剑桥雅思IELTS第二篇大作文task 2 讲义

要详细拓展的论据，写在开头段

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4.

名人名言，举例，报道，新闻，故事。。。

了解题目

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有心人

Some people think that borrowing money from

friends may harm your friendship.

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

I was convinced the only thing that kept me going

is that I love what I did.

A child miseducated is a child lost.

Technology is just a tool. In terms of getting the

kids together and motivating them, teacher is the

most important.

B:

题干观点改写的方法

A point held by many people is that

serious

social problems have

been

triggered by smoking,

and consequently it should be forbidden.

1.

换同义表达

2.

主被动互换

3.

宾语从句

主语从句

同位语从句

表语从句

相互替换

有人认为。。。

1. Some people claim/believe/v… that ….

2. Some people hold the opinion

that

…

raise the point

that

….

assumption

that

…

believe in the fact

that

…

3. It is

认为

ed that

believed/claimed/held/said/argued

4. An opinion held by many people is that…

a point raised by XXX is that…

the assumption raised by XXX is that…

A fact believed by XXX is that…

C.

驳论文立场的表达方式

飞机使用话题开头段

People have more choices when they decide what

to take as a means of transportation thanks to the

high development of modern tech. Planes usually

are the first choice in people’s mind, but they

discharge more pollution while use more fuels,.

Therefore, the argument whether aircraft is in real

need is something that people are concerning. In

my part, we should decrease the use of airplanes

because of their drawbacks.

II.

主体

body

段落的展开方式

Pattern

Central Topic

+

逐条分论点

1…2…3… (<

--

outline

)

飞机使用话题段落范文

The use of aircraft actually triggers enormous

environmental problems. First, it discharges

significantly huge amount of pollutants to the

environment. Compared with the other means of

transportation, airplanes produce higher level of

carbon dioxide, which worsens the global warming

and leads to the rising of sea level. Besides, the

noise planes give out, especially during the courses

of taking off and landing, is unbearable to the

people who live in the neighbourhood of airports.

For instance, people will have problem of

falling in

sleep

or focusing on their work. Furthermore,

planes consume definitely much more fuels than

any other means of transportation for the same

number of passengers to travel the same distance,

while the whole world is facing serious resource

crisis.

III.

关于

让步

和

总结

点到为止

重申立场

驳论文的结尾段逻辑

—

单边同意

/

不同 意

让步标志词

,

+

对方观点的理由

(

点到为止

)

，

+

但

是

However,

我 方观点理由更充分。

Therefore

, +

我坚持我的观点。

重申立场

让步标志词

,

Admittedly, Undoubtedly,

Of course,

It might be true that…

示范

Admittedly, travelling by plane does make our

journey really comfortable and save us great

amount of time for many occasions.

However, by

no means can we ignore the fact that

the

problems caused by planes

mentioned above are

in the main position

. Thus I insist that the use of

airplanes should be controlled.

完整范文

People have more choices when they decide what

to take as a means of transportation thanks to the

high development of modern tech. Planes usually

are the first choice in people’s mind, but they

discharge more pollution while use more fuels,.

Therefore, the argument whether aircraft is in real

need is something that people are concerning. In

my part, we should decrease the use of airplanes

because of their drawbacks.

The use of aircraft actually triggers enormous

environmental problems. First, it discharges

significantly huge amount of pollutants to the

environment. Compared with the other means of

transportation, airplanes produce higher level of

carbon dioxide, which worsens the global warming

and leads to the rising of sea level. Besides, the

noise planes give out, especially during the courses

of taking off and landing, is unbearable to the

people who live in the neighbourhood of airports.

For instance, people will have problem of

falling in

sleep

or focusing on their work. Furthermore,

planes consume definitely much more fuels than

any other means of transportation for the same

number of passengers to travel the same distance,

while the whole world is facing serious resource

crisis.

Apart from the problems mentioned above,

the

use of aircrafts is not as practical/perfect as we

think. In the first place, people usually hate the trip

to and from the airport, which sometimes even take

them longer time than the flight itself,

for

most

airports are located in the

suburban

area of a city.

What’s worse, it’s more likely for passengers to

experience delay

for hours or even over night

, if

they choose to travel by plane rather than

shuttle

buses or trains,

for the use of airplanes is easily

influenced/restricted by the weather conditions.

Last but not the least, except over-seas journeys,

planes may not be the

sole

/only choice for ordinary

people. We can choose other alternatives instead,

which are more economical yet equally convenient.

Admittedly, travelling by plane does make our

journey really comfortable and save us great

amount of time for many occasions.

However, by

no means can we ignore the fact that

the

problems caused by planes

mentioned above are

in the main position

. Thus I insist that the use of

airplanes should be controlled.

中立态度的写法

1.

+

改写考题观点

+

我中立

(

具体写明

< br>)

2.

支持正面

/A

观点

3. < /p>

支持反面

/B

观点

4.

双方都有道理，

总结折中 。

（

+

提出实际建议）

吸烟话题

Problems

1. health

2.

二手烟

3. negative influence on teenagers

烟草行业存在价值

1. tax< /p>

—

revenue

—

2. job

–

if ban

–

unemployment

—

pressure

3. free choice of life style habit

People today suffer a lot from the pressure in work,

and for many of them, smoking might be one of the

most frequent ways to relax, though it is not very

healthy. People even argue that smoking causes

serious social problems thus should be forbidden.

In my opinion, smoking should not be banned,

although it causes enormous problems.

CT: 1. health…2. second hand smoking…3.

negative influence on teenagers

CT: 1. tax

—

source of revenue 2. if

banned

—

unemployme nt, 3. right

—

habit

Conclusion,

两边都有道理。

+

合理解决方案。

吸烟话题