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(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达题
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一、英语书面表达
1
.
最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示,学生近视率仍维持在高位水平,且越来越低龄
化。
请根据下表所提示的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的观点。
现
状
主要原因
大约
70%
学生眼睛近视
1.
睡眠不足
2.
长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
1.
做眼睛保健操,多进行体育活动
2.
养成正确的用眼习惯
…
….
(至少一条)
预防方法
你的观点
参考词汇:近视的
shortsighted
要求:
(
1
)词数:
80
~
100
个。
(
2
)开头已给出,不计入总词
数。
(
3
)
要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
The survey
shows that many students have become shortsighted
at a very young age. At present,
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【答案】
The survey shows that
many students have become shortsighted at a very
young age.
At present, about 70% of the
students are shortsighted. Here are some main
causes.
Some students may
not have enough sleep. Some students spend too
much time reading or
doing their
homework without a rest. Some students even like
to watch TV or use computers for
a long
time.
In order to have good
eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We
can also try to do more
sports in our
spare time. We should have the good habit of using
our eyes.
I think all of us
should understand the importance of protecting
eyes and try our best to protect
them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题
干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作,人称用第三
人称复数和第一人称。内容
包括:学生近视原因:
1.
睡眠不足(
not enough
)
2.
长时间看
书、做作业、用电脑等(
for a long time
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)防止近视的方法:
1.
做眼睛保健操,多
进行体育
活动(
eye exercises
< br>)
2.
养成正确的用眼习惯(
h
ave the good habit of
)个人观点:如:我认
< br>为,我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性,尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。(
I
think
?
?
?
< br>;
try
one's best to do
sth.
)。
常用的重点句型和短语有:
sb. spend some
time doing sth.
,
in order to
do sth.
,
try to do
sth.
,
the
importance of…
等。
2
.
书面表达
每年的
4
月
2
3
日是世界读书日,这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开
展
“
读好书,促成长
”<
/p>
活动,请你根据这项活动的主题,向全校同学发出倡议。
1.
获取知识,开阔视野
读书的意义
2.
使人愉悦,益于学习
3. ……
(自由发挥)
现状
倡议
1.
作业多,无良好读书习惯
2.
不知道读什么书,不会选择
……
(至少两点)
注意:
1.
词数
90
左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
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2.
短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻
译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.
短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear classmates,
Reading is very important in our daily
life.
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__________________________________________________
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< br>_______________________________________________ ________________________________
_____________________________________________
__________________________________
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__________________________________________________
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Let’s start
reading now!
【答案】
Reading is very
important in our daily life
.
First of
all
,
reading will/can help us
get knowledge from all kinds of
books
.
It can also help to
open up a whole new world to us
< br>.
Second
,
readin
g will/can make us clever and
happy
.
It is
good
for our study and it can help us grow up
.
Third
,
reading
can help us think more and
further and
make our life more
colourful
.
However
,
there is
usually so much homework for us to do that we
don't have enough time for
reading
.
Moreover
,
s
ome of us don't have a good habit of reading but
often spend too much
time watching TV
and searching the Internet
.
In my
opinion
,
our school can have
a
.
Teachers should encourage
students to borrow books from the
library
.
We must spend more
time reading some useful
books
.
As a
result
,
we can have a better
future
.
Let's start reading now!
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短
语,例如
first of
all
,
all kinds of
books
,
help to
do
,
be good
for
,
more and
further
,
so
much
,
spend too
much time doing
,
search the
Internet
,
in my
opinion
,
as a
result
等。同时
First of
all
,
/
Second
,
/
Third
等时间副词和
However/ Moreover
/ As a result
等结构副词的运
用,既使文章的思
路清晰、层次分明,还丰富了习作内容,使表达多样,是本文的最大亮
点。
点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规
定的材料内容
经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考
生不能遗漏要
点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复
杂的句式结构
以便得到较高的分数。
3
.
书面表达
“
小手拉大手
,
同做文明人。
”
自创建文明城市文明乡村以来
,
淄博人民万众一心
,
众
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志成城
,
让
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人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生
,
我们
也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所
给要点
< br>,
写
一篇
100
词左右的英语短文。
1.
种植花草树木;
2.
遵守交通规则;
3.
公共场合不大声喧哗;
4.
公交车上主动给有需要的人让座;(自主发挥
,
至少两点)
参考词汇
: civilized
文明的
make joint efforts
共同努力
obey
遵守
【答案】
Since
creating the civilized city and countryside, all
the people in Zibo have made joint
efforts
(共同努力)
.
