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2020-2021
年英语中考英语书面表达及答案(
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一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
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.
假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计
划进行了讨论。你们班的外教
David
对此很感兴趣。请你根
据以下信息,给
David
写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情
况及
你自己本人的计划及原因。
比例
50%
30%
20%
你的计划
计划
去国内外旅游
多读一些书
参加社会实践
?
(至少一个)
原因
1.
放
松
;2.
欣赏美景
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增长知识;
2.
培养兴趣<
/p>
1.
锻炼自己
;2.
结识朋友
?(请你补充)
注意:
(
1
)邮件应包含所有要点
(
2
)词数
80
个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
(
3
)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分
p>
注:社会实践
social
practice activities
Dear
David
I'm writing to tell
you something about our discussion
today.
_____________________
__________________________________________________
________
_______________________________
________________________________________________
p>
_________________________________________
______________________________________
_
__________________________________________________
____________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Li
Hua
【答案】
Dear
David
I'm writing to tell
you something about our discussion
today.
The students have
their own plans about how to spend a meaningful
summer vacation. Half of
the students
plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to
relax and enjoy the beautiful
scenery.
Thirty percent of students plan to read more
books. They believe that reading can
increase knowledge. Reading books can
make people smart and develop interests. 20% of
them
plan to take part in social
practice activities. They want to exercise
themselves and make new
friends.
I'm going to take part in
social practice activities, too. I want to learn
something new and get
good experience
from these activities.
Best
wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定
句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如
how to
do
,
spend a
meaningful summer
vacation
,
half
of
,
plan to
do
,
travel at home and
abroad
,
enjoy the
beautiful
scenery
,
take part
in
,
social practice
activities
,
make new friends
等。而非谓语动
词结构
The
students have their own plans about how to spend a
meaningful summer vacation./
Reading
books can make people smart and develop
interests.
和宾语从句
They believe
that
reading can increase knowledge.
的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。
在学习中注
意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻
辑性,也更
富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。
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p>
.
亲爱的同学们,初中生活即将结束,你们一定有很多的感触
.
假如你是
Tony,
名城中学九
(
1
)班的学生。请以<
/p>
My junior high school life
为题
,
写一篇
80
词左右的短文。
提示:
1.
个人基本情况介绍
2.
校园(校园干净而美丽,活动非富多彩);老师(传授知识,教会做人<
/p>
,
经常鼓励);同
学(和睦相处,互相学
习,共同进步)。
3.
对学校、老师
、同学表达感谢和祝福。
要求:
1.
文章包含以上提示内容,适当发挥。
2.
文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
【答案】
My junior high school
life
My name is Tony. I am
studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful
junior middle school life is
coming to
an end. I’m glad to tel
l you something
about my school life.
Our
campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all
kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich
knowledge and how to behave ourselves.
They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on
well
with our classmates. Besides, we
learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my
teachers and my classmates. Wish them
better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主
要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意
主谓一致问题,句子结构主
要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:
My name
is……
,
I’m glad
to……
,
Our campus
is……
,
Our teachers teach us……
等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了我的个人情况,接下来介绍我们的校园,老师和同
学,最后对学校、老师、同
学表达感谢和祝福。此处
go by, come to an end, tell
sb about sth,
all kinds of, behave
oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with,
learn from, make progress
等这
些
词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3
.
书面表达
地球是我们的家园,我们作为地球的主人,就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导
“
低碳
”
生
活,只要我们不污染地球的环境,不浪费地球的能源,就能够让我们的周围变得更绿,生< p>
活变得更美好。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几
点:
1.
节约用水、用电;
2.
节约纸张,循环使用旧课本,保护森林;
3.
节约粮食,在更多的土
地上种树;
4.
不乱丢杂物,保护环境;
要求:短文
中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
80
词左右
提示词:
the greenhouse gases
lifestyle
低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn
better?
The earth is our
home. ____________________________________________
___________
________________
__________________________________________________
_____________
If everyone
can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we
are living will be better and better.
【答案】
How does our earth turn
better?
The earth is our
home. We should protect our earth as the owner.
But how to live in the
greenhouse gases
lifestyle?
I think as a
middle school student, we should save the
resources around us, such as the water, the
electricity and so on. When you wash,
can you close down the water? Can you turn off the
lights
when you left the classroom? I
think saving paper is necessary. All the used text
books should be
recycled. Thus, less
trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more
food, the peasants will
plant more
trees on their farm. Don't throw litter
everywhere, it will pollute our
environment.
