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Good looks and clothing are more important
for success than good ideas.
Throughout the
history of mankind, people, no matter in the past
or in modern
days, have never ceased to
pursue success, which is commonly defined as the
great achievement in a certain field.
Nearly every person is really into the
factors that are related to success.
（总结现象）
Upon the question of
whether
good looks or good ideas are
more important, different people hold different
opinions.
（引出话题）
After carefully
pondering it, I am inclined to side with
good ideas. My explanation is stated
from three aspects.
（抛出己见）
首先，我们来看首段。一般来说，首段由三个部分构成：总结
现象，引出话题，抛出己见。
因为本文谈论的是
success
，所以大家就要想到跟
succes
s
有关的事。
。比如，我在这里就
写道
，大家都很关心
success
。其实，关于
< br>success
的托福作文很多很多，所以，如果大家能
够总结出一套属于自己的开头模版，那真是极好的！其实丸子斑斑还不止这个开头，库存
很多的。比如
The complaint that
never before in the history has the success rate
been lower
than before is incessantly
being heard in our day and age. Indeed, it is no
simple task to
reach success, but it
does not have to be so hard.
然后，再
balabala
引出话题。引出话题的
环节很简单
。主要的办法就是，说一下大家有不同的观点。这里的模版句子也有很多啦。
比如，
Some argue that while others give the
opposite idea.
相信大家可以总结出更好的！最
后，一定要
highlig
接下来，
就是三个段落，三个论点。大家看一下，这篇文章为什么这么精彩呢？因为它是
分别从经
济、政治和日常生活三个角度阐发的，这样层次感很强，更容易作者运用例子将
自己的观
点铺陈开来。说到例子，有一点希望大家注意：不要总是举个人的经历！我有一
个表弟，
我曾经有一只狗。
。这种例子，不仅自己写起来无聊，批改官也会
fed up with
。当
然，不排除有的高手可以写出生
动感人的个人经历，但是前提是你的语言技巧足够高
!
至于论点，斑斑有一点想要提醒大家，英文写作很重要的就是开门见山。所以，
在写论点段的开头时，大家也要做到像写开头段一样，首先亮出自己的观点。
比如这篇文章分别从政治经济生活三方面展开论证，我就在每段开头放上论点
句：
First of all, it is good ideas
rather than good looks contribute to continuous
innovation, which is the key to success
in business world.
Additionally, a thoughtful mind and
decisive ability is more crucial than
beautiful face in the field of
politics.
Last but not least
important, a bright head plays a valuable role in
our daily life.
其实，写这种句子并不困难
，只要你自己总结出一套模版句就
ok
了。比如
play an
indispensable role...., it
is beneficial..., it is conducive... , sth
contributes
to..
。
。
注意：斑斑是让你们自己总结，不是完全借鉴别人的！
！
First of all, it is good ideas rather
than good looks contribute to continuous
innovation, which is the key to success
in business world. If you hardly believe
me, think of Steve Jobs, the former CEO
of the Apple Empire. Without the
special talents in inaugurating a
totally different path from other competitors,
the Apple should not have won over so
many fervent followers. Even if the
superman has died for two years, the
bitten apple unconsciously appear in our
head when speaking of Jobs. Another
more vivid example is Ma Yun, one of the
most house-hold names in China. To say
it bluntly, he is not a good-looking
man and some even laugh at his
appearance. But this short and ugly man
created China
’
s
first Internet-based company Alibaba, which now
accumulates millions of money and
serves hundreds of countries and regions.
Looking at Ma Yun, you must admit that
judging people by the appearance is
not
reasonable.
在第一个
论点中，作者首先
show
出观点：
然后举了两个例子：
Jobs
和
Ma Yun
，两个人
都很有代表性。最后总
结一下观点，
judging people by the appearance
is not
reasonable
。一个漂亮的段落就落成
了！
Additionally, a
thoughtful mind and decisive ability is more
crucial than
beautiful face in the
field of politics. Neither attractive appearance
could help
alleviate the intensified
conflict among countries, nor could it solve the
unemployment problem during the
overwhelming recession. If a president was
elected as a president merely because
of his attractive smile, charming
dressing style and elegant behavior,
then every supermodel could be the one.
That is the reason why many American
people disapprove of Obama after he
took the office. Well, Obama is indeed
a cool guy, but favorability rating
declined dramatically in recent years
due to his inability in the politics. Only a
thoughtful, wise president can lead his
people to a wealthy, democratic and
civilized country and establish a
benign relationship with other countries in the
long term.
