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2017
高考英语作文:
< br>你是××中学的××,
你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动,
已在校园网发布方案,
征求师生
的修改意见。你需要写一封邮
件,包含以下两点:
1.
提出你觉得需要改进的地方;
2.
需要改进的原因。
主题
时间
路线
发现上海
5
月
1
日(周日)下午
3
点
从人民广场经过南京路到外滩(
the
Bund
)
,全程徒步,之后再徒步原路
返回人民广场。
Dear
Sir/Madam,
I’m
really
excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to
be held near the Bund on the Labor
Day
holiday.
However,
there
may
be
further
improvement
of
the
scheme
you
’
ve
posted
on
the
campus website, as
I
’
d like to point out.
First of all
, the hike needs
to be planned in more detail as the information
released online
appears to be too
general. As participants, we need to know how long
the hike will last.
Also
, we
are willing to have a clearer picture
of security precautions and necessary medical
support for the
activity.
After
all
,
the
scheme
should
be
comprehensive
and
thoughtful
enough
to
ensure
the
success
of
the
activity.
Only
by
clarifying
these
details,
are
you
likely
to
attract
more
attention
from
the
students.
What
’
s
more
,
I
suggest
the
hike
be
more
suited
to
the
theme
“
Discover
Shanghai
”
through
additional activities. Upon arrival at the Bund, I
propose an introduction of the
architecture
on
both
sides
of
the
Huangpu
River.
By
appreciating
different
artistic
styles
of
the
buildings,
we
can
gain
a
deeper
insight
into
the
authentic
Shanghai
culture
mixed
with
exotic
flavor.
Thus
, the
experience may well be unforgettable one, because
it
not only
makes us move,
but also
enables us to
discover the scenic beauty of Shanghai, which will
well achieve the purpose
of organizing
the activity.
All in all
, if
the hike is organized in more detail and in a more
supportive way, it is sure to
succeed.
I hope that my
voice above can be heard
and considered and wish the activity a great
success.
Yours sincerely
Wang Lei
2016
高考英语作文:
假设你是中华中学学生姚平,
最近参与了一项研究性学习调研,
课题为
“父母是否以子女为
荣”
。通过调研你校学生及其父母,结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异(数据如图所示)
< br>。
根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,你必须:
1.
描述调研数据;
2.
分析可能导致这一结果的原因。
Recently I have
conducted a survey about
“whether
parents are proud
of their children
” in
my
school. The result shows that 80% of parents are
proud of their children
while
only 60% of
children
hold
the
same
opinion.
According
to
the
survey
,
we
can
conclude
that
the
number
of
parents who approved the idea is 20%
more than of children.
There seems to
be two causes as we tried to figure out what led
to this subtle difference.
First
,
conservative
Chinese
parents
are
never
accustomed
to
conveying
directly
how
much
they
are
proud of their children.
This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps
children develop a strong
sense of
self-confidence.
Second
, the
current education system excessively emphasizes
the value
of
academic
performance,
thus
forcing
children
to
extensively
believe
that
only
by
achieving
excellent scores can they make their
parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the
significance
of
talents
for
art
and
sports,
which
easily
frustrates
children
and
renders
them
more
likely
to
underestimate themselves.
Without
the
genuine
encouragement
from
parents
and
the
reversal
of
exam-oriented
educational
methods, a kid would never end up with a positive
grown-up.
2015
高考英语作文:
学校即将举办“读书节”
,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是
该校学生潘
阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,
推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括
以下内容:
1.
简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2.
阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
Dear Sir/Madam,
On
hearing
the
news
that
the
annual
Campus
Reading
Festival
is
to
be
held
and
an
advertising
picture
for
the
brochure
is
open
to
be
recommended,
I
can’t
wait
to
write
to
you,
offering
my humble opinion. The picture that I want to
recommend features three students sitting
around a table, reading and discussing
pleasantly. From the big smile on their faces, we
can tell
that they are having great
fun.
In the first place
, the
picture will catch the readers’ eye. Any student
who sees the picture
will wonder what
the three students are discussing about
passionately.
What’s
more
, the picture
demonstrates what the festival is
about. The festival aims to create a platform
where students can
enjoy the pleasure
of sharing opinions about what they have read with
peers, which will further
their
understanding. The value of reading lies
not only
in enriching
o
ur individual’s knowledge
but also
in inspiring the
minds of the youth to share their innermost
feelings. Just as the saying
goes, “Two
heads are better than one”
, I believe
group reading or discussing is beneficial.
To sum up
, the picture will
surely remind the students of the pleasure of
reading arouse their
passion for
reading. I sincerely hope that this picture will
soon appear in the brochure, spreading
the idea to my peer schoolmates during
the reading festival.
Yours sincerely
Pan Yang