If everyone can
make a contribution to our earth, the lift we
living will be better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定
句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如
how to
do
,
live
in
,
around
us
,
such
as
,
as a middle school
student
,
and so
on
,
close down the
water
,
turn off the
lights
,
cut
down
,
make a contribution to
our earth
,
pollute our
environment
,
better and
better
等。而固定结构
But
how to live in the greenhouse gases
lifestyle?
和
I think as a
middle
school student, we should save
the resources around us, such as the water, the
electricity and so
on. /Can you turn
off the lights when you left the classroom? / If
we can save more food, the
peasants
will plant more trees on their farm.
等复杂
从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表
达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢
记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适
当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理
。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。
4
.
安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示,写一篇关于校园安全的
英语小短
文。
提示:
1.
体育锻炼
2.
上下楼梯
3.
交朋结友
4.
食品卫生
要求:
1.
语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;
2
.短文可以适当发挥;但要包含以上要点。
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.词数:
80
—
100
词。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all.
How to be safe at school is especially important
to us
students.___________ ____________
_________________________________
【答案】
Safety has become the
focus to us all. How to be safe at school is
especially important
to us students.
First, we should take care not to get ourselves
injured while we are having sports.
Second, There
are too many
students at school, and our hallways are too
narrow. So don’t crowd
with each other
especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or
there may be an accident.
Besides, we
should be friendly and get on well with others,
don’t quarrel or even f
ight. Last but
not least , We should be careful to eat
healthy food and keep away from junk food, which
is
harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember
these for us all.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合
要点提示,可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述,注意围绕要点
组织材料,适当发挥。根据
材料内容确定主要句子的时态,及句式等重要内容。写作中注
意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系
。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
5
.
书面表达
假如你是华
,
你的英国笔友对中国文化
很感兴趣
,
想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你
的家乡一安徴一游
,
请你根据以下提示用英文给
他写一封电子邮件。
1
位置
:
中国东部
,
安做省南
部
:
2.
气候
:
春暖花开
,
秋季凉爽
3.
景点<
/p>
:
山和古村落
:
4.
文化
:
茶、黄梅戏
5.
建议
提
示词
:
黄梅戏
Huangmei
Opera
注意
:1.
词数
80-100
2.<
/p>
可适当增加细节
,
使行文连贯。
3.
文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名
p>
4.
开头和结展己给出
< br>,
不计入总词数
Dear
Dave
I know that you are
interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are
planning a trip to China.
Why not come
to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】
Dear
Dave
,
I know you
are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you
are planning a trip to China. Why
not
come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some
fun.
Anhui Province lies in
the east of China. The best time to come here is
in autumn, because it’s
really cool and you can just take some
light coats. There are many famous places to see.
For
example, Mt. Huangshan, where you
will see wonderful plants and special rocks.
Besides, Anhui
is also famous for
ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.
As a fan of Chinese culture,
don’t
forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good
and tastes better. What’s more, come
and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to
understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward
to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的
身份给自己的笔友
Dave
写信,邀请他来你的家乡
—
安徽一游,
题目中列出了文章的提纲,审题可知
,短文应从以下几个内容叙述:首先介绍家乡的位
置;然后介绍来这里最好的时候;接下
来是介绍家乡的景点和文化,并给出建议。短文应
使用一般现在时,注意谓语动词的正确
形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容,分清主次,并
注意上下文的连贯。另外,英语的表达
习惯和汉语是不同的,因此写作时不能按照汉语思
维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发
,写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构,易于掌
握,不容易出错。但为提升文章档次,
也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句,以及使用一些
复杂结构,如非谓语动词、被动语态等
。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求邀请
Dave
来
自己的家乡旅游,并介绍了家乡
的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点:首先文章内容完整
,包含了题目中要求的所有内
容,并对细节进行补充和修饰,使内容更加充实、丰富。短
文先对
Dave
发出邀请,然后具
体介
绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等,并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰,层次清楚,主次分
明。
第二,短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合
英语
的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述,注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。
句式
结构以简单句为主,也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句,还有一些好的
句型
,如
The best time to come here is in
autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just
take
some light
coats
、
Besides, Anhui is also
famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun
and so
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