Their good behavior can be seen
everywhere.
As junior
students, we have also made some contributions to
the civilized Zibo. For
example, to protect our environment, we
plant f
lowers and trees. Also, for our
own and others’
safety, we obey the
traffic rules and never run red light. In
addition
(此外)
, we no longer
talk
or laugh loudly in 's more, when
on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people
in
need.
Besides,
we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish
into a dustbin, never littering
anywhere.
Furthermore
(而且)
, we are
accustomed to
(习惯于)
queuing
up
(排队)
for a
ticket or something else. All in all,
we will try our best to do what we can to make
ourselves and
Zibo city more
civilized
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰
,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短
语,例如
mak
e joint efforts
,
as junior
students
,
for
example
,
obey the traffic
rules
,
run red
light
,
in
addition
,
no
longer
,
in
public
,
and so
on
,
what's
more
,
on a
bus
,
in
need
,
be
accustomed
to
,
queue
up
,
all in
all
等。而
to protect our
environment, we plant flowers and
trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we
actively give our seats to the people in need./
All in all,
we will try our best to do
what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more c
ivilized.
等插入语
的运用,丰富了短文内容,使语言
表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。
点睛:书面表达题既不是汉
译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容
经整理后展开思维,考查运
用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要
点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构
以便得到较高的分数。
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4
.
书面表达
假如你是华
,
你的英国笔友对中国文化
很感兴趣
,
想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你
的家乡一安徴一游
,
请你根据以下提示用英文给
他写一封电子邮件。
1
位置
:
中国东部
,
安做省南
部
:
2.
气候
:
春暖花开
,
秋季凉爽
3.
景点<
/p>
:
山和古村落
:
4.
文化
:
茶、黄梅戏
5.
建议
提
示词
:
黄梅戏
Huangmei
Opera
注意
:1.
词数
80-100
2.<
/p>
可适当增加细节
,
使行文连贯。
3.
文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名
p>
4.
开头和结展己给出
< br>,
不计入总词数
Dear
Dave
I know that you are
interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are
planning a trip to China.
Why not come
to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】
Dear
Dave
,
I know you
are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you
are planning a trip to China. Why
not
come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some
fun.
Anhui Province lies in
the east of China. The best time to
c
ome here is in autumn, because it’s
really cool and you can just take some
light coats. There are many famous places to see.
For
example, Mt. Huangshan, where you
will see wonderful plants and special rocks.
Besides, Anhui
is also famous for
ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.
As a fan of Chinese culture,
don’t
forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good
and tastes better. What’s more, come
and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to
understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m
l
ooking forward to seeing you
here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的
身份给自己的笔友
Dave
写信,邀请他来你的家乡
—
安徽一游,
题目中列出了文章的提纲,审题可知
,短文应从以下几个内容叙述:首先介绍家乡的位
置;然后介绍来这里最好的时候;接下
来是介绍家乡的景点和文化,并给出建议。短文应
使用一般现在时,注意谓语动词的正确
形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容,分清主次,并
注意上下文的连贯。另外,英语的表达
习惯和汉语是不同的,因此写作时不能按照汉语思
维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发
,写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构,易于掌
握,不容易出错。但为提升文章档次,
也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句,以及使用一些
复杂结构,如非谓语动词、被动语态等
。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求邀请
Dave
来
自己的家乡旅游,并介绍了家乡
的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点:首先文章内容完整
,包含了题目中要求的所有内
容,并对细节进行补充和修饰,使内容更加充实、丰富。短
文先对
Dave
发出邀请,然后具
体介
绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等,并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰,层次清楚,主次分
明。
第二,短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合
英语
的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述,注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。
句式
结构以简单句为主,也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句,还有一些好的
句型
,如
The best time to come here is in
autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just
take
some light
coats
、
Besides, Anhui is also
famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun
and so
on.
、
What’s
more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to
understand and won’t let you
down!
、
I’m looking
forward to seeing you
here!
等。
5
.
书面表达
假如你是李华,你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革,经过一段时间的适应,同学们发现现在
的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化,请你根据所给提示以
“Th
e Changes in Class”
为题目,用
英语写一
篇
100
词左右的文章,谈谈你的感受和想法,开头和结尾已给
出(不计入总词
数)。
要求:
1.
短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分
明、书写工整;
2.
文中不得出现真
实姓名、校名和地名等信息;
3.
文
章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息,并作适当发挥。