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一、
作文开头
万能句
1
、
With the
development of technology and science,
随
着科学技术的发展（后
面一定要接句子，不能单独使用）
With the growth progress of technology
and science= Coincident with the
advancement of science and technology.
2
、
Considering the
worsening situation in China, attention must be
poured into
protecting the environment.
(
考虑到中国越来越坏的情况，环境保护需要引起更
多的重视。
)
3
、
The first five
years of the new century witnessed the increasing
development
of
China.(
本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展。
)
As the global economy
grows at a fever pitch,……
4
、
Coincident with
the fast growing national economy, there exists an
unfavorable and prevalent phenomenon in
China.
5
、
There are
growing concern for ……
6
、
In recent
years, it is common to see
hear that
……
7
、
There is a
general tendency
that……
（有一种趋势）
二、
作文内容的陈述
结构
in the first place/
secondly/ on top of that
以下
手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法，也是得高分的
“
亮点
”
。
1.
改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再
加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。
〔原文〕
We met at the school
gate and went there together early in the
morning.
〔修正〕
Early in the morning we
met at the school gate and went there
together.
〔原文〕
The young man couldn’t
help crying when he heard the bad news.
〔修正〕
Hearing the bad
news
，
the young
man couldn’t help crying.
2.
在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主
从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
〔原文〕
I met him in the street
yesterday.
〔修正〕
It
was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the
street.
②由
with
或
without
引导的短语。如
:
He sat
in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分词短语。如
:
Satisfied with the
result
，
He decided to go on
with a new experiment.
④倒装句。如
:
Only in this way can we
achieve our goal.
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Never before
have I seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the
college, but also learn how to be a decent
person.
⑤省略句。如
:
If so
，
victory
will be ours.
You can make
some changes wherever necessary.
3.
通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
〔原文〕
He stopped us half an
hour ago. He made us catch the next
offender.
〔修正〕
He stopped
us half an hour ago and made us catch the next
offender.
〔原文〕
We had a
short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang
and
danced.
Some told stories. Some
played chess.
〔修正〕
After a short
rest
，
we had
great fun singing and
dancing
，
telling
jokes and playing chess.
注意使用
不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句
或只用长句。
4.
学会
使用过渡词。如
:
①递进
: then(
然后
)
，
besides(
还有
)
，<
/p>
furthermore(
而且
)
，
moreov
er(
此外
)
等。
②转折
: however(
然而
)
，
but(<
/p>
但是
)
，
on the contrary
(
相反
)
，
after all(
毕竟
)
等。
③总结
: finally(
最后
)
，
at la
st(
最后
)
，
in brief(
总之
)
，
in conclusion(
最后
)
等。
④强调
:
indeed(
确实
)
，
certainly(
一定
)
，
surely(
确定
)
，
above all(
尤其
)
等。
⑤对比
: in
the same way(
同样地
)
，
just as(
正如
)
，
on the
one
hand…on the
other hand(<
/p>
一方面
……
另一方面
……)
等。
相似的比较：
similarly,
in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand,
conversely, whereas, while, instead,
nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary,
compared with …,
5.
注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如
:
〔原文〕
A new railway is being
built in my hometown.
〔修正〕
A new
railway is under construction in my
hometown.
6.
避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如
:
〔原文〕
I like reading while my
brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕
I like reading while my
brother enjoys watching television.
I
like reading while watching television appeals to
my brother.
三、
结尾
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1
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All
in all, what really matters is, in fact,
that……
（比如说到和谐社会
All in all,
what really
matters is, in fact, that we should build our
society a harmonious
society.
）
2
、
Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a
conclusion that……
3
、
As
a result , we should take effective measures to do
sth.
（我们必须采取
一些有效的措施来做些什么）
4
、
From what has been discussed above , we
may conclude that ……
5
、
Obv
iously
（此为过渡短语）
, we can draw
the conclusion that good manners
arise
from politeness and respect for others.
四、
一些用法
1
、
陈述个人的观点
It is
alleged that(
据说
)
In my view, both sides are partly
right(
两方面都部分的正确
)
As far as I am
concerned(
就我而言
)
As regards to me
My own
point of view is that……
Personally, I believe that……
My experience
tells me
that……
The invention of the
handset, I dare to say, turns out to be a
tremendous hit.
The application of web
sites, I dare to say, turns out to be a greatly
hit.
It comes as no surprise that
Chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.
2
、
陈述别人的观点
Ot
her individuals, however,
take the attitude that……
（错误的观点）
sb is under the false
belief that……
3
、
图表作文
The table
showsindicates
reveals that
……
（表明、暗示、揭示）
According to the statistics showing in
that graph, we can easliy see
found……
（根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现）
As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed
in the picture
Sales went into a slight
decline=sales declined
slightly(
小幅下降
)
Sales declined
dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely
(
大幅下降
)
A brief
glimpse at our campus (the
picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows
that mobile phone, becoming more and
more prevalent.
五、好的替代
the
machinethe device
代替
computer
handset
代替
cell phone
*The Middle
Kingdom
代替
China
intenselycrucially
important
代替
very
important (it is crucially important that
the benefits of collective be on our
priority.)
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