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一.
好的论文题目是成功的一半
好的论文
,每一个部分都需要精雕细琢。我们先来看看
Science, Nature
子刊上用的都
是些什么题目,到底这些题目暗含哪些玄机?以下是从<
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2016
年发表的论文中随机挑选的
一些
题目,我将其做了一下简单的分类:
1. Water
splitting
–
biosynthetic
system with CO
2
?reduction
p>
efficiencies?
exceeding?
photosynthesis. (Science, 2016, 352,
1210)
类似
: Scalable water splitting
on particulate photocatalyst sheets with a
solar-to-hydrogen energy conversion eff
iciency?
exceeding
?1%?(Nature
Materials
2016,15,611-615)
<
/p>
这种题目适合哪类文章?适合于那种性能极其显着的文章(可以创纪录的文章),比如说<
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Nocera et al.
的
?Science, 2016, 352, 1210
p>
,直接与光合作用进行对比,给人的震撼
是非常强的。这种对比效果
能够一下子抓住人们的眼球,吸引着读者进行阅读。
要点:<
/p>
使用这样的题目首先你的实验结果得够牛,你对于实验结果要足够自信,对于背景
知识的了解得要足够深。因为取这样的题目意味着你要真正达到了某一个高度。如果明明
有很多大海在那里,你个小池塘和小水坑进行比较,那么会闹笑话的。。。
2.1
Quantifying?
the promotion of Cu
catalysts by ZnO for methanol synthesis
(?Science,2016, 352,
969-974.)
2.2?Exploring?
the origin of
high optical absorption in conjugated polymers.
(Nature Materials 2016,?
DOI:
?
10.1038/nmat4645
?
)
2.3 Promoting?
solution phase
discharge in Li
–
O2 batteries
containing weakly
solvatingelectrolyte?solutions (Nature
Materials 2016, DOI: 10.1038/nmat4629)
2.4 Reconstructing?
solute-
induced phase transformations within individual
nanocrystals (NatureMaterials 2016,?
doi:10.1038/nmat4620
)
2.5 Tailoring
?the nature
and strength of
electron
–
phonon interactions
in the
SrTiO3(001) 2D electron?liquid
(Nature Material, 2016,
doi:10.1038/nmat4623)
我简单地检索了下
Nature Materials
上面的文章题目,发现这种类型的题目真的非常
多。那么为什么大家非常
青睐这种形式呢?这种形式到底有什么好处?
我个人也很喜欢
这种样子的题目,当然一定要跟论文的实际情况吻合哈,不要强凑。这种
动名词形式的结
构最大的优点是
主观能动性很强
。给人的一种感觉是:
你在设计整个实
验,而不是碰巧发现了某个现象。
科研需要偶然现象,但是理性地科学研究追求一切能够
有据可循,能够主动地把握而不
是被动接受奇迹的降临。
3.1?
Surface
functionalization?
of two-dimensional
metal chalcogenides?
by Lewis
acid
–
base
chemistry
(
Nature
Nanotechnology2016, 11,465
–
4
71
)
3.2?Proton
transfer dynamics
control
?the
mechanism?of O2?reduction?
by a
non-
precious metal?electrocatalyst
?(
Nature Materials,2016,?
< br>doi:10.1038/nmat4636
)
3.3 Femtosecond?
control
of
?electric
currents
?in
?metallic
ferromagnetic
heterostructures
(
Nature Nanotechnology 2016, 11,455
p>
–
458
)
3.4?
Improved
air
stability of perovskite solar cells
via
solution-processed
metal oxide transport layers (Nature
Nanotechnology,
2016,11,75
–
81)
p>
这种类型的题目非常的好懂,重点非常突出,给人一种开门见山的感觉,在很多论文中非
p>
常恰当。
<
/p>
以
3.1
为例,两个重点非常明确:
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1.
实现的目标是什么?
Surface
functionalization
of ?
2.
实现的方法是什么?
Lewis acid-base
chemistry.
