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美国房子的优点的英语作文
【篇一:英语满分作文的特点】
一
.
用词准确
;
表达地道
【安徽卷】【试题回放】
假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中
学生英
文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回
信,假如你是李华,美国一所
友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一
份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况
。请你给她写
封回信,主要内容如下:
l
表示赞成。
l
提出你喜欢的栏目。
l
简要说明理由。
注意:
1.
词数
100
左右。
2.
新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3.
适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4.
参考栏目:栏目
—
column
dear mr. green,
i am very excited to learn that we are
going to start a magazine
together.
that sounds great! and i definitely agree with you
on
that.
some of
the columns which you mentioned in the letter are
really my cup of tea. say,
“culture express” gives us
a better understanding of the world.
since people from different parts of
the world have different
values, it’s
necessary to learn from each other. this will
offer a
wonderful chance. apart from
that, “blurt
out” is pretty
good
for chinese students to learn
english idioms and improve oral
english. last but not least,
“entertainment” is so cool! the
popular
singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and
attractive that you absolutely can’t
miss it! teenager
s are just
fond of the trendy things.
well, i can’t list more. i
really can’t wait to read that
magazine!
yours
faithfully,
li
hua
【名师点评】这是一篇满分
作文。由于这篇作文的出现,导致了安
徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这
篇文章,写的的
确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不猜
测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历,否则这么地道标准的
英语
,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:
my cup of tea,
apart from that, oral english, last but
not least, celebrities,
catchy
和
trendy
的大胆运用,
li
st, cant wait to
简直是
perfect!
况
且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到
这种
程度,不可谓不让人佩服。
二
.
非谓语动词为作文添彩
【北京卷】
【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,
你班四月
十二日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍
植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂
志的
“
绿色行动
”
专栏写一篇以
“green action in our
class”
为题的英文稿件。
注意:词数不少于
60
提示词:郊区
suburbs
april 12 is memorable because our
class had a meaningful
experience on
that day. in the morning, we bicycled to the
suburbs to plant trees, talking and
laughing all the way. upon
arrival, we
began to work immediately. some were digging
holes. some were carrying and planting
young trees. others
were watering .
after getting the work done, we put up a board
reminding people to protect the trees.
before leaving we took
some photos to
record our green action. seeing the lines of
trees, we all had a sense of
achievement.
we feel it’s
our duty to protect and beautify our
environment.
【名师点评】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。文章
思路清晰,要点连
贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了分词
短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
三
.
复合句为写作增色
【全国卷】
【试题回放】
假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫
(panda),
一直通过
有关网站
(website)
关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出
生的大熊猫
“
苏琳
”
< br>和她
的母亲
“
白云
”
。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作
人员写一封信:
1
、自我介绍<
/p>
;2
、祝贺苏琳生日
;3
、感谢工作人员
;4
、索取苏琳三岁
< br>生日照。
注意:
1
、词数
100
左右
p>
;2
、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
dear sir/madam,
greetings from china!
i’m li hua, a student in sichuan. i’ve
been a panda lover since i
was a child.
about three years ago i was delighted to learn
that
baiyun gave birth to her daughter
sulin and i’ve been watching
her grow
on your website,. now she’s going to be three. i’d
like
to wish her a happy birthday and
to express my thanks to you
for your
hard work, because of which sulin and her parents
are
living a happy and healthy life in
the us.
by the way, could i
have a photo of sulin taken on her third
birthday? thank you very much in
advance.
yours
truly,
li hua
【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下:
1.
自我介绍
;2.
信息来源
;3.
祝贺生日
;
4.
感谢照顾
;5.
索取照片
;6.
合适
的结尾。
这封信格式正确,行文规范,描述有条不紊,称呼、正文中的
开头
及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼,感情真挚,语言表述
< br>准确,洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情,
以及希望自己
愿望成真,得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理,
结合了简单句和复合句,流畅自然,
不露痕迹,的确是一篇佳作。
好词
ted
adj.
欣喜的,快乐的
s
v.
表达
birth to
v.
产生,生育
好句
i’d like to wish her a
happy birthday and to express my
thanks
to you for your hard work, because of which sulin
and
her parents are living a happy and
healthy life in the us.
我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情,正是
你们
的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。
四
.
结构清晰
,
句式准确
【江苏卷】
【试题回放】
2007
年
4
月
29
日上午
10
点到
11
点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动
在各地大中小学校同时进行,江苏省<
/p>
1
,
100
万学
生积极参与了这项
活动。
教育部倡导学生:
1.
每天锻炼一小时
2.
健康工作五十年
3.
幸福生活一辈子
【篇二:英语作文范
文
30
篇】
英语作文范文
30
< br>篇
i.
应用文类
1.
< br>外籍教师
lynne
任教期满准备回国,学校答应派车送
她去机场。
她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师:
1)
.请检查
(check
on)
明天的车是否落实,提醒司机
(remind sb.
of
sth.
提醒某人做某事
)
p>
。
2)
.她之所以要确定一下,是因为太早不好叫出租车。
3)
.感谢费
心,并感谢一年来的关心。
4)
.在学校一年来,生活愉快、难忘,很可能再来。
5)
.留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆,希望对学生有用。字数
:
100
—
120
个词。
hi, mr.
li,
could you please check
on the car to take me to the airport?
please remind the car driver of this. i
want to be sure of this
car, because it
will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if
the school car doesn’t show up. i am
sorry to trouble you
again. here i
thank you again for all that you have done for me
during my stay in your school. i really
enjoy teaching here, and
will never
forget the day i spent with my students. probably
i
will come back some day. i leave some
english books to your
library. i hope
they will be useful to your students.
yours
lynne
2.
假设你是李华,最
近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否
应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况
。请你给该报写一封信,
反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出:反对迁出:
①.游客多,交通堵塞①.建于
19
06
年,中外闻名②.郊区环境
好
②.搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意:
1)
.词数
10
0
字左右,信的开头已为你写好。
2)
.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3)
.参考词汇:
郊区
—
suburb
june 3 ,2005
dear editor ,
recently, our
class have had a heated discussion about
whether the beijing zoo should be moved
out of the city . some
of my classmates
are in favor of the move .they say large