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高中英语新高考
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英语作文：百万作文批改结果
告诉你——作文和词汇怎么提
高？
具体说明错误
1.
搭配错误
英语中有很多使用上的固定搭配用法，正确使用词汇搭配成为
学习的
难点，对于英语写作尤其重要。搭配错误率存在高，多是由于学生逐
字翻译而导致的。
当学生需要用某个单词来表达，
但
一时想不到该词，
于是就错误地用一个近义词，甚至自己造一个词来代替。这样就会出<
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现中式英语、用法不地道的问题。比如，当学习者想要说
set
off
fireworks
而又没想到
set off
时，他们就会用
play
fireworks
。
语言实例：
By reading
books, people can learn knowledge that the people
in the past create.
搭配
learn
knowledge
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。
来源：王同学
广东
Reading
on
a
people
growth
and
the
study
has
an
important
impact.
请检查
a people
growth
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：施同学
广东
As James Cameron put it, imagination
feeds exploration.
搭配
feed
exploration
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。
来源：郑同学
福建
We are able to better grasp the
theoretical knowledge through
practice.
搭配
grasp
knowledge
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。
来源：褚同学
湖南
Read more books, can let you feel that
there are a lot of writing
inspiration.
搭配
write
inspiration
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。
来源：卞同学
山东
Roaming in the ocean of the book is
also a happy thing.
请检查
the ocean of
the book
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：丁同学
陕西
Reading
can
not
only
increase
knowledge
but
also
can
purify
the human's mind.
表达不规范，
increase knowledge
在本族语中很少使用，
建议修改。
来源：罗同学
四川
However,
unless
it
is
applied
to
real
experiences,
book
knowledge remains
theoretical.
搭配不当
, book knowledge
本族语语料库中无此用法。
来源：李同学
山东
Secondly,
as
for
a
student
we
can
rich
in
knowledge
from
reading a large number of
books.
搭配不当，
can
rich in
不规范，建议修改。
来源：曹同学
吉林
We
can
growth
much
knowledge
which
we
do
not
achieve
in
classes.
请检查
growth much
knowledge
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：李同学
贵州
So, I used to soak the
library.
搭配
soak library
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。
来源：王同学
湖北
With
time
comes
a
broad
noble
mind,
a
shining
pearl
among
the
mass.
请检查
a broad noble
mind
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：英同学
江西
Book
is
a
source
of
human
wisdom,
the
ladder
of
human
progress and the spirit food of
human.
请检查
the spirit
food
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：谷同学
河北
However,
unless
it
is
applied
to
real
experiences,
book
knowledge remains theoretical and, in
the end, is useless.
搭配不当，
book knowledge
本族语语料库中无此用法。
来源：姚同学
江苏
There is old saying read is a critical
part of learning and growth.
请检查
old saying
read
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：金同学
河北
Life in the future I will be careful to
read books to increase my
knowledge
and
ready
to
help
people
in
life
I
think
reading
is
important in the whole life for
people.
表达不规范，
increase knowledge
在本族语中很少使用，
建议修改。
来源：缪同学
江苏
It is can become some possible
development.
确认
become development
搭配正确。
来源：边同学
北京
As we all know, read millions of books,
travel millions miles.
请检查
travel
millions miles
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：黄同学
四川
It will take them to the right life way
in the beginning.
请检查
the right
life way
，本族语中很少使用。
来源：汪同学
江苏
I began to contact book, because I have
a precocious sister.
搭配
contact book
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语。
来源：王同学
北京
2.
词性误用
说明：所谓词性误用情况，就是学生在使用单词的过程中，没有考虑
单词的词性和词法功
能，单纯从词义对照的角度出发来运用单词，从
而出现的错误现象。从学生的作文情况来
看，词性误用现象非常之普
遍，误用的形式也多种多样。
语言实例：
But
meanwhile,
doing
is
also
the
basic
of
things,
as
the
old
saying goes
makes
perfect
请检查
basic
，形容词误用。
来源：赵同学
广东
I think this is the charming of
reading.
请检查
charming
，形容词误用。
来源：王同学
山东
The effects that reading makes would
benefit to our life and we
can't learn
these in practical.
in
practical
疑似词性误用。
来源：张同学
陕西
We need both of this two.
请检查
this two
名词词组。
来源：蒲同学
陕西
We all know that reading can broad our
horizons.
broad
疑似词性误用。
来源：莫同学
四川
However,
in
recently
years,
we
have
been
taught
the
importance of practice.
recently
疑似词性误用。
来源：娜同学
湖北
Nutrient
from
books
is
a
kind
of
nourishment
for
the
mind
which
make him break away from the dirty in the real
life.
请检查
dirty
，形容词误用。
来源：梁同学
广东
I
believe
the
knowledge
books
have
more
powerful
than
I
imagine.
powerful
疑似词性误用
来源：铁同学
广东
Reading makes us rich in
spiritual.
spiritual
疑似词性误用。
来源：文同学
湖北
Besides, we will find more joyful from
books.
joyful
疑似词性误用。
来源：党同学
广西
You will never know the beautiful of
the world just from book,
you should
watch it with you own eyes.
请检查
beautiful
，形容词误用。
来源：杨同学
江苏