carol怎样写好英语段落(三)

2021年1月16日发(作者：廖宗怡)
怎样写好英语段落（三）

在上一讲我们讲了主题句，推展句写法；这一讲 我
们要进一步来谈一谈段落发展几种手段以及结尾段写法。段
落发展几种手段：
作者运用列举法，是通过列举一系列论据对topic
sentence中摆出论点进行广泛、全面地 陈述或解释，列举顺
序可以按照所列各点内容相对重要性、时间、空间等进行。
Yesterday as one of those aful days for me hen everything I
did ent rong. First，I didn’t hear my alarm clock and arrived late
for ork. Then，I didn’t read my diary properly and forgot to get
to an important meeting ith my boss. During the coffee break，I
dropped my coffee cup and spoilt my ne skirt. At lunch time，I
left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that as in it. After
lunch，my boss as angry because I hadn’t gone to the meeting.
Then I didn’t notice a sign on a door that said “et Paint” and so
I spoilt my jacket too. hen I got home I couldn’t get into my flat
because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a indo to get
in and cut my hand.
根据本段主题句中关键词组everything I did ent rong，作
者列举了8点内容，分别由first，then，during the coffee break，
after lunch time等连接词语引出，使得该文条理清楚、脉络
分 明、内容连贯。常用于列举法过渡连接词有：for one thing ，
for another，finally，besides，moreover，one another ，still
another，first，second，also等。
作者通过举 出具体事例来阐述、说明主题句内容，严格
地讲，举例法也是列举法一种，它们区别在于：列举法侧重< br>罗列事实，所列事实力求全面；而举例法侧重通过举出典型
事例来解释作者观点，且事例可多可少 。我们来看下面这个
用举例法展开段落。
There are many different forms of exercises to suit different
tastes. For example，those ho enjoy competitive sports may take
up ball games. For another example，if they prefer to exercise
alone，they can have a run or take a alk in the morning or in the
evening. Besides，people can go simming in the summer and go
skating in the inter. In short，no matter hat their interests are，
people can alays find more than one sports that are suitable to
them.
本段采用了三个事例来说明主题句中关键词组different
forms of exercises，这三个例子分别由连接词for example，for
another example 和 besides引出，最后由引导结尾句总结全
段内容。举例法中常用连接词有：for example，one example is，
besides，furthermore，moreover，in addition等。
叙述法发展段落主要是按照事物本身时间或空间排列
顺序，通过对一些特有过渡连接词使用 ，有层次分步骤地表
达主题句一种写作手段。用这种方法展开段落，作者能够清
楚连贯地交待事 物本末，从而可以使读者可以清晰、完整地
理解文章含义，例如：
In the flat opposite，a oman heard the noise outside. hen she
looked out through the indo，she discovered that her neighbor as
threatened by someone. She immediately called the police
station. In anser to the call，a patrol police car arrived at the
scene of the crime quickly. Three policemen ent inside the flat at
once，and others guarded outside the building to prevent anyone
from escaping.
这段是按照事物发展先后顺序，叙述从发 现案情、报警、
到警察赶到、包围现场过程。全文脉络清晰，叙述层次感强，
结构紧凑。常用于 叙述法中过渡连接词有：first，an the
beginning，to start ith，after that，later，then，afterards，in the
end，finally等。
将同类事物按照某种特定规则进行比较分析是一种常
用思维方法。通过对比，更容易阐述所述对象之间异同和优
缺点，例如：
The heart of an electronic computer lies in its vacuum
tubes，or transistors. Its electronic circuits ork a thousand times
faster than the nicer cells in the human brain. A problem that