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雅思经典仿写范文
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(1) Some people propose that smoking
should be banned completely. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
首段背景铺垫
+
核心主题
+
题目改写
+
作者观点
< br>+
原因过渡（
5
元素，
3~4
句话）
Along with the advances of society, a
growing number of controversies have
been brought to our attention, one of
which is smoking
背景铺垫
+
核心主题
. Some
people
suggest that the government should totally
prohibit smoking
题目改写
.
However
，
I am
deeply convinced that it is unwise(for it) to
forbid the practice
作者观点
for
the following reasons
原因过渡
. <
/p>
二段分论点（
1
）
+3~4
句扩展
To start
with, taxes from tobacco industry never fail to
exert conducive effects
on a nation’s
economic
progresses.
本段中心句
Hardly can
anyone deny that they
contribute much
to the administrations’
revenues
．
For instance,
governments in
varied countries collect
an astronomical amount of capital from smokers to
pay
for their public utilities such as
education and medicare. If smoking is banned,
there will be a great loss to the
government’s incomes, which would play an
adverse role in the country’s overall
development.
三段分论点（
2
）
+3~4
句扩展
In addition, those who strongly
approve of the ban ignore smokers’ rights.
本
段中心句
That is to
say, they attach too much importance to the rights
of
nonsmokers
．
Smo
king is just a personal hobby and amusement. Not
only is it a
kind of lifestyle, but
also a stress reliever
，
which
enables smokers to gain easy
access to
great delight. Needless to
say
，
for
smokers
，
nothing seems more
difficult and painful than giving up
the habit
．
四段让步论证
+1~2
句扩展
It is admitted that smoking is, to some
extent, detrimental to p
eople’s
well-
being
．本段中心句
According to a
recent survey, the average longevity/life
expectancy (span) for smokers is
marginally lower than that of non-smokers
and the likelihood for them to infect
cancer-related diseases is somewhat higher
as well.
末段削减论证
+<
/p>
结论
+
【分论点重述
+
升华
/
展望】（
2~4
元素，
2~4
句话）<
/p>
However
，
the harm
that smoking does to people’s health is
exaggerated
．
From
what has been discussed above, we may
safely draw a conclusion that it is
irrational for the government to
disallow smoking
【
for the
simple reason that
tob
acco
industry makes much contribution to the
government’s economy and it
produces
beneficial influences on relieving smokers’
psychological tension. Only
through
reasonable ban of smoking can we expect to
maximize our profits from
tobacco
industry.
(2)
What do you think? Should old people stay at home
or be placed in nursing
homes?
首段背景铺垫
+
核心主题
+<
/p>
双方观点
+
作者观点
+
过渡套句（
5
元素，
3~4
句话）
It
is universally acknowledged that one of the most
pressing problems
confronting human
beings is the old age boom.
背景铺垫
Some people take the
view that it should be the children‘s
responsibility to take good care of
the
ir
parents in their later
years;
一部分人的观点
others, whereas, hold an entirely
opposite stand, firmly believing that
the elderly should be sent to nursing homes
to spend the rest of their lives.
另一部分人的观点
As far as I am
concerned,
however, a better way of
ensuring that aged parents lead/live a happy and
healthy life is to put them in nursing
homes.
作者观点
With
regard to the issue,
I would like to
illustrate my argument as follows.
过渡套句
二段分论点（
1
）
+3~4
句扩展
The most visible benefit is
that in retirement homes, aged people can receive
intensive medical care from
professional nurses and doctors.
本段中心句
To
start with, they receive a proper diet
prepared by dieticians to satisfy their
individual requirements, which is of
great necessity for those in poor health.
Besides, they could gain easy access to
regular medical check-ups so that any
abnormality could be diagnosed in its
early stage. Above all, once any disease
strikes, medical services are
immediately available.
从饮食、体检
&
救治三方面对
本段中心句进行支持
三段分论点（
2
）
+3~4
句扩展
A
further more subtle point is that living in
nursing homes enables them to have
more
opportunities to communicate with their
peers.
本段中心句
Keeping each
other‘s
company, they will not feel lonely and are able to
enjoy a considerable
number of
activities together, such as doing morning
exercises, playing games
and exchanging
memories and stories from their past. On the
contrary, if they
live at home, they
are often left alone when their children and
grandchildren are
away working or
studying.
养老院的好处：不孤独；并用
if
反证法说出呆在家里的孤独
四段分论点（<
/p>
3
）
+3~4
句
扩展
Last but not least, when
aged parents stay in nursing homes, their children
can
concentrate on their work or
studies.
本段中心句
There is no denying the fact
that the young generation is living
under tremendous pressures from fierce
competition. It is unlikely that they
would concentrate themselves on work or
study with their aged parents around to
take care of. By contrast, they might be
free from any worries about their
parents’ physical and psychological wellbeing
once their parents are sent to old
peopl
e’s homes.
