崩溃的意思英语作文自我感觉今昔对比

2021年1月26日发(作者：hayden)
英语作文自我感觉今昔对比














篇一：高考英语写作训练
-
今昔对比类


今昔对比类作文训练


在“今昔对比”的对比类写作中，一定要把握时态的 运用，时态
通常是一般现在时和一般过去时。写作格式：提出主题句——对
过去情况的描述—— 对现在情况的描述——总结句。当然，也可
以对今、昔进行逐条对比。今昔对比类作文常用句型：


.Our (school/hometown), as all may know,

is not what it used to
be.

In the past,
……

I wished that our (school/hometown) could be
more
brilliant,
there
would
be
a
……
.
But
now,
everything
has
changed.

My wish comes true. Moreover,
……


In
addition,
what
makes
(the
school/hometown)
more
lovely
is
that
……


If
you
were
here,
you
would
be
amazed
by
the
beauty
of
our
(school/campus/hometown)

1.
开头常用句型


(1) Great changes have taken place.

Great
changes
have
taken
place
in
my
hometown
in
the
last
five
year. Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you
left
China.
Over
the
past
twenty
years
or
so,
great
changes
have
taken place in our life. (2) Things have begun to improve since
…
（自
从…以来，事情有了好转
/
改善）

load.

2.
对比常用句型
:

(1)
…
used to
…
, but now
…

过去常……，但是现在……

(2)
…
in
the
past,
but
now
…

在过去……，但是现在……

(3)
once
…
,
but
now
…

曾经……
.
，但是现在……

(4) Things are different now.
情
况已大不同了

(5)
But
now,
everything
has
changed.
但是现在全
变了


今昔对比类作文训练
1
< br>1.
联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你
是接待人员
,
请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的
情况：

1)
大小：近
100
户人家，约
500
口人。


2)
变化：过去很穷，
78
年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了 。
现已旧貌换新颜。


3)
教育：
原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。
新建的教学楼有
4
层，
是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄 儿童在此免费就读。


注意：
1
）要点齐全，前后连贯。


2
）词数：
100-120
之间。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school!

今昔对比类作文训练
2

假设你是李明，

你的美国朋友杰克听说你校正在开展研究性学
习，来信询问 有关情况，请你写一封信，谈一谈开展研究性学习
前后，你的学习情况的变化。


注意：
1
用书信格式。

2
词数：
100
左右


3
生词：研究性学习
exploring study
，上网
surf the internet
。


今昔对比类作文训练
3

假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友
Dick
听说中国的中小学正在
减轻学生的 学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的
信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带 来的变化。


周末活动（减负前）

周末活动（减负后）


白天：
上课、
做作业

白天：
参观博物馆、
学习电脑、
绘画

晚上：
做作业

晚上：
看新闻、
读书、
看报

就寝时间：
11
：
30
就寝时间：
10
：
00
注意：


1
、词数
100
左右；


2
、开头已为你写好。


生词：减轻学习负担
---reduce learning load

Dear Dick,

How
nice
to
hear
from
you
again.______________ _______________________________
______________ __________________________________________
____ ________________
_____________________________ ___________________________
___________________ _
____________________________________________ ____________
____________________
_________ _______________________________________________
____________________ Best wishes, Li Hua

今昔对比类作文训练
4

请根据下面六
幅图的提示和
所提 供的主题
句，写一篇题
为
“
Changes in Our Life
”

的英文短文。
词数

100
左右。
（
2004
年北
京市春季高考写作）



今昔对比类作文训练
1

范文学生作品
Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school!
①

②

It has changed a lot since 1978
③
In the past, the school here was very small
⑤
.
⑥

Now it has been
rebuilt.
⑦

The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys
⑧
. It is
the most
⑨

They enjoy free education in it.
⑩

Thank you.

修改为
Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school !

①

This village is a
small one
with/which
has
nearly
100 families
and about 500 people.

It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978
③
and has
been
developing very fast.
People
here
④

live a
much
better life than before .Now it is taking

on a new look

In
the
past,
the
school
here
wasvery
small
⑤

and
most
childrencouldn
’
t
afford
to
go
to
school.
⑥
But
now
it
has
been
rebuilt
⑦

andthe
newly
built
teaching
building
⑧

which
has
4
storeys
is
the
most
beautiful
one
in
the
village.
All
the
school-age
children
can
study
here.
⑨

What
’
s
more,they
enjoy
free
education.
⑩

May you enjoy your stay here

/

May you(
本文来
自：

千叶帆文摘
:
英语作文自我感觉今昔对比
)
have a pleasant time here!


今昔对比类作文训练
1

标准范文
Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school !
①

This village is a small has nearly 100
families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.
②

However,
it
has
changed
a
lot
since
1978
③

and
has
been
developing
very
fast.
④

People here live a much better life than before .
Now it is taking on a new look.

In the past, the school here was very small
⑤

and most children
couldn
’
t afford to go to school.
⑥

But now it has been rebuilt
⑦

and the newly built teaching building
⑧

which has 4 storeys is the
most
beautiful
one
in
the
village.
All
the
school-age
children
can
study here.
⑨

What
’
s more, they

enjoy free education.

⑩

May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time
here! Thank you.

今昔对比类作文训练
2

Dear Jack,

How nice to hear from you again.

Dear Jack,

How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going
on
in
our
school.
In
short,
things
have
been
improving
since
the
school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers
always
kept
on
explaining
the
points
in
class.
We
students
just
listened and took notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve
the
problems
raised
by
the
teachers
or

class,
we
enjoyed
different
kinds
of
activities
instead
of
doing
endless
homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We
can
go
to
the
library
or
surf
the
Internet
for
various
kinds
of
information.

In a word, we are now masters of study, and we are happy.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ming

今昔对比类作文训练
3

一、评分原则


1
、本题总分为
25
分，按
5
个档次给分。


2
、评分时，选根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然
后以该档次 的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。


3
、词数少于
80< br>和多于
120
的，从总分中减去
2
分。


4
、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结
构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯 性及语言的得体性。


5
、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分 时，应视其
对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。


6
、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

二、内
容要点：

1
、过去忙于一课、做作业


2
、现在有时间读课外书、参观博物馆等

3
、现在有时间看新闻、
读报纸

4
、不必再熬夜


三、各档次的给分范围和要求：

第五档次（很好）
：
（
21-25
分）

完全完成了试题规定的任务。

-
覆盖所有内容要点。


-
应用较多的语法结构和词汇。


-
语法结构或词汇方面 有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复结构或较
高级词汇所致其；具备较强的语言运用能力。


-
有效地使用了语句音的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

完全达到
了预期的写作目的。

第四档（好）
（
16-20
分）

完全完成了试题
规定的任务。


-
虽漏掉
1
、
2
个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。

-
应用的语法结
构和词汇能满足任务的要求。


-
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复
杂语法结构或词汇所致。

-
应用简单的语句音的连接成分，使全
文结构紧凑。

达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档
（适当）
：
（
11-15
）

基本完成了试题规定的任务。