-
鄂尔多斯市中考作文评分标准
第五档（
9
—
10
分）：很好
地完成了规定的写作任务。包含
所有内容要点，紧扣主题，结构完整，条理清晰，能恰当
使用连
接词表示各种逻辑关系；语句流畅，表达清楚准确；使用较为丰
< br>富的语法结构和词汇，且错误极少；书写规范，字数符合要求。
第四档（
7
—
8
分）：较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本
上包含所有要点，紧扣主题，结构
较为完整，条理清晰，能使用
正确的连接词；语句完整，意思清楚；语法和词汇方面错误
较少
且不妨碍理解；书写较为规范，字数符合要求。
第三档（
5
—
6
分）：基本上完成了写作任务。包含主要内容
要点，结构欠完整，但不影响文章整体效果；少数语句不通顺，
意思基本清楚
；语法和词汇方面存在一些错误；书写基本规范，
字数基本符合要求。
< br>
第二档（
3
—
4
分）：未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。能写
出一些关键句子，
但句式单调，
词汇有限；
写作内容缺少连贯性，
影响理解；语法结构和词汇错误较多；书
写欠规范，字数过少。
第一档（<
/p>
1
—
2
分）：未
完成规定的写作任务。能写出与写作
内容相关的个别句子，但语句不完整，语法和词汇错
误很多，书
写不规范。
不得分（
0
分）：写作内容与所要求内容无关或所写内容无
< br>法看清；写作中抄袭阅读篇章中与作文话题无关的句子或段落。
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请根据以下提示用英语介绍一位你的好友。要求词数不少于
60
词，可适当发
挥。
提示：
1.
姓名、性别、年
龄；
2.
兴趣爱好；
3.
家庭成员
Li Ming is my good friend. He is twelve
years old. He is a nice boy.
He
likes
football,
basketball
and
table
tennis.
He
plays
them
on
Saturday and Sunday. He likes reading
too. He reads books after school.
This
is
Li
Ming’s
mother.
She
likes
table
tennis.
And
this
is
Li
Ming’s father. His favourite sport is
football. Li Ming likes to play sports
with his parents.
2
< br>假设你们班刚来了一位新同学，请根据以下表格的内容，写一篇不少于
60
词的
短文介绍你的新同学。
Name
English name
From
How old
Favourite sport
Favourite
colour
Li Huanhuan
Helen
Shanghai
11years old
Table tennis
White
I have a new classmate. Her
name is Li Huanhuan. And her English name
is Helen. She is a nice girl. She is
from Shanghai. It is a very big city in
China.
She
is
eleven
years
old.
Her
favourite
sport
is
table
tennis
and
white
is her favourite colour. I like table tennis too.
We often play it after
school.
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假如你叫
Jenny
，请根据下表提供的信息，用英语介绍自己及家人。
成员
爸爸
妈妈
哥哥
妹妹
我
职业
老师
护士
学生
/
学生
爱好
踢足球
打网球
打篮球
画画
读书
I am Jenny.
There are five people in my family. They are my
parents, my
brother,
my
sister
and
I.
My
father
is
a
teacher
at
a
school.
He
likes
playing
football.
My
mother
is
a
nurse
at
a
hospital.
She
likes
playing
tennis. Tom is my brother. He is a
student. He likes playing basketball.
My sister is five years old. She likes
drawing. I am a student too. I like
reading. I love my family very much.
4
假如张红是你的同班同学。请结合以下提示信息，写一篇英
语短文介绍张红。
不少于
60
词，可适
当发挥。
提示：
1.13
岁，长头发，大眼睛；
2.
来自上海，父亲是酒店经理，母亲是英语教师；
3.
家在学校附近，喜欢早上在学校操场打篮球。<
/p>
Zhang Hong is my classmate.
She is thirteen years old with long hairs and
two big eyes. She is from Shanghai.
Shanghai is a very big city. There are
three people in her family: her father,
her mother and she. Her father is
the
manager of a hotel and her mother is an English
teacher at a school.
Her
home
is
near
our
school.
She
likes
playing
basketball
on
the
playground in the morning.
This is my classmate and we are good
friends.
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你的学校漂亮吗？你
喜欢它吗？你的学校有哪些建筑物？请根据
Module3
所学
的词汇、短语及句型，写一篇
60
词左
右的短文向大家介绍你的校园。
My
school
is
very
beautiful.
I
like
it
very
much.
There
is
a
classroom
building,
a
library,
a
playground,
a
science
building,
an
office
building
and
a
dining
hall
in
my
school.
The
classroom
building
is
between
the
office building and the library. There
are many books in the library. The
science building is near library. On
the left of the science building, there
is a dining hall. The playground is
behind the dining hall.
6
假如你是王勇，右图为你学校的地
图书馆
图，请根据下面提示，写一篇
不少
于
60
词的英语短文，
介绍你的学校。
餐厅
实验楼
花园
大门
操场
提示
：
1.
注意
there
be
句型
及方位介词的使用；
2.
短文开头已给出，不计入
总数；
3.
词语提示：
garden
花园
教学楼
办公楼
Hello.
I’m
Wang
Yong.
This
is
a
map
of
our
school.
There
are
five
buildings in our
school: a library, a classroom building, an office
building,
a dining hall and a lab is a
small garden near the gate. On
the
left
of
the
garden,
there
is
an
office
building.
Behind
the
office
building
is
the
classroom
building
with
24
classrooms.
And
there
is
a
library
behind
it.
Next
to
the
library
is
a
dining
hall.
