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Answer Key
PART TWO:
PATTERNS OF ESSAY DEVELOPMENT
8 Description
Questions on the Student Essays,
170
–
172
1.
c
2.
I
’
d been visiting
my cousins . . .
3.
c
4.
b
sight
hearing
5.
b.
He was
staring off into space, idly tapping his spoon
against the table, while she
sight
sight
drew aimless parallel lines
on her paper napkin with a bent dinner fork.
touch
sight
sight
c.
The blouse is made of heavy
eggshell-colored satin and reflects the light in
its
sight
folds and
hollows.
touch
sight
sight
d.
Her brows are plucked into
thin lines, which are like two pencil strokes
added to
sight
highlight those fine, luminous eyes.
6.
dull hum, silently waiting, deserted
cooking area
7.
b
8.
The most haunting feature in the photo
. . .
9.
a
10.
a
Questions on the
Professional Essay
,
180
–
181
1.
Lou
’
s coffee shop
is like
“
a fond but
dysfunctional family.
”
(Wording may vary.)
2.
d
3.
Lou is concerned that she is smoking
rather than eating.
4.
b
5.
sight, hearing, smell
6.
d
7.
After a moment . . .
8.
c
9.
a
10.
b
Prewriting (Writing
Assignment 2), 184
–
185
A.
Plucked eyebrows
Oval face
Wavy brown hair
B.
Silver
earrings
Bracelet
Ring
C.
Ring from
another man
Signature
(
“
Sincerely . .
.
”
)
9 Narration
Questions on the Student Essays,
190
–
192
1.
“
Adopting a
Handicap
”
2.
Thanks to a
new building program . . .
3.
Pine Street
had a lot of antique stores
. . .
4.
I hope my parents and I . . .
sight
touch
sight
touch
sight
5.
a. My palms
reddened and my wrist and forearm muscles started
to ache as I tugged at the
touch
heavy metal wheels.
sight
b. I could not
see the minister, the choir, or the altar.
hearing
hearing
c.
The club thudded against the side of
Victor
’
s head, making him
yelp with pain.
sight
sight
d. As we ran, I
kept seeing him sprawled on the ground, blood from
our beating
trickling into
his eyes.
6.
Victor, the biggest of us . . .
7.
three
8.
a. Coping with the
wheelchair (
or
Learning how
to use the wheelchair)
b.
Dealing with additional problems in the wheelchair
9.
After, When, As
10.
a
Questions on
the Professional Essay
,
197
–
198
1.
Answers
will
vary
.
One
possibility:
Vingo
returned
from
prison
to
find
that
his
wife
still
loved him and wanted
him back.
2.
b
3.
a
4.
b
5.
Answers may vary
. Two
examples:
Vingo tells his story
“
slowly and painfully and
with great hesitation.
”
Vingo asks his wife to leave a signal
(the handkerchief) rather than confront her
directly.
6.
Examples of
Vingo
’
s being honorable: He
doesn
’
t express any self-
pity about being in jail.
He owns up to
his crime. He offers his wife her freedom.
7.
Fort Lauderdale, New Jersey
,
Washington, Jacksonville, the
34th
Street
Terminal in New
Y
ork, Philadelphia, Brunswick
8.
But if she didn
’
t
. . .
9.
d
10.
d
10 Examples
Questions on the Student Essays,
207
–
208
1.
Some kids can be . . .
2.
Paragraph 2
in
“
Everyday
Cruelty
”
3.
To pass time
as I walk . . .
4.
Then they did even more
cruel things . . .
5.
A young woman chimed in . .
.
6.
Explore the rise of Nazi Germany; play
a trivia game; hear the life story of a stranger
7.
At lunchtime on Wednesday
,
Then, As people stared, Finally
8.
But no part
of everyday life . . .
9.
“
Altered
States
”
: Confronted with
inventions . . .
10.
b
Questions on the
Professional Essay
,
215
–
216
1.
b
7.
10
2.
c
8.
a. When, The next year
3.
b.
too
4.
d
c
c.
although
5.
But, I said,
he kept . . .
9.
a
6.
b
10.
c
11
Process
Questions on the
Student Essays, 226
–
228
1.
First
supporting
paragraph;
one
example
of
a
topic
sentence:
First,
arrange
time
for
exercise.
2.
b
3.
One of the problems . . .
4.
Then get out the simple materials . . .
5.
Paragraph 4 describes an incident with
a plumber who left a bathtub
dirty
.
6.
Paragraph
3
describes
an
incident
with
a <
/p>
“
lemon
”
bicycle
and
an
incident
concerning
an
overcharge by a
department store.
7.
Next; To begin with; Then;
Then
8.
first . . . next
9.
a
10.
d
Questions on the Professional
Essay
, 234
–
236
1.
The job-interview
“
game
”
may not be
5.
d
much fun, but .
. .
or
Here are guidelines
6.
First of all, Then,
Finally
to help you play . . .
7.
a
2.
d
8.
On the other hand
3.
b
9.
b
4.
c
10.
b
Prewriting (Writing Assignment 2), 238
Step 1:
Items 1
through 9
Step 3:
Items 13 through 17
Step 2:
Items 10 through 12
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