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高考英语短文改错题技巧点拨



短文改错常见错误类型



1.


谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点



常见动词错误类型有







一般现在时与一般过去时错用;








and


前后动词时态不一致


;




主谓不一致


;


























缺少动 词


,


特别是


be


动词


;





第三人称单数形式错用


;
















主动语态和被动语态错用。



1




They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my


studies.



did


改为


do


错误类型属于



①)



2





As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.










(visiting


改为



visited


错误类型属于②


)




3




There will an important game next month .(will


后加


be


错误类型属于④


)




4



One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.(




主谓不


一致


)




2.


名词的常见错误






单复数名词错用;注意区分名词是 可数还是不可数;或根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动


词的单复数来判断。

< br>







I‘ll get good marks in


all


my subject.



subject


改为


subjects






Their word


were


a great encouragement to me.



word


改为


words








Without enough knowledges, you can never teach wel l.



knowledges


改为


knowledge





3.


连词错误






连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词


and/ or/but




(一般考查从句关系



who/ wh om/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether





I have a good friend


who‘s


name is Liu Mei. (


错用了


who


的所有格形式改为


whose)



I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.


(

< p>
此处应该是并列的关系而非转折,


but


改为



and)



Clever as she is, but she works very hard.



When I was a child, rain was a mystery. In one class, I learned it rained.




4.


冠词错误






误用


a


和< /p>


an


(根据单词的因素来判定)


;误用< /p>


a



the


( 固定搭配,各自单独使用的地


方)






多余的冠词或则少冠词。




We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a


改为


the



the same


是固定搭配


)




As everyone knows, it‘s






famous mountain with all kinds of pants.




1




< /p>



mountain


是可数名词需用冠词 ,所以加



a





My teacher advised me to keep my dairy.



I hope you have pleasant journey.


5.


形容词和副词错误



1)

< p>
系动词后用形容词(


be/am/is/are/was/were/be come/go/


感官性动词



smell /feel




2)


词性的误用





形容词修饰名词





修饰



实义 动词,


形容词和副词,


过去分词用副词






I‘m sure we‘ll have a


wonderfully time together.




time< /p>


是名词



所以要用形容词


wonderful


修饰)




My pronunciation was terribly.




6.


代词错误






1


)代词的主格和宾格(


I / me; He/him; She/ her; We/ us They/ them




2


)反身 代词(


myself/yourself/himself/herself/them selves/ourselves




3


)代词的单数和复数



4


)多余的代词和少代词





Soon


I


began


to


enjoy


talking


to


myself


on


paper


as


I


was


learning


to


express


me


in


simple English. (express oneself,



me


改为



myself )



One day I wrote a little story and showed





to my teacher. (



it)



If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.




What‘s more , you have t


o be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.


7.


非谓语动词的常见错误



1


)不定式,动名词作主语,宾语。



2



and


连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时)




3


)介词后用动名词


ving


形式作宾语。



4


)某些动词 后要求接动名词或不定式。





Soon


I


began


to


enjoy


talk


to


myself


on


paper


as


I


was….


(enjoy


后需接动名词



talk-- talking)



But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(


作主语



改为



going )



Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.




I


particularly


enjoyed


driving


through


the


countryside


with


you


and


saw


the


changing


colors of the leaves on the trees.


8.


介词错误


1


)词组中的介词误用,


2


)介词 意思理解偏差,


3


)介词的多用或少用




There are too many people among my family.





2






among


改为


in in my family


为固定搭配)




I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.


(去掉



at




短文改错解题思路和检查原则



1


)句中各部分的结构是否完整,特别是每个句子要有动词;



2


)谓语动词的时态、语态;



3


)非谓语动词的用法;


< p>
4


)名词的单、复数,格的使用是否正确;



5


)定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;



6


)代词的格和性的使用是否有误;



7


)定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;



