎
它在温
柔低语
,
就一位天真少女对着她
那慈爱的母亲细细私语。
(action, sound, colour)
三
).Sky (stand/ appear/turn)
sky was a curdled gray burdened with
lumps of clouds.
天空是浓浓的灰色
,
伴着拥挤的朵朵云
2.
Blue skies
stood tall and far
蓝蓝的天空高高耸立
主观环境描写
:
found sth adj/doing/done
某人发
现某物
(
状态
/
动作
/
被
)...
saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done
某人看到
/
听到
/
感到
/
闻到某物
(
状态
/
动作
/
被
)
was so adj
that we find/feel
它是如此
....
以至于
kept sb spellb
ound/amazed/
景物使我如此陶醉
/
惊讶
/
sth held sb entirely
in their power
景物让我完全惊呆了
looked/seeme
d/appeared/felt
like …
景物看起来像
…
二、场景描写的素材
(
来自原著
:
追风筝的人
)
1.
At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky,
like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an
hour, the number doubled, and red,
blue, and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky.
A cold breeze
wafted through my hair. The wind was
perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough
to give some
lift, make the sweeps
easier.
(
放风筝的场景描写
,
从各个角度
,
立体描述
)
空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝
,
如同纸制的鲨鱼
,
巡游搜猎食物。
< br>不到一个钟头
,
这个数字翻了
一
番
,
红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞
,
熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这
风正适宜
放风筝
,
风速不大
,
< br>恰好能让风筝飘浮起来
,
也便于操控。
< br>
water was a deep blue and sunlight
glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.
湖水澄蓝
,
波平
如镜<
/p>
,
阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。
3. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of
kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the
sky. They danced
high above the trees
on the west end of the park, over the windmills,
floating side by side like a pair
of
eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now
call home. (
场景、比喻
)
我抬起头
,
望见两只红色的风筝
,
带着长长的蓝色尾巴
,
在天空中冉冉升
起。
它们舞动着
,
飞越公园
西边的树林
,
飞越风车
,
并排飘浮着
,
如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金
山
,
这个我现在当成家园的城市。
4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the
sun l ike a branding iron searing the back of your
neck. Creeks
where
Hassan
and
I
skipped
stones
all
spring
turned
dry,
and
rickshaws
stirred
dust
when
they
sputtered
by.(
场景、比喻
)
天空一碧如洗
,
阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂
,
到了夏天它们也干涸
了。黄包车嗒嗒走过
,
扬起阵阵灰尘。
5.
Somewhere,
a
branch
snapped,
an
owl
hooted.
The
wind,
soft
and
cold,
clicked
through
tree
branches and stirred the bushes that
sprinkled the slope. And from below, the faint
sound of water
tumbling through the
valley.
在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音
,
还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝
,
吹过
山坡上的灌
木丛。而下面
,
水流在山谷
淌动
,
传来阵阵微弱的声音。
6. By three o'clock, the
rain
had stopped and the sky
was a
curdled
gray
burdened with
lumps
of
clouds.
A cool breeze blew through the
park.(
天气
)
到三点时
,
雨停了
,
铅灰色的
天空阴云密布
,
一阵寒风吹过公园。
7.
The
sun
was
beginning
to
set,
glittering
red
through
the
cracks
between
the
ramshackle
buildings.(
景象
)
太阳开始下山
,
那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝
中
,
渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。
三、描写时间
,
动作
,
心理和情感
一
)
、情感好词
:
1.
喜乐
1The smile on her face shone like a
diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
②
A smile of understanding
flashed across his
face.
他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③
A ripple of excitement ran
through them.
一阵激动声穿过他们。
④
Laughter lingered around
the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤
His eyes twinkled with
pleasure.
他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥
A wild
gaiety(
快乐
) took hold of
her.
一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦
Unforgettable were her
eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a
steady smile.
令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光
,
嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧
I was wild with
joy.
我欣喜若狂。
⑨
I was pleased beyond
description.
我高兴得难以形容。
⑩
She wore a shining smile
on her face.
她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
?
Her smile lit up the whole
room.
她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
?
She shed tears of
joy.
她高兴得流下了眼泪。
?
Her eyes were sparkling
like diamonds.
她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
?
She was overflowing with
happiness.
她洋溢着幸福。
?
Her flushed face was
shining with
excitement.
她激动得满脸通红。
?
Joy welled up inside
her.
她心中涌起喜悦。
?
I was floating on
air.
我漂浮在空中。
?
Amusement gleamed in his
eyes.
他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
the train moved by, the son was
overwhelmed with
joy
as he
was thrilled with
the scenery
outside.
20.(
2015
全国卷
I
)
When we handed him the bag of food,
he
lit up
and thanked us
with
watery eyes
.
When
I
handed
him
the
gift
card,
saying
he
could
use
it
for
whatever
his
family
might
need,
he
burst
into tears
.
2.
感动
:
①
Touched deeply/immensely, we…
被深深感动
,
我们
……
②
Tears filling her eyes,
she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
她热泪
盈眶
,
表示衷心的感谢。
③
With tears streaming down
her face, she...
泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来
,……
3.
愤怒
:
①
I was seized by
anger.
我充满了愤怒。
②
He was fuming with
rage.
他气得大发雷霆。
③
His anger boiled
over.
他的愤怒爆发了。
④
He could hardly/scarcely
contain his rage.
他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤
He was breathing fire and
fury.
他充满着怒火。
⑥
His voice trembled with
anger.
他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦
He gave me a look of
burning anger.
他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧
He glared at me with
burning eyes.
他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨
He flared up at the
word.
他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩
His face clouded with
anger.
他气得脸色阴沉。
4.
悲伤烦恼
①
He stood silently, tears
rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着
,
眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
②
I feel like I am floating
in an ocean of
sadness.
我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③
Her hands were shaking.
She was on the verge of
tears.
她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④
H earing the news, so
desperate was he that he drowned sadness in
wine.
听到这
个消息
,
他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
⑤
She burst into tears and
ran out of the room.
她突然哭了起来
,
跑出了房间。
⑥
She sobbed, hiding her
face in her hands.
她掩面哭泣。
⑦
I tried to fight back
tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.
我努力忍住眼泪。
/
我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧
A
frown(
皱眉
)now stood on his
face.
他皱起了眉头。
⑨
They sat there with glum
looks on their faces.
他们坐在那里
,
带着一脸忧郁。
⑩
The news cast a cloud of
gloom over his
face.
这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
?
He brimmed over with
sorrow
when...
他满是悲伤
……
?
They were immersed in
sorrow.
他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
?
These days he was in low
spirits.
这些日子他情绪低落。
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