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雅思写作:高分句型
VS
复杂句型
考官评分标准中最后一项
GRA (grammatical
range and accuracy)
,
明确考察的是学生
写英
语句子多样性和准确性的能力,
即测试考生简单句和复杂句
的综合运用能力。
而中国考生也
知道句式表达要多样性,
但很难参透具体如何操作才能让自己的句子丰富多样,
结果是普遍
p>
句式比较单一,
写到复杂结构时往往就是堆斥各种从句,
似乎除了从句再无其它复杂结构可
写。事实上,剑桥考官的范文中,复杂句
的数量寥寥可数,很多时候都是把简单句进行了华
丽的包装,一起来看看考官喜欢的
p>
“
高分句型是什么样的。
1
、状语前置
所谓状语前置就是把状语
(
副词,介词短语,分词,不定式
)
放到句首。考官会频繁使用
这种语法结构,
而很多
考生却没有意识,
这种句式通过一堆长句子中出现一个小短语,
可以
让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感,实例如下:
1)Unfortunately, professionals from
other fields who make a much greater contributions
to
human society, are paid so much less
that it is hard to disagree with the statement.
2)Obviously,
education systems are based on the belief that all
children can effectively be
taught to
acquire different skills.
3)Like
self-awareness,this
is
also
very
difficult
to
achieve,
but
I
think
these
are
the
two
factors
that may be most important for achieving
happiness.
4)As
a result of media attention, sports professionals
in my country have become stars and
celebrities.
5)With
the
political
will,
such
measures
could
really
reduce
the
amount
of
rubbish
we
produce.
6)Struggling in poverty, people in
these countries believe international aid is
essential and
should be continued.
7)To
do
this,
we
need
to
improve
the
choice
of
public
transport
services
available
to
individuals.
8)To become successful,more
skills and dedication are required.
2
、句中插入短语
和状语前置类似,
长句子中间插入一个小短语,
可以让句子读起来更轻松灵活。
< br>考官实
例如下:
1)This will
affect the job market, which, after all, is a key
target in any economic plan.
2)Sports
stars
and
pop
stars,for
example,
are
soon
replaced
by
the
neat
younger,
more
energetic generation.
3)So overall, I
believe that, attending schools from a young age
is good for most children.
4)Universities, when it is functioning
well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as
well as
professional training.
3
、倒装句
这种语法现象考生都学过,但往往在作文中忘记或没有意识使
用。先看两个例子:
1)Parents should spend time on their
children. They should also communicate with them.
2) We can never
lose sight of the significance of education.
这两个句子没有任何错误,但都很
单调平淡,如果使用倒装,效果就不一样了。
第一句可以用
not
only
/but
also
句型来改写成倒装句:
Not
only
should
parents
spent
time on their children, they are also
advised to interact with them.
第二句可以否定词提前,强调突出
“
不可忽视
”
。
On
no
account/by
no
means/
in
no
way/never can we lose
sight of the significance of education.
考官范文中的倒装例子并不多,主要体现在以下几种情况中:
1)Only in this
way can this problem be effectively solved.
2)We can see
that not only are there very large differences
between these economies, but
that these
gaps are widening.
3)Strange
as
it
may
seem,
parents’
attention
sometimes
hinders
students’
academic
development.
4)Equally important to success in
learning a foreign language is constant attention
to details.
考生在
平时的语言积累和写作练习中,可以多模仿这几种固定句式,在文章中穿插
1-2
句倒装句。
4
、强调句
强调句的句式框架结构为
It
is+(
被强调的成分
)
that/who+(
句子剩余成分
),
类似于中文
的
“
正是
…
导致了
…”
的意思。例如,考官范文中的例句:
1)It
is
the
interaction
of
the
two
that
shapes
a
person’
personality
and
dictates
how
that