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2019.10.16
一、环境描写的素材
环境描写分为客
观和主观两种角度
:
客观为从环境事物本身入手
,
主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行
,
主
观描写比重稍大。
客观环境描写
:
Part 1
环境描写的
adj
要求
:
有声
,
有色
,
有质感
,
有味道
the blue
sky(
蓝天
)the songs of
birds(
鸟鸣
)the thundering
clouds(
电光闪雷鸣
)
the
fragile
flowers
(
娇嫩的花
);(the
dark,
raining
evening
雨夜交加的夜晚
)the
green
grass(
青草
)
the
fragrant
roses(
艳丽的玫瑰
);
the setting/rising sun(
落日
/
冉冉升起的太阳
)…
Part 2
环境描写的
verb
(vi&vt)
要求
一
).Wind
(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)
1.A gust of
wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the
weeping willow like a curtain,…
一阵风吹
,
吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条
,
就
像卷起的窗帘。
wind,
soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and
stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.
风
,
轻柔却寒冷
,
轻点着树枝
,
搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。
3.A cool breeze blew through
the quiet
park.
凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.
(
冷风吹拂过我的头发
)
The
wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just
hard enough to give some lift.
(
今日正是放风筝的好天气
,
强劲的风力带动了风筝的上
升。
)
二
).Water
(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)
声音
: one point, the faint
sound of water tumbling through the valley.
在某处
,
潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
颜色
water was deep blue
and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear
surface.
水是深蓝色的
,
阳光
在透明的玻璃表面闪闪
发光。
3.A
little way off was a small brook, rushing and
sparkling along between green bank.
离此不
远
,
有一条小溪
,
在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。
4. It
murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent
girl whispered to her loving mother.
似乎
它在温柔低语
,
就一位天真少女对着她
那慈爱的母亲细细私语。
(action, sound, colour)
三
).Sky (stand/ appear/turn)
sky was a curdled gray burdened with
lumps of clouds.
天空是浓浓的灰色
,
伴着拥挤的朵朵云
skies
stood tall and far
蓝蓝的天空高高耸立
主观环境描写
:
found
sth adj/doing/done
某人发现某物
(
状态
/
动作
/
被
)...
saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done
某人看
到
/
听到
/
感
到
/
闻到某物
(
状态
/
动作
/
被
)
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was so adj that we find/feel
它是如此
....
以至于
kept sb spellbound/amazed/
景
物使我如此陶醉
/
惊讶
/
sth held sb entirely in their
power
景物让我完全惊呆了
looked/seemed/appeared/felt like
…
景物看起来像
…
< br>二、场景描写的素材
(
来自原著
:
追风筝的人
)
1. At
least two dozen kites already hung in the sky,
like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an
hour, the number doubled, and red,
blue, and yellow kites glided and spun
in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair.
The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing
just hard enough to give some lift,
make the sweeps easier.
(
放风筝
的场景描写
,
从各个角度
,
立体描述
)
空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝
,
如同纸制的鲨鱼
,
巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头
,
这个数字翻了一番
,
红色的、蓝色的、黄色的
风筝在苍穹来回飞舞<
/p>
,
熠熠生辉。
寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。
这风正适宜放风筝
,
风速不大
,
恰好能让风筝飘浮起来
,
也便于操控。
water was a deep
blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-
clear surface.
湖水澄蓝
,
< br>波平如镜
,
阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。
3. Then I glanced up and saw a pair
of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the
sky. They danced high above the trees on the west
end of the park, over the windmills,
floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking
down on San Francisco, the city I now call home.
(
场景、比喻
)
我抬起头
,
望见两只红色的风筝
,
带着长长的蓝色尾巴
,
在天空中冉冉升
起。
它们舞动着
,
飞越公园西边的树林
,
飞越风车
,
并排飘浮
着
,
如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金
山
,
这个我现在当成家园的城市。
4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the
sun l ike a branding iron searing the back of your
neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones
all spring turned dry, and rickshaws
stirred dust when they sputtered
by.(
场景、比喻
)
天空一碧如洗
,
阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂
,
到了夏天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过
,
扬起阵阵
灰尘。
5. Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl
hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through
tree branches and stirred the bushes that
sprinkled the slope. And from below,
the faint sound of water tumbling through the
valley.
在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音
,
还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝
,
吹过
山坡上的灌木丛。而下面
,
水流在山谷淌动
,
传来阵阵微弱的声音。
6.
By three o'clock, the rain had stopped and the sky
was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.
A cool breeze blew through
the
park.(
天气
)
到三点时
,
雨停了
,
铅灰色的
天空阴云密布
,
一阵寒风吹过公园。
7. The sun was beginning to set,
glittering red through the cracks between the
ramshackle buildings.(
景象
)
太阳开始下山
,
那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝
中
,
渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。
三、描写时间
,
动作
,
心理和情感
一
)
、情感好词
:
1.
喜乐
①
The smile on her face shone like a
diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
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