接下来是政治领域。这段最精彩的地方就是一串气势很强的排比句：
Nei
ther
，
nor
。不知道
大家有没有这种感觉，写一个例子的时候，往往写着写着就收不住了，这不仅浪费时间，< p>
还容易走题。所以，大家可以尝试着写排比的例子，也就是一段里举数个例子，但每个例< p>
子只用一句话带过。如果不明白的话，可以看这一段。
T
he use of fire has raised
the curtain of human civilization, but should the
man
who first tamed be blamed for later
arsonists? The invention of the steam
engine led to the widespread use of
factory machines and the rapid expansion
of modern cities, but should Walt be
criticized for the hazy London? The advent
of car accelerate the globalization and
improve people
’
s living
standards, but
should the the inventor
of the car Henry Ford, take the responsibility for
the high incident
rate
nowadays?
有没有一些感悟？是不是觉得这样又方便
，又占字数？哈哈哈哈！
Last but not
least important, a bright head plays a valuable
role in our daily life.
Have you
mentioned that the most beautiful person is
usually the one that
makes us most
disgusting? My classmate Li Jing is commonly
deemed as the
venus of the college. She
is always the focus of
everyone
’
s attention due to
her fantastic dressing style. A Bohemia
flowing dress, a suit of Barcelona trikot
or a retro hat once popular in the 16th
England will never fail our expectation
to have a feast for the eyes. However,
she is a overproud of her beauty and
always wants to beat others to show off
herself. Accordingly, students
gradually keep far away from her. But a
wise person usually knows how to
lighten a serious moment with humor and
how to offer emotional care for
others
in trouble. Obviously, the outward factor wins you
temporal reputation
but a bright head
wins you permanent friendship.
第三个论点是生活中的事情，所以举的也就是生活中的例子。
我上面提到，生活中的例子
很容易让人厌烦。但是，这个例子却让人觉得很惊喜。这主要
归功于作者独到的视角——
通过两个人的对比来凸显观点。
In light of what
I
’
ve mentioned above, I have
made most of you aware of the
overwhelming significance of good
ideas. We should by no means forget that
only pursuing beautiful face but
overlooking the potential of intelligence will
definitely fail your expectation to
reach the zenith of career!
最后一段的好坏其实是由写作速度决定的。如果你写完主体部分发现还有三分钟以上的时
间，可以认真构思一下。如果只剩下一分钟左右，那就要抓紧了！管它好看不好看，一定
要点明自己的态度，比如
I may safely come
to the conclusion that
.......
或者，
judging from
what i've mentioned, I hold confidence
on the opinion that ..
所以记住：把文章写完最重要！
Do
you agree or disagree with the following
statement? The way a
person dresses is
a good indication of his/her personality or
character.
Days are gone
when people wearing clothes simply for keeping
them
warm. Nowadays, clothes tend to
serve increasingly social and culture
functions. Therefore, Clothes may
indicate information in some way like
professional, preference, ethnic group
etc, and from those most
apparent
details, can we derive the conclusion about the
individual
’
s
personality or character in the very
beginning.
First and
foremost, thanks to the fashion industry, there is
a variety style
of
costumes
for
us
to
choose.
In
the
street,
you
can
scarcely
see
the
people dress in the same outfit. And
the different choice of clothes must
have something to do with their
personal preference and characteristic.
Why the punk girls never choose the
pinky dress? Why the lazy men like
casual t-shirt in dark color? Why the
lawyer like wearing suits? Because
the
clothes, in the contemporary era, have
more functions rather than
protecting
our
body,
and
they
are
playing
the
role
of
expressing
individual
’
s
inner personality silently. Even if you are not a
person that
care much about your
outfit, but it will always leaking the information
of
what you are like unconsciously.
Moreover,
when
we
firstly
met
someone,
judging
their
dresses
is
the
fastest and easist way
to get a general idea of what type of person he or
she is. As we all know that first
impression is extremely important, and it
may decide whether there will be
further mutual the
clothing
style
may
take
a
large
porpotion
of
an
individual's
first
impression. In this case, I cannot help
but think about how I met my best
friend
Jane.
We
are
both
easy
going
and
enthusiastic
people
and
we
share the
same interest of hiking and comics. When she first
came into
my
sight
in
the
university
orientation
tour,
she
was
dressed
in
bright
orange
t-shirt with batman logo and hiking shoes. She was
like a magnet
drawing me to say hi, and
it turned out that judging by
her
outfit, she
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