8


)并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词 用的是否得当。



短文改错解题四原则



1


)改动以最少为原则




2


)虚词以添加或删除为原则




3


)实词以改变词形为原则



4


)以保持句子原意为原则




短文改错解题步骤



1


)通读全文,掌握大意




2


)整句分析,逐行推敲

< p>
3


)反复通读,复查验证



解题注意要点和能力培养





核对错项时,

若的确有一时难以改出的地方。


可以参考所改动项是否基本符合

―1126‖


等题型比例。正确


1


个,多一词


1


个,缺词


2


个,错词


6


个。





核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。 因为短文改错往往覆盖面广,一般不会出现重复


考查某个语法点的现象。原文中每行改动 只能改一词,答案也只能是一词。





核对答题符号是否规范,位置是否准确,看看有无遗漏符号,忽略字母大写和拼写


等问题





如有两行都难以找到错误时,与其乱改一行,不如都打


―√‖


以确保一行正确。





从作文入手,提高自身语言运用素质





合作学习,帮批帮改,提高识错、纠错能力





精炼短文改错,抓好写、比、改三步



例题分析



Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who work























1.________


in the same office so they walked together to and from













2.________


office. Some day as they were walking home together it













3.________


sudden started to rain. Tom quickly opened his umbrella












4.________


and said,


预见


) . She said










5.________


on this morning it would rain and told me to carry my














6.________


umbrella with me.












7.________




3



















8.________


carry an umbrella and as she knew you would certainly














9.________


have with you.



















































10.________



首先



通读全文,掌握大意



此文讲述的是邻居


Tom



Dick


的故事。



1.



整句分析,逐行推敲






第二遍阅读后



容易改出的题有



1.2.4.6.10





然后先看前


6





3




翻译整句为:


有一天当他们一起走路回家时天突然开始下雨





Some day


不能表示有一天,属于固定搭配中修饰词有误。






5


项,由于对


foresight


的意思和用 法不清楚,


不能轻易改动。暂放一边






现在看


7



10


项。第


7




翻译意思:


Dick


笑了笑并且走向 他(


Tom



,说到

< br>…..


,翻


译后很容易可以看出


said


前有一个逗号,


and


连接的动词只有


smiled




walked

。说


明此处有错。






8


题,又出现了


foresight


。现在来 比较第


5


项和第


8

项的两个句子。



1



My wife surely has foresight (


预见


)


我的妻子肯定地作出了预见





Tom‘s wife




2



My wife has even great foresight





我的妻子作出了更大的预见




(Dick‘s wife)



比较两句后



可以判断这里的


foresight


不是一个动词而是一个不可数名词。可以判定


great


有错。并可以反推第


5

< p>
项应该没有错误。


(Dick


的妻子说的话明显 有比较的含义


并且这样才能突出文章的幽默感


)





9


项理清句子结构后,可以看出有一词是多余的。




总结错误考查点有



1.


名词单复数


2.


时态



3.


固定搭配



4



词性


5.


多余的介词和连接词



6.


非谓语



7.


形容词的


比较级



8.


少了代词。



题型比例



1


个正确,缺词


1


个,多词


2

< p>
个,错词


6




(



)


Most families in China hoped their single children will











76



_______


have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children.



77



_______


So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much








78



_______


homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports.








79



_______


The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No








80



_______


wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even











81



_______


attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people




82



_______


already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines.








83



_______


Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our














84



_______


government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85



_______































































(二)





4





Nowadays, almost every family has TV set, and almost















76



_______


everyone likes watching TV. TV has become part of our lives.







77



_______


TV has many advantages, for example, it informs us the













78



_______


latest news which is happening in the world; it can open our







79



_______


eyes, enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more











80



_______


about the world




But, it also has some disadvantages. People






81



______


waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life













82



_______


and work are affected




To the children who they spend too









83



_______


much time in watching TV, it can do harmful to their sight









84



_______


and healthy. So we should control the time of watching TV.









85



_______

































(三)



A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took











76._______


part in a college course in French. Since I have learned











77._______


to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be















78._______


interested to begin studying another language. At the














79._______


first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation












80._______


exercise in it he would say a word or two in French, and











81._______


each student would do their best to copy. When he got to











82._______


me, he kept having me to say more words, and I





















83._______


finally asked him why.








84._______


it.








85._______


I've heard an American speak French with a German accent.






























(四)









The Huaihe River has been serious polluted. Day and night











76.______


millions of tons of waste water is being poured down to it from






77.______



hundreds of factories. The waste water is harmful. At present







78.______



there is no fish in it. The river water cannot be drunk. People in



79.______



either bank have to dig wells to take drinking water. The Huaihe





80.______



River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare swim








81.______




in it. Something must be done to stopping the pollution. The










82.______



government and the people near the river must try to clear water






83.______


as soon as possible. Now special attention has paid to the












84.______



pollution by the government and more scientists. The pollution








85.______



will be prevented in the near future.




(五)



Dear Abby,


How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.












