2016高考语改错)

2016

年高考英语改错集训

短文改错一

P29

A good memory is of great a help in learning a language. Everybody learns his

own language through remembering what he hears when he is a small child, but some

children

,

like

boys

and

girls

who

live

abroad

with

parents,

seem

to

learn

two

languages

almost

as

easily

as

one.

In

school,

it

is

not

easy

to

learn

the

second

language because the pupils have such little time for it, and they are busy with other

subject, too. A man

’

s mind is rather like a camera, but it took photos not only of what

we see but also of what we hear, smell and taste. When we take a real photo with a

camera, there is much to do when the photo is finished and shown to our friends. on

the same way it is much work to be done before we can keep a picture forever in our

mind.

短文改错二

P30

Dear Li Hua,

Thank you for trusting me and told me your anxiety and puzzle before taking

exams .

Actually

,

it

’

s

a

common

experience

for

students

in

Senior

3.

Please

take

thing easy and the following tips might be helpful.

First,

talking

to

friends

that

you

trust

might

make

yourself

feel

better.

You

may

find

that

they

had

similar

feelings.

Another

effectively

way

to

relax

is

to

do

sports regularly, which may benefit you both physically and mentally.

If you do so,

you

will

full

of

energy

when

studying.

Besides,

after

class,

you

can

go

out

of

the

classroom to have a walk or listen to some music to get refreshing.

At

last,

remind

yourself

now

or

then

that

can

make

it

when

you

feel

discouraged . I believe you can achieve your dream with hard works.

短文改错三

P31

1

Earthquakes cannot be predicted and can occur at any times. Earthquakes are

always changed.

Two- story

apartment

buildings

may be safe if they

are

good built.

The best way endure an earthquake safely is to follow earthquake safety tips. When

the earthquake happens, do not attempt to escape from the two-story building, even if

you only had a short distance to go. Chances are that you will be injured. Immediately

hide underneath a table and a desk and cover your eyes with your hands. If you are in

bed, cover your head with a pillow and stay in there. If a fire alarm sound, leave the

building as soon as possibly. Take the nearest stairway to exit the building.

短文改错四

P32

Smog has covered large area of Beijing recently, that has had lots of influence

to our life. It

’

s not convenience for us to go out due to the heavy smog. In order to

take in less than poisonous air, whenever we go out, we have to wear mask.

Given

such

a

serious

problem,

some

measures

must

be

taken

to

solve

it.

As

for

our

government, some laws should be passed to ban factories from giving off poisonous

waste. At a same time, we are supposed not to drive to work but ride their bicycles.

Now I appeal to all people to take action against smog but protect our world from be

polluted. Only in the way do we live in a green world.

短文改错五

P33

Last Saturday ,I went to the cinema with my parents. When get there, the hall

was full of viewer. We found their seats and soon the film started. However, some of

the

viewers

were

talked

loudly

and

even

shouting

when

see

some

excited

pictures,

which affected us badly.

What’

s worse, some other people were eating snacks. When

the film was over, the floor was very dirt.

Through

this

case,

we

know

that

they

might

be

rooted

causes

lying

in

education.

Now

formal

education

just

focuses

on

knowledge

and

ignores

the

moral

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