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大作文
开头段:
开头段结构
Sentence 1:
Background (general statement)
文章的背景(一般的介绍)
Sentence 2: Rephrase the topic (thesis
statement)
改写题目(点名论题)
Sentence 3: Personal opinion or brief
description of the main body
个人立场或者中间主体部分的简单描述
结构一:
单边观点加让步型
(
one
-sided argumentation with
concession
)
I
开头段
:
4~5
句
本
段写背景,大概写
4~5
句话
第一句话:
介绍社会背景
第二句话:衔接句
第三句话:
用自己的话转述原题的观点。
第四句话:给出你自己的观点
第五句话:承接上文,引起下文的句子。
开头套句:
A.
介绍题目背景
1.
随着社会的发展,越来越多的
____
问题引起我们的注意。
Along
with the
development
of
society more and more ____ problems are
brought
to
our
attention.
2.
国际贸易是一个公众感兴趣和关注的话题。
The international trade is
a topic of public interest and concern.
3.
文化和旅游业之间的关系已经在世界范围内引起了广泛关注。
The
relationship
between
culture
and
tourism
has
received
a
great
amount
of
attention
throughout
the world.
4.
最
近几年,关于国家之间贸易活动的争论已经被明显快速扩展的进口激化了。
In
recent
years,
the debate about
trade activities
between countries
has been
fuelled/ intensified by
overtly rapid expansion of
importing
.
5.
教育已经成为一个重要产业,它对社会的重要性无可比拟。
Education has become an important
industry, an industry
that
is second to none
in terms of
importance
to our society.
6.
媒体自由是否应该被限制是一个被激烈争论的话题。支持
者和反对者之间的争论一直没
有平息。
It is bitterly contested/ highly
contentious/ highly
debatable
issue
whether
freedom
of
press
should
be
restricted.
A row between supporters and opponents
remains
unsolved.
7.
英语作为全球语言的发展是
20
世纪末和
20
世纪初最为瞩目的现象之
一。
The development of
English as a global language
is one of
the most remarkable
th
st
phenomena of
the late 20
and 21
century.
8.
最近几年,人们已经对不加控制的汽车尾气排放的严重影
响表示了关注。
People
have,
in
recent
years,
shown
concern
on
the
dire
consequence
of
increased
car
emission.
9.
就市民
个人是否应该获得他们正在享受的医疗保健和教育服务而言,存在很大争议。
There is a big
controversy
surrounding/
over
individual
citizen
’
s entitlement
to the health care and education
service they are enjoying.
10.
先天和后天的争论是心理学领域最经久不衰的话题之一。
The nature vs nurture debate is
one of the most enduring topics in the
field
of
psychology.
11.
在最近几十年里,社会上暴力的不断增加已经引起了公
众的关注。
It
has
raised
public
concern
over
the
past
decades
that
the
violence
in
the
society
is
on the
rise.
12.
随着世纪不断推移,女性权益和女性在当
今社会的角色已经得到更大的重视。
As the
century continues/ progresses, a greater emphasis
has been placed on/
attached
to
women
’
s right
and their role in today
’
s
society.
13.
随着因特网的使用变得普遍,它的优缺点已经成为争论的话题。
With
the
utilization
of
the Internet becoming ever-
present,
its pros
and cons
has
been a subject of discussion/ a
matter for debate.
14.
在这几年里
,没有什么话题可以像围绕动物保护的争论那样吸引如此之多的注意。
No
issue
in
recent
years
has
drawn
as
much
attention
as
the
debate
surrounding
animal
protection.
15.
在过去大约二十年的时间里,贫富之间的差距这一话题
受到无休止的争论。
For the last
twenty years or so, the issue of t
he
divide between
the
rich and
the poor
has been subject to
(noting but) endless dispute.
16.
在一个文明社会里,或许没有什么比接受教育更为重要的了。
There is probably no issue more
important
to a
civil
society
than
the
access to
education.
B.
引入个人观点
。
1.
在我看来,对动物保护的反对意见是基于不正确的事实和
偏见的。
It seems to me
that
the
objection
against
animal
protection
i
s based on incorrect
facts and stereotypes.
2.
我强烈反对减少学校中音乐和体育课程。
I
profoundly/ strongly
disagree with
curtailing music and
sports at school.
3.
妇女有资格从事
所有行业,同时也应该被给予这样的权利。对此我表示赞同。
I
subscribe
to
the
notion
that
female
qualify
to
every
walk
of
life
and
they
should
be granted such
rights.
4.
对于电脑给小孩学业带来的益处,我持很高的评价
/
对此评价很低。
I
have a good/ low opinion
of
the contribution of
the
computer to
children
’
s
schooling.
5.
我认为我们评估国际旅游的益处时,需要考虑很多因素。
It is my view that many factors should
be taken into consideration
when we
evaluate
the
benefits of the
international tourism industry.
6.
