作文

Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus, what is the

most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and

why?

答案：

The Most Interesting Place on Campus

If

my

foreign

friend

comes

to

my

campus,

the

most

interesting

place

I’d

like to take him/her to is the lake.

The lake is located in the north of the campus and covers a large area.

With lush vegetation, elegant pavilions and old-style architecture, it is the

most

charming

place

on

campus.

In

spring

and

early

summer,

the

lake

is

surrounded by blooming flowers; in autumn, the lakeside

is full of yellowness.

It

is

also a

good place for students and

staff to

relax.

People can

hear

someone recite Chinese poems or English essays by the lake, see young lovers

sit leisurely on the bench talking and occasionally spot a squirrel quickly

disappear into the woods.

With

the

beautiful

scenery

and

vigorous

human

activities,

I

believe

my

foreign friend will find the lake interesting and enjoyable.

解析：

开篇点明：想带外国朋友去的 最有意思的地方是学校的湖区。第二、三段：给出具体的

理由：

1.

湖边景色秀美；

2.

是人们活 动休憩的好地方。第四段：总结自己的观点，相

信外国朋友会喜欢此处景观。

1.

人们上大学的原因各有不同

2.

我上大学的原因

3.

总结

答案：

Reasons for Attending College

People

think

differently

about

the

reasons

for

going

to

college

due

to

their

different

experience

and

attitudes

toward

life.

Some

people

go

to

college

mainly

for

getting

rid

of

poverty, while others just for making more friends. As for me, college is a place where many

excellent students gather together to realize their dreams.

First, I go to college for obtaining knowledge. College is the best place for young people to

learn knowledge. In college, I choose my major, determine my research area, and prepare

for my future career. Second, the four years in college is the best time to develop our critical

thinking

as

well.

We

have

more

chances

to

think

independently

and

develop

our

creative

abilities.

College

education

encourages

students

to

face

challenges

and

develop

original

ideas. Last but not least, I can gain some social skills in college, which will play an important

role in my future life.

All in all, entering college is a wise decision for us to make. The knowledge and skills we

acquire there will lay a solid foundation for our wonderful life in future.

解析：

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这篇作文是典型的说明文，话题属于教育范畴。依据考题所列提纲，考生可以按照经典

的三段式顺利组织篇章。

本文第一段阐述不同的人上大学的不同原因 ，

作者认为这是由

人的经历和生活态度决定的，接着

for

me

引出 作者自己上大学的理由。第二段从三

个方面具体说明作者的理由，即学习知识、培养批判 思维和锻炼社会技能。最后一段作

者得出结论，上大学是明智的选择。此外，文章条理清 晰，遵循“引出话题——说明理

由——进行总结”的框架；语言表达丰富，比如，此文中 表达“获得、得到”时使用了

obtain, learn

和< /p>

acquire

，措辞不再单调；定语从句的使用也使表意更加完 整。

1.

现代人变得越来越孤独

2.

孤独的原因是什么

3.

为了解决这个问题，我的看法

答案：

Modern Isolation

Due to the enhanced speed of online communication and people's rapid reaction to global

news, it seems that the world becomes smaller than before. However, the physical distance

between people is not reduced and the chances for a face-to-face meeting are even fewer

than before. People become more and more isolated from each other.

There are two reasons. Firstly, because of the fierce competition, modern people have to

work

hard

to

keep

up

with

the

fast

paces

of

city

life

so

that

they

have

less

time

to

communicate with each other. By means of the high-tech products, they have to finish more

work within

limited

time.

The

slow

and

leisure

pace

has

already

been

a

dream

for

them.

Secondly,

the

highly

condensed

city

population

doesn't

usher

in

highly

connected

human

relationship due to the vertical designing of the apartments.

To solve the problem, I think it is the media and society that should take the responsibility

of making people realize that the modern ways of communication cannot take the place of

the

traditional

ones.

Besides,

modern

people

should

try

to

participate

in

more

activities