2012专四作文范例讲评

2011

英语专四作文范文（附阅卷老师讲评）

2011

英专四级作文题目

Recently Government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of “posing a

pollution

tax”

on

private

cars.

The

amount

of

tax

private

car

owners

would

have

to

pay

would

depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the

public. Some regard it as an effective way to control the number of cars and reduce pollution in

the city. But others don’t think so. What is your opinion?

Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Should private car owners be taxed for pollution?

范文一：

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Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution?

Recently

the

government

agencies

in

some

big

cities

have

been

studying

the

possibility

of

putting

a

“pollution

tax”

on

private

cars.

This

has

caused

a

great

stir

among

the

public.

Some

people hold the opinion that it is an effective way to control the number of cars and reduce the

amount of pollution in the city,

but others don’t think so.

As far as I’m concerne

d, private car

owners should be properly taxed for pollution.

The following two reasons are used to support my point of view.

On one hand,

as well known

to us,

our surrounding is seriously polluted especially by car pollution. Therefore, “pollution tax”

on private car can effectively remind us of the severely pollution. Then the number of cars and

pollution in the city can be reduced in some way. On the other hand, we know that we are facing

the resource crisis. However, more private cars will use up more gas or other resources. So if we

tax

private

car

owners

for

pollution,

we

can

decrease

the

use

of

resources

and

then

protect

the

environment from pollution indirectly.

In conclusion, I think that private car owners should be properly taxed for pollution. It is not

only for punishment but also for warning. “pollution tax” on private cars is an effective way to

control the number of cars, reduce pollution and protect resources.

From now on, as students, we

should

try

our

best

to

carry

out

it,

such

as

going

somewhere

far

away

by

bus,

or

other

public

transportations.

阅卷专家评论：

1.

审题基本准确；

2.

内容基本切题；

3.

结构不够严谨；

4.

论据缺乏说服力，论述不够充分；

5.

语言一般，不够流畅。

范文二：

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