-
【四
1
】
Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
an
advertisement
on
your campus website to
sell a bicycle
you used at college.
Your advertisement may
include
its
brand,
features,
condition
and
price,
and
your
contact
information.
You
should write at least 120 words but no
more than 180 words.
【范文】
Advertisement(A Second-hand Bicycle for
Sale)
A used
Forever mountain bike is (available) on sale!
Though used, it
’
s still a
fast
and reliable classic bike, for it
is
well maintained and in
good condition (which is)
perfect for any standard of riders
(beginner right through to competitive club
cyclists)
with suitable seat and strong
tires.
The bike
was bought two years ago for 688 yuan, and it is
now sold at only 388
yuan (so it is a
real bargain! Besides, the price is negotiable)!
I want this
bike to be sold as quickly as possible, for I am a
senior student who is
about to graduate
and leave the campus in the near future. Please
feel free to contact
me if you are
interested in this bike. I can be reached at phone
87654321 or by my
e-mail 123@.
[
解析
]<
/p>
:
这篇文章
考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文
-
广告文体
-
在大学校园的网站上
出售自行车的广告。
题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是
“销售二手自行车”
因此
只需要将题干规定的要点
(自行车品牌,
性能,
状况,
价格,
出售者
的联系方式)
有序的组织起来就可以了。
逻辑框架分析:
【分解练习】
段落
句子
内
容
一辆二手山地自行车出售。
逻辑框架模板
开篇点名广告主
第一段
第
1
句
开题
题出售品牌二手
自行车。
第
2
句
p>
虽然是二手的但是保养得好,性能好,仍然是一辆快速
描述题干内容
自
值得信赖的自行车,自行车舒适的座驾和结实的轮胎适
行车性
能。
合任何骑行者。
第二段
第
3
句
自行车是两年前买的,原价
688<
/p>
元,现
388
出售,绝对
交代自行车的出
的物美价廉,价格可以商讨。
售价格。
第三段
第
4
句
我想尽快出售这辆自行车,因为我是大四学生,不久的
可加入题干以外
将来就要毕业离开校园。
的自由句,为了
引起下句
第
5
,
6
如果你对自行车感兴趣的话,请随时联系我,我的联系
点名题干要求的
句
方式是
:87654321
或者邮箱:
e-mail 123@
联系方式。
【四
2
】
Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
an
advertisement
on
your
campus
website
to
sell
some
of
the
course
books
you
used
at
college.
Your
advertisement
may
include
a
brief
description
of
their
content,
their
condition
and
price, and your contact
information. You should write at least 120 words
but no more
than 180 words.
【范文】
Advertisement
(
English Course
Book- on Sale
)
I
’
m
Li Hua, a senior student who is about to graduate
and leave the campus, so
I have three
used course books about English learning to sell
at a fairly low price!
These books could
be
beneficial to anyone who decides to buy them.
First, the
books provide many practical
skills on the following three aspects of English
learning:
how
to
improve
listening,
speaking
and
writing.
Second,
the
books
are
still
well-maintained with
seemingly brand new covers but it is of great use
of my CET4.
Third,
considering
being
used
once,
there
are
some
necessary
notes
on
the
margin.
Therefore
they
are
not
charged
high,
only
10
yuan
for
each
book
and
each
book
contains a delicate
bookmark with the writer
’
s
signature as a souvenir!
If you are interested in my book,
please feel free to contact me if you have any
further
questions.
I
can
be
reached
at
phone
87654321.
I
am
looking
forward
to
hearing from you soon.
[
解析
]<
/p>
:
这篇文章
考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文
-
广告文体
-
在大学校园的网站上
出售大学期间用过的教材的广告
。
题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是
“出售二手
教材”因此只需要将题干规定的要点(教材的内容,状况,价格,出售者的联系
方式)有序的组织起来就可以了。