从海外进口蔬菜和水果的好处和坏处将在下面进行讨论。
The
pros
and
cons
of
improving
fruits
and
vegetables
from
overseas
will
be
discussed
below.
7.
两个观点都是部分正确。
Both
sides/ arguments are
partly right.
8.
我对这个事情有两方面的看法。
I am
of mixed opinions
about/ on
this matter.
9.
就个人而言,我觉得关于工业化是好还是坏、是福是祸的
争论是不会有结果的。
Personally,
I
think
that
disputes
about
whether
industrialization
is
good
or
bad/
a
boon
or a bane/ a blessing or a curse are
fruitless.
9.
以下是在家工作优缺点的概括性论述。
Following is an outline of advantages
and disadvantages to working at home.
10.
城市扩展的正面和负面影响将在下面进行概括。
Both positive
and
negative effects of urban sprawl will be outlined
below.
11.
这篇文章会具体说明国际合作在环境保护上的优势
和劣势。
This
essay
will
elaborate
on
the
strengths
and
weaknesses
of
international
cooperation in
environmental protection.
12.
这篇短文的目的是描述一些导致水资源短缺的因素。
The
purpose
of
this
essay
is
to
describe
some
factors
accounting
for
water
shortage.
C.
交代写作意图,引起下文的句子
。
1.
There are many instances
supporting my view.
2.
There
are no less than three advantages in
…
.
a
s
rendered below.
3. I
support
this with the following reason.
4.
The following reasons should be taken
into
consideration.
5. This
quite different view
is based on the
propensity
of the following points.
C.
开头段要介绍双方观点
1.
有一些人认为
_____.
p>
但是,还有很多人(强烈地)认为
_____.
Some/ Many/ Most/ A
majority of/ Quite a
few/ A sizable
percentage of people
assert
/
contend/ argue/
hold/
insist/ maintain/
claim/ suggest/ think/ believe/ proclaim/
advocate/
hold the view/ hold the
opinion/ are confident/ are of the opinion/ have
the idea/ point out/
take the view
that____. But/ However/ Nevertheless/ On the other
hand, there are also
some/ many/ most/
a majority of/ quite a few/ a sizable percentage
of people who strongly/
firmly
assert/
contend/
argue/
hold/
insist/
maintain/
claim/
suggest/
think/
believe/
proclaim/ advocate/ hold the view/ hold
the opinion/ are confident/ are of the opinion/
have
the idea/ point out/ take the view
that____
2.
……
.,
while/ but/ whereas others assert/ contend/ argue/
hold/ insist/ maintain/ claim
that_____
3.
……
. But/
However/ Nevertheless/ On the other hand, towards
the same issue, many
others assert/
contend that ____
4.
……
. But/ However/
Nevertheless/ On the other hand, other people
stand on a very
D.
引入个人观点。
1
)直接说自己的观点
1.
In my opinion, ______
2.
As far as I am concerned,
____
3.
As for me, _____
4.
In/ For my part, _____
5.
As I see it, _____
6.
From my own perspective,
_____
7.
Speaking for
myself, _____
8.
I am
convinced that _____
9.
I do
strongly support the idea that _____
10. With views of both sides
considered, I think that ____
2)
说自己同意后一个观点
1. For
my part,
I absolutely/ wholeheartedly/
totally/ completely agree with/ approve
of/
side with the latter
point of view
2.
there
is
probably
a
little
bit
of
truth
in
both
argumetns.
For
my
part,
I
asbolutely/
wholeheartedly/
completely side with the latter one.
3.
taking into consideration both sides of the issue
I tend to favor the latter view.
4. my
opinion is identical with the latter one.
5. from my point of view, I vote for
the latter one.
3
)说自己同意前一个观点
1. for my part, I absoutely argee with/
approve of/ consent to/ am for/ share/ side with
the
former point of view.
2.
personally, I am in favour of the former point of
view.
3. however, in my opinion, I
prefer the idea
that…
4. I fully support the former point of
view.
5. When considering opinions of
both sides, I am inclinded to take sides with the
former.
A.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
交代下文意图:
admittedly, there are merits to both
siders of th argument.
As to whether it
is a blessing or a curse, however, people take
different atteitudes.
both siders of
the question are well supported by sound reasons.
before rendering my opinion, I think it
is important to take a glance at the arguments
on both sides.
people rarely
reach an absoute consensus on such a
controverstial issue
there are
advantages and disadvantaes on both sides
both sides of the argument
have very strong feelings and sound reasons.
This is a controversial issue, which
often arouses heated discussions among people.
主体段
第一段:
全文
第二段:
1~
4
句话
全文第二段写支持自己更倾向
的一方观点的第一个分论点,全段写
5
句话。
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第一句:支持作者倾向观点的分论点一(
top-
sentence
)
第二、三、四句:解释、支持第一个分论点的支持句。
第二段:全文第三段:
1~4
句话
全文第三段写支持自己更倾向的一方观
点的第二个分论点,全段写
5
句话。