76._______


I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my





77._______




5





further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam









78._______


for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However,




79._______


my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me








80._______


going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me



81._______


for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They





82._______


can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study




83._______


in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with




84._______


them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?




85._______


Best wishes,
























































Jane







































(



)




76. hoped→hope 77. in→with 78. do→are 79. have


前加


to 80.


去掉第二个


to 81. √







82. his



→their




83. already


前加


have 84. lesson


前加


a 85. making→carrying



(二)



76. has


后加


a 77. lives→life




78. us


后加


of





79. which→that



80. √ 81. But→However





82. his→their





83.


去掉


they


84. harmful→harm 85. healthy→health



(三)



76. returning


后加


to 77. have→had 78. say→speak 79. interested→interesting



80. √ 81. it→which 82. their→his 83.


去掉


to




84. she→he 85.


去掉


it



(四)



76. serious→seriously



77. to→into




78. √ 79. in→on



80. take→get 81. such→so 82. stopping→stop 83. water


前加


the



84. paid


前加


been 85.


去掉


more


(五)


76.


去掉


a 77. have


后加


been




78. exam→exams




79. was→were



80. strong→strongly




81. too→so 82.


去掉


of 83. live→living



84. √ 85. fact


后加


that












6





199 7-2010


高考英语短文改错题汇编



1



NMET 1997




Dear Bob,


Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher,



Miss Fang. I‘d like to your penfriend, and get to



know more about your country.



First, let me tell you something more about myself.


My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the



capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We


study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese,



English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot


in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.


Do you play any ball games? What your favorite


sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.



Yours,


Li Hua



2



NMET 1998




My Favorite Sport


My favorite sport is football. I was a member of



our school football team. We practise for three times


every week and often watch football match on TV



together. Play football not only makes us grow



tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and



team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play


for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport



teaches us the important of obedience (


服从


). Each


player must obey captain, who is the leader of



the team. And they must not break the rules too



often if we want to win the game.


3



NMET 1999




The Problem with Television


Now I can‘t watch much television but a few years



ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often



a little tired after a day‘s work and watch TV



demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are



too many people among my family. Some wanted





7




1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________


9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________


9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________





to see the programme while others preferred



another. I am happy with any programme but



the others spent a lot time arguing and there



was no way of settling the matter except by



selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead.



4



2000


春季)




Dear Peter,


Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday



party on Sunday. I‘d like very much c


ome but



had an examination on Monday morning. It is



a very important exam but I can‘t afford to



fail it. I‘ll spend all the whole weekend reading



and prepare for it. So I‘m really sorry that I



won‘t be able to come in this time. Hope you



can understand. I‘ll take this chance to wish



you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy



birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!


Yours,


Li Ming


5



NMET 2000




The day before the speech contest (


比赛


) English teacher


talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all



wished me success, but it didn‘t matter that I would



win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt



so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many



people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English



teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at



me. I remembered her words and calm down.



I did a good job and won the first prize.



Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.


Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.


6



2001


春季)




I used to love science class



all of them




biology, chemistry, geography, physics. I think I



liked those classes because I felt that it helped me



understand what the world works. For example, when


I was a child, the rain was a mystery (


奥秘


). In one


class, I learned it rained. I think science classes



clear up mysteries. But then there is always more



mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class?





8




6. __________


7. __________


8. __________


9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________


9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________


9. __________



10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________





That was maths. After learn the basics of the subject,



nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never



saw how I could use it in my daily life.


7



NMET 2001





Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers



nor sisters



in any other words, I am an only child.



My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can



make sure that I get a good education. They did not want



me to do any work at family; they want me to



devote all my time to my studies so that



I‘ll get good marks in all my subject.



We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do


not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks


as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they



really understand their own daughter? What things are in



other homes, I wonder.


8



2002


春季)




My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.


He did not want share things with other people. For



example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them



in a secret place where I couldn‘t find it. Then he



ate it all by himself. He never helped other.



He said he is busy. That is, a game of



tennis making him very busy. He did not care



if something he did made people angry. For



instance, on one night he played strong and



loudly


music till four o‘clock in the morning. But



he is difference now. He often helps grandma



with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his


classmates with their lessons.


9



NMET 2002





Last week my parents and I took a two- day trip to Emei


Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it‘s famous



mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather


was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of



the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we



climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples



and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture



since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.


Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at




9




9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________


9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________


9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


4. __________


5. __________


6. __________


7. __________


8. __________



the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and



the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep


at the moment my head touched the pillow.