4.1
In situ?hydrodynamic spectroscopy
?for
structure characterization of porous
energy storage?electrodes (Nature
Materials,2016,
15,570
–
575)
4.2?Kinetics of the self-assembly of
nanocrystal superlattices measured
by?
real-time?in
situ?X-ray?scattering
?(Nature
Materials, 2016,
doi:10.1038/nmat4600)
4.3 In situ?mapping
?of the
energy flow through the entire photosynthetic
apparatus (Nature Nanotechnology, 2016,
?
doi:10.1038/nchem.2525
)
4.4 Optimized quantum sensing
with a single electronspin using?
real-
time
adaptive
measurements?
(Nature Nanotechnology,
2016,11,247
–
252)
有些文章,一幅图就值了一篇
Science
< br>。有些表征手段或者研究方法生来就是让人膜拜
的,特别是一些原位的表征手段,
能够直观地告诉人们以前得不到的一些信息。在这种情
况下,用它来做个题目一点都不过
分吧。
最后对以上几类标题的共性做一下简单的总结:
1) ?
好的论文题目往往都能够紧贴文章内
容,并将其核心亮点突显出来
p>
; 2)
标题中的字真的是一字千金,废话不要有,一定要简
p>
洁明了;
3)
用词要准确,尽量采用中性
词,不要带主观色彩,不要扣大帽子引起审稿人
反感,但是又要合适地体现亮点,好的论
文题目要学会不卑不亢。
二.
正文中各种常用句型汇总
一、
在
In
troduction
里面经常会使用到的一个句子:
很多文献
已经讨论过了。。。
它的
可能的说法有很多很多,这里列举几种
我很久以前搜集的:
A.??Solar energy
conversion by photoelectrochemical
cells?
has been intensively
investigated.
?(Nature 1991,
353, 737 - 740?)
B.
?This was
demonstrated in a number of studies
that
showed that composite
plasmonic-metal/semiconductor
photocatalysts achieved significantly higher
rates in various photocatalytic
reactions compared with their pure
semiconductor counterparts.
C.?
Several excellent reviews
describing
?these applications are
available, and
we do not discuss these
topics
D.
?Much
work so far has focused on?
wide band
gap semiconductors for water
splitting
for the sake of chemical stability.
(
DOI:10.1038/NMAT3151
)
E.?
Recent developments
of
Lewis acids and water-soluble
organometallic
catalysts
?have attracted
much attention.
(
Chem. Rev.
2002, 102, 3641?3666
)
F.?
An interesting
approach
?in the use of zeolite as a
water-tolerant solid
acid?
was described
by?
Ogawa et al
(
.
2002, 102, 3641?3666
)
G.?
Considerable research
efforts have been devoted to
the direct
transition
metal-catalyzed conversion
of aryl halides toaryl nitriles. (J. Org. Chem.
2000, 65, 7984-7989)
H.?
There are many excellent
reviews in the literature dealing with the basic
concepts of?
the
photocatalytic processand the reader is referred
in particular
to those by Hoffmann and
coworkers,Mills and coworkers, and Kamat.(Metal
oxide
catalysis,19,P755)
I. Nishimiya and
Tsutsumi?
have reported on
(
p>
proposed
)
the
influence of the
Si/Al ratio of various
zeolites on the acid strength, which were
estimated by
calorimetry using ammonia.
(. 2002, 102, 3641?3666)
二、在
results and discussion
中经常会用到的:
如图所示
A. GIXRD patterns in?
Figure
1A show
?the bulk structural information
on as-
deposited films.?
B.?
As shown in Figure
7B,
?the steady-state current density
decreases after
cycling between 0.35
and 0.7 V, which is probably due to the
dissolution of
FeOx.?
C.?
As can be seen
from?
parts a and b of Figure 7, the
reaction cycles start
with the
thermodynamically most favorable VOx
structures
(
J. Phys. Chem. C
2014, 118,
24950?24958
)
这与
p>
XX
能够相互印证:
A.?
This is supported
by?
the appearance in the Ni-doped
compounds of an
ultraviolet
–
visible absorption band at
420
–
520nm (see Fig. 3
inset),
corresponding to an energy
range of about 2.9 to 2.3 eV.
B. ?This?
is consistent with
the observation
from?
