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英语作文关于对图书馆的建议信
【篇一:作文模版之建议信与图书馆】<
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充分利用考前十分钟写的模板
连接词(如何语意连贯?)
原因
because since as due to
his doctors degree in that
所以
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因此
so therefore
并列
and aswellas or eitheror
neithernor not only…but
递进
also too more moreover as
well after all besides
让步
as once though although
even though while when despite
in spite
nevertheless
转折
but however while still on
the contrary
时序
first of all
secondly then what’s more moreover in
addition(
另外,此外
)
强调
especially
总结
personally
就我而言
to sum
up
总之
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大体
四级作文用词中心
细节
a letter of
suggestion
write a letter
to the president of your college or university
about the problems in the
library.
1.
图书馆存在很多问题,如藏书偏旧,数目较少,灯光昏暗等
2.
提出可行的建议
3.
期待图书馆出现新面貌
正文:
on monday, march 11, 2013
dear president,
my name is
simon who is a freshman in the shanghai maritime <
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university(
考试时候不能写学校的哟~
).
library is the
third home to the most of the students next to
the classrooms and dormitories. there
are many benefits of
reading regularly
in the library. we acquire skills and
inspiration, increase creativity as
well as motivation here.
therefore, it
is important for us to have a good library.
however,
some problems emerge in the
process of using our library. on
behalf
of the students, i’d like to express our
views:
first of all,
opening hours are different from our study time,
which has brought much inconvenience to
us. the library is
closed too early. so
when we have spare time after class, it is
often not accessible
(
我们有时间的时候图书馆不开
稍微
把逻辑关
系再表达清楚一点更好
).
therefore,
my suggestion is
to extend the opening time. secondly, there
are too many outdated books. specially,
the periodicals in the
library cant
keep up with trends. thirdly, the library is in a
poor
study condition, for example the
lighting is dingy. worse still,
something is always wrong with
computers, which exhausts
our patience.
for the reasons mentioned above, there are some
suggestions for reference .i suggest
the headset is provided.
what’s more,
it is necessary to purchase more books and
academic journals, for instance,
magazines, periodicals and
literature
books. last but not least, we hope that better
lighting
system will be provided, and
the library system will be updated
and
keyboards will be replaced.
i believe that our library will have a new look in
the near future.
sincerely
yours
simon
整个文章写得很好,结构、用词、语法都很好,现在这个水
平
13
分以上应该没什么问题。
如果想进一步完善,包括之后要考雅思的话,有几个小问题再
注意
一下:
1
。动词使用,什么时候是谓语,什么时候用
ing,
单复数等。
2
。名词的单复数细节再注意)
3
。文章段落太多
啦,问题可以合并
,建议可以合并。
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4
段是最
清晰的结构了。
希望你再接再厉争取拿个高分喔!
指导老师
:
郭蕾
刘如虹
recently, a survey has been conducted
among the students in
grade three about
what they will do during the three month
holiday after the college entrance
exam.
students have
different decisions. about 45% of the students
intend to rest at home. they want to
relax thoroughly and get
ready for
college life. while 28% of them prefer to attend
english classes .meanwhile, 15% of them
choose to travel
outside. and the rest
12% say they’d like to do other things.
after all, it’s really difficult to get
such a long holiday again
after they
become college students.
personally, i will be a little sad if i get away
from my parents.
so i’d like to stay at
home and spend more time with my
family.
要降低风险
少蒙
b
多蒙
c
反选大多
bcd
无四个连选
上下删同
听
力上下删同
趁听力读出声
英语阅读
龙拳爆发,定首句,画出处与细节。
重点放在完形填空上
王座
竖直笔
畅快写
翻译句
可以错
但必全
【篇二:英语作文
图书馆的重要性与电子书】
nowadays, with the rapid development
of science and
technology, e-book,
which is short for electronic book, is more
and more popular among teenagers.
obviously, it is more
convenient and
various to read by e-book than to read books
in the library. however, some people
still go to the library when
they need
to read books or find some information.
why is the library still necessary for
people? in my opinions,
the answer is
obvious. the library can provide a quiet
surrounding for people, which make them
concentrate on their
reading. moreover,
the library has some precious books,
journals and videos for free, which
they can’t search in the
internet or by
the e-books. therefore, the library can still
exist.
【篇三:
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英语作文常用句型及建议信的模板】
1.
重点句型
1). it’s adj for
sb to do
做
…
对某人来说
2).
… so … that …
如此
…
以至于
…
… too … to do
太
…
而不能
…
such … that …
如此
…
以至于
…
3). not…until…
直到
…
才
…
例
:
i didn’t go to bed until my
mother came
back.
4).the reason why +
句子
is that +
句子
…
的原因是
…
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