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Some people believe that become successful
in adult life, it depends on the way parents
bring up their children. Do you agree
or disagree.
Nowadays,
an
increasing
number
of
people
are
concerned
about
children
’
s
future
development.
Success : future
achievements, triump, successful, succeed
Whether children will be
successful
people
depends on
how their parents bring them up is a
heated discussion.
Whether ...... is a heated
debate.
Children
’
s future
success depends on how their parents bring them up
Whether parent
’
s
rearing
method is key to
their descendent
’
s future
achivements caused a
heated
debate.
Parenting method =
parent
’
s rearing method=
parents
’
invovlement
Children, Kids,
descendents,
young generation
, boys and
girls, sons and daughters
My standpoint is that it is really
relevant to the educational methods of their
parents.
Topic sentence:
The way parents delibrately utilized to raise
their children plays a crucial role
Prominent
=significant=important
To begin with,
as the old saying goes, parents are
the
first teachers of their
children, it appeals
the importance of
parents in teaching kids.
Two individual sentences.
run-on sentence,
指两个独立句子之间没有连词。
Gramar mistake
FANBOYS
for,
and, nor, but, or, yet, so--- conjunctions
While I showed
my love for her, she still thinks that I am not a
romantic person.
Dependent
clause
independent clause
Two
independent clauses.
Lin
drove to work, Guy rode his bike.
Modifiers.
修饰语。
Semicolon
;
colon :
Earl walked to school; he
later ate his lunch.
Andrew
and Lisa are inseparable; they do everything
together.
Andrew and Lisa
are inseparable, and therefore we never see them
apart.
I
don
’
t like her; she is a
troublemaker.
I listen to
Earth, Wind & Fire, Wow, Owls, and to Blood, Sweat
& Tears.
A rare but correct use of
semicolon is to seperate items that themselves
contain commas.
It
is
critical
time
of
physical
and
psychological
development
when
sons
and
daughters
are
in
their childhood, parents are their
teachers in life.
It is
crtical to develop Physical and psychological
state of
Parent
s
’
involvement
in
children
’
s
study
and
life
lays
a
solid
fundation
for
their
Physical
and
psychological
development, which exert a far-reaching impact on
sons and daughters
’
future
success.
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