末
段让步论证
+
削减论证
+
结论
+
【分论点重述
+
升华
/
展望】（
5
元素，
3~4
句话）
< br>
It is admitted that aged parents
tend to feel more comfortable at home, where
they might have been living for
decades. However, it is obvious that the merits
of staying at nursing houses are far
greater than/far outweigh those of
remaining at their own homes
【
for ready medical care,
companionship as well
as relief of
burden for their kids. Only by staying at elderly
homes can we expect
the aging
population to live an enriched and meaningful
later life.
】
(3) Should criminals be sent to prison
or should they do something else as a
punishment? Discuss both sides and give
your opinion.
首段背景铺垫
+
双方观点
+
过渡套句（
3
元素，
3~4
句话）
In recent years, the record of crime
rate has been constantly renewed.
一句话
背景
Quite a few
people have the idea that it is wise to send
criminals to prison.
Nevertheless
towards the same issue, many others point out that
the law
offenders should be punished by
paying back to the public as reimbursement.
A
方观点
+ nevertheless towards
the same issue+ B
方观点
Both sides of the
argument
have very strong feelings and sound reasons.
过渡套句
二段对立方观点
+2~3
点理由（
5
句话
左右）
There are several
reasons which suggest that we should allow
criminals to do
something outside jails
as punishment
对立方观点过渡套句
.
First of all, they are
better
rehabilitated this way.
主题句
1
Doing something for society is an effective
measure, which not only punishes the
criminals but also encourages them to
launch a new life as
well
扩展句
1. In addition, the
limited jail space is an
increasingly
serious problem.
主题句
2
Permitting criminals to do something
outside jails relieves the burden of
the government
扩展句
2.
< br>三段支持方观点
+2~3
点理由（
7
句话左右）
Some
other people, nonetheless, hold the opposite
opinion, strongly believing
that
criminals should be sent into prison
支持方观点过渡套句
. To begin with,
they
argue that it can ensure a safe
living environment to the law-abiding
citizens.
主题句
1 For criminals
like thieves, robbers, rapists or even murderers,
it is
improper or even dangerous to
permit them to wander outside jails in case they
pose a potential threat to
society.
扩展句
1 What is more,
it is the best deterrent
to those
insidious criminals.
主题句
2 It
will make would-be criminals think twice
before they attempt a
crime.
扩展句
2 Last but not
least, it is a great spiritual
consolation to the victims.
主题句
3Those who suggest
setting criminals free lay
too much
emphasis on the rights of criminals and hence they
ignore the rights
of
victims
扩展句
3.
末段过渡
+
作者观点
+
分论点重述
+
【升华
/
展望】（
3
元素，
3~4
句话）
There is
probably some element of truth in both arguments.
As far as I am
concerned, it is wise
for us to retain the practice of sending criminals
to prison
for the simple reason that it
can guarantee the safety of citizens as well as
reduce the crime rate. In addition, it
serves as a punishment for the merciless
outlaws while a relief to the innocent
victims.
【
Only by doing
so/in this way can
we expect to enjoy a
more trouble-free and peaceful
existence.
】
(4)What are the advantages and
disadvantages of the Internet?
首段背景铺垫
+
双方观点
+
过渡
套句（
3
元素，
3~4
句话）
In recent
years
，
the Internet has been
gaining its popularity at an
amazing/alarming
rate
．背景铺垫
Some people suggest
that the Internet brings
us a variety
of benefits; but on the other
hand
，
there are also a great
many
people who strongly argue that its
drawbacks should not be ignored.
A
方观点
on the other
hand B
方观点
It is quite
understandable that people from different
backgrounds put different
interpretations on the same
issue
．过渡套句
二段正方观点
+2~3
点理由（
5~7
句话）
Those who favor
that the Internet possesses varied advantages
present their
reasons as follows.
A
方的理由
In the
first place
，
the Internet
brings us great
convenience and
efficiency. For example, we can send E-mails to
our friends in
other countries in a few
minutes while sending a traditional letter takes
us at
least a week and costs much. What
is more
，
we can make friends
with people
from all parts of the
world
．
It overcomes the
geographical barriers and makes
the
world smaller.
【
Last but not
least, the Internet accelerates the flow of
information and spreads education to
all corners of the globe. In other words,
we can have easy and quick access to
the latest information
worldwide
．】
三段反方观
点
+2~3
点理由（
5~7
句话）
However, the other
side of the party voices its strong opposition,
saying that the
Internet has quite a
few weaknesses. B
方理由
For one
thing
，
it can easily give
rise to psychological
problems
．
An Internet-
addicted person tends to be isolated,
self-centered and unsociable. For
another, more often than not, it is likely to
incur cyber crimes. A growing number of
financial crimes such as money
laundering are committed via/through
the Internet. In addition, it also produces
adverse impacts on young people in that
they are frequently exposed to a flood
of obscene and violent contents online.
末段过渡套句
+
作者观点
+
分论点重述
+
【升华
/
展望】（
4
元素
，
4~5
句话）
There is probably an element of truth
in both arguments. For my part, I take
side with the latter view that the
disadvantages of the Internet far weigh its
advantages for the simple reason that
it contributes to people‘s mental
problems and leads to diverse computer
crimes. Besides, It poses a
considerable threat to the sound growth
of the young.
【
Only by
taking
advantage of the Internet can we
expect to maximize its benefits for our human
beings.
】