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专题
15
读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落
一、读后续写收尾的方式：
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二、画面定格
1.
人物动作的画面定格
如：
（
20
20
杭州高级中学等五校联考）
They stood there for a moment, side by
side, waiting for
the
rushing
holiday
current
and
for
their
place
in
it.
Then
the
daughter
glanced
over
and
momentarily
regarded
her
mother.
And
slowly,
almost
reluctantly,
she
placed
her
arm
with
apparently unaccustomed
affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently
guided her ba
ck into
the
deluge.
如：
His hard work paid off!
Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the
shop to buy the
brooch. The moment he
got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the
front door and placed it in
Dora’s
hand. Never had Dora received such a
gift
.
Speechless and happy,
she held her son tightly
into her arms,
with tears welling up in her eyes.
如：
The butterfly cleaned her tears on the
face
，
“No.” God felt a bit
relieved and said
，
“Tomorrow
you can become
human again.”
But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be
a butterfly for
the rest of my
life...”Then the butterfly would stay together
with her lover forever
. On the top of
the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the
sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
1.
画面定格
2.
对话收尾
3.
主题升华
4.
结尾留白
5.
首尾呼应
（
1
）
The
sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass
green underfoot, it was as if night and
day had become one beautiful moment.
Dawn had come.
天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在
一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽
的时刻。黎明已经来临。
（黎明到来的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
2
）
Dawn sent shimmering rays over the
placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the
shore
to the horizon.
黎明在
平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金
色道路。
（黎明到来的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
3
）
The crystal and cerulean water was
gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like
orange
paint on a blue canvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的
橙色颜料。
（美好日落时的
画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
4
）
The lingering sunlight was obliterated
by the rapidly falling
night
，
resembling a pitch-
black
curtain draped over the sky.
逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空
被一层漆黑
的幕布覆盖。
（日落时的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
5
）
The
moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the
night bringing forth stars that shone and
hung in the blackness. The never ending
blackness consumed everything.
被群星
围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗
吞噬了一
切。
（描写夜空的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
6
）
Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter
than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the
distance
glisten gently as it reflected
the sun's rays. My consciousness ebbed away with
the heat. I took a
few blinks before I
landed with a thud.
抬头一
看，
我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。
我看见远处有一棵
树反射着太阳光，
发出柔和的光辉。
我的意识随着热度而衰退。
我眨了眨眼，
然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，
恢复了知觉。
（特殊寓意）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
7
）
Dotted with glittering
stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the
scene a fairytale quality.
缀
满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。
（神话般美丽的夜空画面
）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
8
）
Kissed by the rain and glistening, the
wet ground is cold under foot. A dense earthly
sweet
smell rises from the ground,
enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
潮湿的地面走起来很
冷，
被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光
。
一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，
把一切都包裹在它柔软
的怀抱里。
（雨后清新的画面）
The rain drummed on the window, bidding
farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
雨
水打着窗户
，
向最后一缕阳光告别。
（雨水来临的画面）
2.
特殊寓意的写景画面
（
9
）
The
leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down
the street. Occasionally, one would
fall past me, lightly swaying as the
air gently carried it to the ground.
我在
街上漫步时，树叶在
我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓
缓落到到地面。
（描写
落叶的画面）
三、对话收尾
（
1
）
Chester said his father told him he had
tried to search for him and his brother, but both
brothers had changed their last
names.
“He does remember
me
and my older brother and he told
me
that he’s been looking for us ever since we lost
contact
，
” he
said. Chester said his brother has
since flown to Colombia to be reunited
with Urrea as well.
When asked how the
reunion with his
father will change his
life, Chester said
，
“I got
family everywhere, so it might lead to many more
trips now.”
(2)
What was
most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi
also moves others. Nina’
s
family
had
moved
to
a
bigger
apartment
.“I’ve
heard
amazing
stories
about
dogs’
loyalty,
but
I
never
imagined
this
sort
of
thing
would
ever
happen
to
me.
Even
now,
I
can
hardly
believe
this
dog
traveled
such a long distance to find
us
，
”
said
Nina
，
“I would never give
this kind of
friend away
again. I never grow tired of repeating
this
—
animals are the most
devoted and loving
creatures.
They need
our love and care.”
(3)
Her husband spoke to the director of
Heightvale, Dolores Haworth.
Soon she
offered him a job
working for the
company. She said
，
“He just
had a brilliant working attitu
de and is
definitely the
type of employee we are
looking for. I was told, ‘If he does this for
free, imagine his
jobs if he was
being
paid.
’I
met
him
and
he
was
a
lovely
and
polite
young
man
and
he
has
already
started
working for us.”
(4)
…They hung all the things back to the asked
Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead
a tough life with
me
？
” She patted away the
ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads
of
stuff on them
satisfactorily,
saying
，
“Yes! For
me
，
it is not a suffering to
liv
e.”
四、主题升华
(1)
Everyone has one person they look up to
as a role model.
To me there is none
other than my
mom. She has beauty,
brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without
her in my life, I would
have no idea
whether I can be a_famous_dancer
.
Someday,
when_I_am_older
and have children
of my own, I hope I
can be just as great a parent as my
mom.
（母爱的深远影响）
(2)
….I
am
extremely
unhappy
about
it.
I
think
money
doesn’t
equal
happiness.
And
free
life
style also doesn’t equal happiness. The
real
happiness is that everyone loves
each other, and does
everything
useful
for
our
society.
Most
of
my
classmates
support
me.
But
some
of
them
think
money is
everything.
In my opinion,
money can’t take the place of everything, such as
your life,
your time and your
happiness.(
表达自己的价值观）
(4) “Two
reasons account for that you
won
，
” the teacher
answered.“First, you’ve almost mastered
one of the most difficult throws in all
of judo. Second, the only known defense for that
move is for
your opponent to grab your
left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes
you win the match. As
a proverb says,
‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of
your strength is your achievement.
Please
remember
that
in
no
case
will
you
give
up
especially
in
trouble.
God
is
fair
to
ev
eryone.”(
借用名言警句来升华主题）
五、结尾留白
(1
) While she wrapped them,
I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have
dinner plans?”
I
explained
that
I’d
like
to
wait
a
bit
before
I
went
back
to
the
hospital
–
gave
Grace
and
her
husband some time alone with baby.
“Would you be interested in joining me in a bite
to eat?” I
asked. “I’d love to,” she
replied, her eyes sparkling like
diamonds.
And, this was the
beginning of
the end to my months of
heartbreak foll
owing Betsy’s death.
（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空
间）
(2)
The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided
to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares?
He wanted me to have it anyway. I might
as well enjoy it now.”With that, he unwrapped the
white
tissue paper, but to his
surprise,
there was no hard
rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell
a shiny white pearl worth thousands of
dollars.
六、首尾呼应
(1
)
2017
年浙江高考题
开头：
I
had an interesting
childhood. It was filled with suprises
and amusements, all because
of my
mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and
forgetful. One strange faimly trip we took
when I was eleven tells a lot about
her.
结尾：
Despite mom's being
absent-minded and forgetful,
she was
still a kind and nice mom.
(2)
2018
年浙江高考题
开头：
It was summer and my dad
wanted to treat me to a vacation like never
before. He decided to
take me on a trip
to the Wild West.
结尾：
Never
had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation
before. The special trip to the Wild
West was deeply engraved in my mind.
(3)
2016
年浙江高考题
开头：
A funny thing happened to
Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
结尾：
What a funny
day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he
looked back on this hilarious
搞笑的
experience.
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