10



2002


北京卷)




What should you do when your parents become


angry? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation


with them about it. Remembering not to shout



at them. They usually will try to change, but they will



take some time because they get angry all their life, and that



is all they know. You might have to change for your


method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your


parents that they don‘t expect—


like cooking,



doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean



the floors. If this doesn‘t work, bring in friend that you



feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.


11



2003


春季)




Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young


people. According to studies, any children spend more time



watching television than they spend in school. Because so



much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of


read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries



much about the radio program young people listen to,



although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder



about the effects of television commercials. On one year the



average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all



planed and written by grown-ups to make children to want


things that they don‘t real need.



12



NMET 2003





When I first learned to write in English, I ran into



many difficulties. The main problem was in that I



always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything



into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary.



I followed her advice and should put down 100 words



or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on



paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.



One day I wrote a little story and showed to my



teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class.



They all said the story was a good one. Their word were



a great encouragement to me.




10




9. __________


10. __________


1. __________


2. __________


3. __________


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13



NMET 2004





Dear Ralph,


I‘m a newcomer here of a small town. I would



describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates,



it seems always difficult for me to do things well as


them. I‘m sure they will laugh to me and see me as



a fool. So I feel unhappy every day.



Besides, I have few friends. I don‘t know that they



don‘t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other



very well in class, but after class we become stranger at



once. I am trying to im


prove the situation since it doesn‘t



seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?



Yours,


Xiao Wei



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2004


广西卷)




You can find all kinds information in just





a few minute on the Internet. It‘s like g


oing to a


huge library without have to walk around to find


your books. Recently even though, many people


have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.


They have been reports in America about people


trying to steal person information for bad purposes.


Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all


information are good to society. For example, you


can find such information like how to kill people.


The problem will become more serious in the future.



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20 04


重庆卷)



During the summer of 2001, I started reading books


in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new






words from these books, but I had terribly problems






memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word







many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized





I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was





a great achievement for myself. I started writing down






words from books that I read. I would come back from






school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down







new words and added it to my collection. By the end








of last year



my collection has grown to 3,000 words.





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浙江卷)


Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a












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hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year


more and more people start a stamp collection of your own


and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting


your collection of stamps are easy became they are everywhere.


Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters


from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over


the world. So once you‘ve started collecting seriously, you



will probably want to join in the Stamp Col


lectors‘ Club



which exist to add more stamps to your collection.


17



20 04


辽宁卷)



It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much









I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my






first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my









poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for







me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew




that everything would be all right. There are many more happy








memories of the week that I will keep with me forever. I particularly




enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the









changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the







fishing trip. It was such much fun.


18



2004


江苏卷)



This is a story told by my father: ―When I was boy,














the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring












Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world















but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just












couldn‘t wait for th


e Spring Festival dinner. As I was
















about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in













the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ? It














isn't a good time to d


o that, dear.‘ At once I apologize
















and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You














know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.‖












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2004


湖 南卷)



When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing


in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied


at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.


I went through the test for many times but I could only answer


three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail


the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it




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and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't


looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand


on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't


know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for


cheating but instead gave me a second chance.


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2004


广东卷)



Though great progress has been made in science these years, there



are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives




by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school



because they have not enough money to send their children to there.


Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?


The answer lies on the population explosion. A president



o


f a developing country once said; ―It is us who are to blame for






the poverty because we used to ?produce‘ child without limit.‖








Although this few words sound simple enough, they have












clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.


21



2004


福建卷)

< p>


I have a good friend who‘s name is Liu Mei. She is our



monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.


Clever as she is, but she words very hard. We have a




lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she


told me that something happened when her parents was out.


She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when


she smelt something burning. She stopped look out



of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out



of her neighbor‘s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten



minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor


was very thankful for her help.


22


2004


湖北)



I often dream of a teacher, I dream of standing on the



platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys



and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them



growing up. I am always young when I was staying



with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You



have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledge,


you can never learn well. What is more, you have to



be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.


Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win



respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will



work as very hard to make my dream come true.




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2004


全国


2







On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself


do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip


to London, and visit the British Museum and some


parks. But I have spent lost my money, so I cannot


even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert.


Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your


stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a


concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have


some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen


to my own records, there are no need to spend money.


All right. That' s what I' m going to do.