SEM
–
EDS. (
et al. /
Chemical Physics Letters 332
(2000) 271
–
277)
C.?
This indicates a good
agreement between
?the observed and
calculated
intensities in monoclinic
with space groupP2/c when the O atoms are included
in the model.
D.
The results?
are in good consistent
with
?the observed photocatalytic
activity...
E
. Identical conclusions
were obtained in studies?
where the SPR
intensity and
wavelength were modulated
by manipulating the composition, shape,or size of
plasmonic nanostructures.?
F.?It was also found that areas of
persistent divergent surface
flow?
coincide?with
?regions where
convection appears to be consistently
suppressed even when SSTs are above
27.5
°
C.
三
.
值得注意的是
...
A.?
It must also be mentioned
that?
the recycling of aqueous organic
solvent is
less desirable than that of
pure organic liquid.
B.?
Another interesting
finding is that?
zeolites with
10-membered ring pores
showed high
selectivities (>99%) to cyclohexanol, whereas
those with 12-
membered ring pores, such
as mordenite, produced large amounts of
dicyclohexyl
ether. (Chem. Rev. 2002,
102, 3641?3666)
C.
?It should be pointed out
that?
the nanometer-scale distribution
of
electrocatalyst centers on the
electrode surface is also a predominant factor
for high ORR electrocatalytic
activity.
D.?
Notably,
?the
Ru II and Rh I complexes possessing the same BINAP
chirality
form antipodal amino acids as
the predominant products.?(Angew. Chem. Int. Ed.,
2002, 41:
2008
–
2022)
E. Given the multitude of various
transformations published,
?it is
noteworthy
that?
only very
few distinct?activation?methods have been
identified.?(
Chem.
Soc.
Rev.
, 2009,?
38
,
2178-2189)
F.
It
is important to highlight that
?these
two directing effects will lead to
different enantiomers of the products
even if both the
“
H-bond-
catalyst
”
and
the?catalyst?acting by steric shielding
have the same absolute stereochemistry.
(
Chem. Soc.
Rev.
,2009,?38, 2178-2189)
G.
It is worthwhile
mentioning that?
these PPNDs can be very
stable for several
months without the
observations of any floating or precipitated dots,
which is
attributed to the
electrostatic repulsions between the positively
charge PPNDs
resulting in electrosteric
stabilization.(Adv. Mater., 2012, 24:
2037
–
2041)
四
.?...
仍然是个挑战
A.?
There is thereby an
urgent need but it is still a significant
challenge
to
?rationally
design and delicately tail or the electroactive
MTMOs for
advanced LIBs, ECs, MOBs, and
FCs.?
(
Angew. Chem. Int. Ed.2
014, 53, 1488
–
1504
)
B.?However, systems that
are?sufficiently stable and efficient for
practical
use?
have not yet
been realized.
C.??
It?remains?challenging?to
?develop
highly active HER catalysts based on
materials that are more abundant at
lower costs. (
J. Am. Chem.
Soc.
,?2011,?133,
?7296
–
7299)
D.?
One of
the?great?challenges
?in the twenty-
first
century?
is
?unquestionably
energy storage. (Nature Materials?2005,
4, 366 - 377?)
五
.
众所周知
A.?
It is well established
(accepted) / It is known to all / It is commonly
known?that
?many
characteristics of functional materials, such as
composition,
crystalline phase,
structural and morphological features, and the
sur-
/interface properties between the
electrode and electrolyte, would greatly
influence the performance of these
unique MTMOs in electrochemical energy
storage/conversion
applications.
(
Angew. Chem.
Int. Ed.2014,53, 1488
–
1504
)
B.?
It is generally accepted
(believed) that?
for a-Fe2O3-based
sensors the
change in resistance is
mainly caused by the adsorption and desorption of
gases on the surface of the sensor
structure. (Adv. Mater. 2005, 17, 582)
C.?
As we all
know,?
soybean abounds with
carbon,?nitrogen?and oxygen elements
owing to the existence of
sugar,?proteins?and?lipids. (
Chem.
Commun.
,
2012,?
48
,
9367-9369)
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