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读后续写素材积累
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2019.10.16
一、环境描写的素材
环境描写分为客
观和主观两种角度
:
客观为从环境事物本身入手
,
主观则从观察者
角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替
进行
,
主观描写比重稍大。
客观环境描写
:
Part 1
p>
环境描写的
adj
要求
:
有声
,
有色
,
有质感
,
有味道
the blue
sky(
蓝天
)the songs of
birds(
鸟鸣
)the thundering
clouds(
电光闪雷鸣
)
the
fragile flowers (
娇嫩的花
);(the
dark, raining evening
雨夜交加的夜晚
)the green
grass(
青草
) the
fragrant roses(
艳丽的玫瑰
); the
setting/rising sun(
落日
/
冉冉升起的
太阳
)…
Part 2
环境描写的
verb
(vi&vt)
要求
一
).Wind
(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)
1.A gust of
wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the
weeping willow like a
curtain,…
< br>一阵风吹
,
吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条
,
就像卷起的窗帘。
wind,
soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and
stirred the bushes that
sprinkled the s
lope.
风
,
轻柔却寒冷
,
轻点着树枝
,
搅动着斜
坡下的灌木丛。
3.A cool breeze blew
through the quiet
park.
凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.
(
冷风吹拂过我的头发
)
The
wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just
hard enough to give some lift.
(
今日正是放风筝的好天气
,
强劲的风力带动了风筝的上
升。
)
二
).Water
(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)
声音
: one point, the faint
sound of water tumbling through the valley.
在某处
,
潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
颜色
water
was
deep
blue
and
sunlight
glittered
on
its
looking
glass-clear
< br>surface.
水是深蓝色的
,
阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。
3.A little
way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling
along between green bank.
离此不远
,
有一条小溪
,
在绿色的河岸间奔
腾闪耀。
4. It murmured in a
soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered
to her loving mother.
似乎它在温柔低语
,
就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。
(act
ion, sound,
colour)
三
).Sky (stand/ appear/turn)
sky was a curdled gray burdened with
lumps of clouds.
天空是浓浓的灰色
,
p>
伴着拥挤的朵朵云
skies
stood tall and far
蓝蓝的天空高高耸立
主观环境描写
:
found
sth adj/doing/done
某人发现某物
(
状态
/
动作
/
被
)...
saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done
某人看
到
/
听到
/
感
到
/
闻到某物
(
状态
/
动
作
/
被
)
was so adj
that we find/feel
它是如此
....
p>
以至于
kept sb spellb
ound/amazed/
景物使我如此陶醉
/
惊讶
/
sth held sb entirely
in their power
景物让我完全惊呆了
looked/seemed/appeared/felt
like …
景物看起来像
…
二、场景描写的素材
(
来自原著
:
追风筝的人
)
1.
At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky,
like paper sharks roaming for prey.
Within an hour, the number doubled, and
red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun
in the sky. A cold breeze wafted
through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite
flying,
blowing just hard enough to
give some lift, make the sweeps easier.
(
放风筝的场景描写
,
从各个角度<
/p>
,
立体描述
)
空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝
,
如同纸制的鲨鱼
,
巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头
,
< br>这个数字翻了一番
,
红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹
来回飞舞
,
熠熠生辉。寒
冷的微风吹过
我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝
,
风速不大
,
恰好能让风筝飘浮起来
,
也
便于操控。
water was a
deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking
glass-clear surface.
湖水澄蓝
,
p>
波平如镜
,
阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。
3. Then I glanced up and saw a
pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring
in the sky.
They danced high above the
trees on the west end of the park, over the
windmills,
floating side by side like a
pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the
city I now
call home.
(
场景、比喻
)
我抬起头
,
望见两只红色的风筝
,
带着长长的蓝色尾巴
,
在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞
动着
,
飞越公园西边的树林
,
飞越风车
,
并排飘浮着
,
如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山
,
这
个我现在当成家园的城市。
4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the
sun l ike a branding iron searing the back of your
neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped
stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws
stirred dust when they sputtered
by.(
场景、比喻
)
天空一碧如洗
,
阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂
p>
,
到了夏
天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过
,
扬起阵阵灰尘。
5.
Somewhere,
a
branch
snapped,
an
owl
hooted.
The
wind,
soft
and
cold,
clicked
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