24



2004


天津卷)



I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet. I was then


in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left home



at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We








had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However,



we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life.



At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool


or go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat



each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of us had any


difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.



It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories


are as sweet as ever before.



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NMET 2005.1-2





There are advantage for students to work while



studying at school. One of them was that



they can earn money. For the most part,



students working to earn money for their own



use. Earning their own money allow them



to spend on anything as if they please.



They would have to ask their parents for



money or for permission to do things by



the money. Some students may also to save



up for our college or future use.



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2005


浙江卷)




At first I was not quite willing to sit down and



watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just



checked the results because I thought that was dull



to watch a game in which players kicked a ball each





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other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the



World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch



his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this



game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down



to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my



dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football



is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!

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27



2005


重庆卷)




It is bad manners in the classroom to look for what our



neighbor had written, or try to see what mark he has received



without being permitted. It is good manners for them to help



each other if we have the same desire and the teacher allows to it.



In examinations and in certain kinds of written work, it is dishonest



and foolishly to help or to ask help from others. When one student



does so, much larger values are destroying. One may not agree



to examination system, but at present it is basically the only



measure that the teacher and the rest of the world can depend to



decide if or not each of us meets the requirement.



28



2005


湖北卷)




Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over



the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since



long ago, many adults and children called their friends together



to spend hours, even days play games. One of the reasons people



like to play is that sports help them to live happily. In other words,



they help to keep people strong and feel good. When people are



playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities


for their health. Having fun with their friends make them happy.



many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American



big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.


29



2005


天津卷)



When I was four years old I got ill. I took medicine twice



a day. The medicine had so a bitter taste that I took it mixed in



orange juice. The problem was that I can still taste the medicine.



In a particular afternoon my mother brought the drink in. As


she gave it to me, when the phone rang and she went to answer



it. I looked at the orange drink and decided I couldn‘t face them,



so I hid the glass behind a pile magazines. Of course, when


my moth


er was asked, ― Have you already taken your medicine ? ‖



I said, ―Yes.‖ I felt very pleased with me. The next day, my



mother found drink when she was doing the housework. She











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looked at me serious and


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20 05


全国卷Ⅲ




Dear Mr. Brown,


I am writing to thank you with your kind help.



Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in



English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could






only speak a few words. But one and a half year later.



I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your




encouraging words. I will always remember what you


said, ―If you try to, you can be No. 1!‖ I hope you‘ve



had pleasant journey home and will come to China




again sometimes in the future. I will write again




and send you the photos we take together.



Yours sincerely,


Li Min


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2005


辽宁卷)



I was a high school student then, from low-income



family. So I have to work to support my family. My



first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant.



I still remember going there early and felt anxious about


the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of



losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do



my homework. And I came to understand that was not


easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change


my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard


way, was much more important as what I earned.


32



2005


江西卷)



My car just wouldn‘t move any further. It was c


omplete









dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold,




wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting I‘d



have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a












telephone. Actually, I didn‘t have to walk far before I













found a small house standing on a field with a light


shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and


was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the








door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had









no telephone, and it wasn‘t one within walking distance,





but offered to come and look at my car.



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江苏卷)

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My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named him




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Jack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us












in a tree outside our bedroom, calling












bed in a morning. He also passed




they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself.


We'd throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away














and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch














the food throwing to him from the other side of the room and












sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack














were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we














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would return at night to hear that he'd picked up from the














radio in the day.


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2005


福建卷)



Dear friends,


It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.


We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the


English Club, Although we have been members for a short


period of time, we have made a great progress. That is


because we are all very much active and the activities are not



only enjoyable and also helpful, Besides, the foreign teachers



here work hard and try his best to make the activities


lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of


us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am



looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!



Thank you.


35



2005


安徽卷)



Henry Royce did not like his ear, that ran badly and often



broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself,
















and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Roils,











a car maker, was very interested in Royce‘s car, but soon














Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first











model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the










world's record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down











once. After the drive, it was cost just over



2 to put the car











back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver


Ghost was regarded











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2006


全 国卷


1





We had guests last night who have not stayed



in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast



because that they were going out early in the



morning. They came back lately and had some





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tea. I came into the living room and saw one of



them just go through the kitchen door but turn



on the light. He was looking for a glass the



cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was



not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought,



―What can I do? We are guests after all.‖



37



2006


全国卷


2





An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea



between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High



over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The



hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the



balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was



coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into


the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise



higher again. So it was still too close to the water.



Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to



save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in



England was very surprised see this when the balloon



landed in front of them.


38



2006


山 东卷)




Dear Ming,


It was very nice to hear from you for such a long time. I‘m



glad to learn that you‘ve been settled down in Boston and are



getting used to the local ways of life.



As you know, I‘m still buried in books at school you are



so familiar with. What may surprise you are that I‘m going to



the US this July in a summer camp! Surely I‘m expec


ting lots



of sightseeing tours, parties and another exciting things. We must


definitely meet when I‘m over. As is planning, I‘m coming



to Boston around the 15th, and I wonder if you‘ll free then so



we could chat about the good older days.



Hope to see you soon.


Yours,


Xiao Lei


39


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2006


安徽卷)




There is a public library in every town in Britain. Anyone



can borrow books if he or she wish. In some places you


may borrow as more books as you need, but in others



you are limited in a certain number of books. You may



keep the books for several weeks so as you can have





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enough time to finish it. If the book you want is out



you may ask it to be kept for you. Most public libraries



also have a reading-room, that you can sit at the desk



and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other



books, but you are not permit to take them out.



40



2006


浙江卷)




Dear Mr. Donforth,


I‘m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I‘ve



heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we



have been learning about it‘s rich cultur


e and long history.



Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to



know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have



learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal



experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can



help the whole class. Could you share you experiences for



us? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you



think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly.



41



20 06


重庆卷)



My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are






kind and polite. With coming of spring, grass and






trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors.




In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more




beautiful. After autumn arrives, the city looks as an




old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter,








a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I can








wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long









time. While they find fish come to the surface, they








fly down immediate and catch them without delay.


That is my city, and I love it so much.




42

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2006


四川卷)



When our six children were young



suppertime is always


being interrupted by neighborhood children ring the bell.


They wanted one child or another to come out and played.


Finally we had good idea. We hung a sign on the front


door that was read: ―We‘re having dinner. Come back



later.‖ That night, we sat down to what they thought would



be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals. But as soon as we


began dinner, the doorbell rang. On the front door stood a


five-year-old boy from across the street. He looked up


at us and said, ―I just want to know what the sign say.‖





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2006


陕西)



Dear Anish,






Here are the information about Manchester University. __________


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It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it

















has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school














or near the school. They have all sorts of course. __________







I‘m sure you will find one you like it. I know you


















are particular interestes in Human Rights. So I will

















see that there is anything on their website(


网址


).



















I‘ll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport


















when you arrived. You mat him a few years ago, but he














has changed a lot since them, Both your aunt or look
















forward to seeing you again.



























See you soon.


Pat



44



2006


年江西)



I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from








you. I'm glad you have made such a great progress













that you can write your e-mail good Chinese. I read












your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you








sent it to me. How rime flies! Our friendship has lasted











for several months. We have got to know but learned a










lot from each other. Yes, it is clearly that your life in










your country is quite different from me. Thanks again











for writing to me. I'm looking forward to hear from











you soon. Best wishes to you and your family. __________





45< /p>



2006


广东卷)


When a young man starts to earn his own living, he


can no longer expect others to pay his food, his clothes,






or his room, but he has to work till he wants to live









comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing









about in the way that he used to as a child, they will go







hungry. And if he breaks the laws of society that he used







to break the laws of his parents, he may go to the prison.



If, therefore, he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has









better health, he can have the great happiness of seeing










himself to make steady progress in his job and of












building up for himself his own position in society.





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46



20 06


福建省)



Dear John.


Last summer I take a part-time job in the international





Camp for children. I have been told one more worker





will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How










about join as? The camp is al the foot of a small hill










close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear









birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in








tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five







hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the




area and have a fun, I am sure it will be an unforgettable




experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.




































Yours,


Li Ping


47



2006


天津)


I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of





camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After



that, you always gave me specially attention and inspired


to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know


the other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer,


my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back


to school as new person. My grades improved. I became


very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that



said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. I just


want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.












Yours,










































Bob



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Many students feel that a popular teacher must be kind


and easy going. He and should make the class very


active for joking with the students. However, the popular


teacher is at same time the one who should be strict with


students. Last year, my English teacher proved to be the move


popular in our school. She was usual patient with her students


and never made them disappointed. She always stays in full


control of the situations. She always made sure that our


homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly


on


student‘s actual performance.





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