There
is
a
lab
building in front of the
dining hall. The playground is on the right of the
school. It is very large.
Our school is
nice and big. Welcome to our school!
<
/p>
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假如你是
Tom
，
来自
美国。请根据下表提示写一篇英语短文介绍你的一日三餐。
提示：
Breakfast
Lunch
Dinner
one
egg, some bread
vegetables, rice, meat
chicken, vegetables, fruit
注
意：内容可适当拓展，
60
词左右。
Hello! My name is Tom.
I
’
m from America. Here is my
food and drink.
I eat one egg and some
bread for breakfast at home. I have lunch at
school with my classmates. There are
vegetables, rice and meat for lunch
in
the
dining
hall.
The
lunch
is
good.
I
have
dinner
at
home
with
my
parents.
We
have
chicken,
vegetables
and
after
dinner
we
have
some
fruit.
8
请以“
How to keep
healthy
”为题，用英语写一篇
70
词左右的短文，介绍你保
持健康的方法。
Everybody
wants
to
be
healthy.
We
all
know
food
is
very
important.
There
are
many
healthy
foods.
You
can
have
more
bananas,
apples,
oranges, tomatoes and carrots, because
fruit and vegetables are good for
you.
But
don
’
t
eat
too
much
chocolate.
It
is
not
healthy
food.
Healthy
food can make you
strong and happy. Remember there is a
saying
—“
An
apple
a
day
keeps
the
doctor
away
”
.
Sports
can
also
keep
you
healthy.
Get up early and do some sports every
day. Don
’
t be lazy. You will
be
healthy and happy.
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某英文报正在以
My school
day
为题向中
学生展开征文活动。
假如你叫
Jeeny
，
请根
据表格中的内容，写一篇英文小短文参加
活动。内容可以适当扩展，词数不
少于
70
词。
My school day
6:30 am
7:30 am
8:00 am
4:20 pm
5:00 pm
6:00 pm
9:20 pm
起床
上学
开始上课
放学
回家
吃晚饭
上床睡觉
I’m
Jenny.
I
get
up at
half
past
six
in
the
morning
and
then
I
have
my
breakfast.
I
go
to
school
at
half
past
seven
and I start work at eight
o
’
clock. We have seven
lessons a day.
I
finish
school
at
twenty
past
four
and
then
I
go
home
at
five
o
’
clock.
I
have
dinner
with
my
family
at
six
o
’
clock.
At
seven
o
’
clock
I
do
my
homework. I go to bed at twenty past
nine. What a busy day!
10
假如
你叫李浩，右面是你一天的活动，请根据
表格内容写一篇题为“
My school day
”的小短
文。词数：
80
词左右。
Activities
Get up
Time
6:00
7:00
7:40
9:30
12:00
2:00
5:20
6:30
7:00-9:00
9:30
Go
to school
Lessons start
Hello! I’m Li Hao. I get up
at six o’clock
Have a break
Have lunch
in the morning. I
go to school by bike at
Lessons start
Go home
seven o’clock.
Lessons start at twenty to
Have dinner
eight. There are four lessons in the
morning.
Do homework
Go to
bed
My school day
We have a
break at half past nine. I have
lunch
at school at twelve o’clock. Lessons start at two
o’clock in the
afternoon. I go home at
five twenty. In the evening, I have dinner at half
past six. I do my homework from seven
to nine. Then I go to bed at half
past
nine.
This is my school day. Can you
tell me about your school day?
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假如你叫
Lisa
，来自英国，现住北京。请用英语介绍自
己喜欢的蔬菜、饮料和
水果，并说明他们的健康情况。内容可适当拓展，词数不少于
70.
I
’
m
Lisa and I
’
m twelve years
old. I come from England.
I
’
m in Beijing
with my parents now. I like China very
much.
I eat rice and vegetables
every
day.
Sometimes
I
eat
noodles
with
beef
and
potatoes.
They
are
healthy
food. My favourite vegetables are carrots and
tomatoes. Cola is
my favourite drink
but it isn
’
t healthy. Too
much sugar is bad for us.
I
don
’
t like tea,
but my parents like it very much. I like fruit.
Apples are my
favourite . I eat two
apples a day.
12
假设一家英文报社正在以“
My good friend
”为题征集作品。请根据提示内容用
英文介绍你的好朋友，踊跃投稿
。内容可以适当扩展，词数不少于
70
。
提示：
1.
好朋友名字叫
Alice
，来自英国，现在北京教学；
2.
九点钟上课，周一和周五上午两节课；
3.
最喜欢中国饺子；
4.
认为北京市一座美丽的城市。
My good friend
I have a good
friend. Her name is Alice. She comes from England.
She
teaches English in Beijing now. She
starts work at nine o
’
clock
and she
gives
two
lessons
on
Monday
and
Friday
mornings.
She
likes
starting
lessons with English songs. And she is
kind to her students. They like her
very much.
Dumplings
are
her
favourite
Chinese
food.
She
can
eat
them
in
the
school
dining hall. She thinks Beijing is big and
beautiful.
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请根据下面的提示内容，用英语写一篇短
文，介绍两种你喜欢的动物。可以适
当扩展，不少于
70
词。
提示：
1.
有一个动物园，我喜欢那里的老虎和大象；
2.<
/p>
老虎大约两岁，来自哈尔滨，很强壮；
3.
大象是亚洲象，高大且性格温和。
There is a zoo near my
home. There are many kinds of animals in the
zoo,
such
as
bears,
zebras
and
giraffes.
They
come
from
different
countries
and
they
eat
different
food.
I
like
tigers
and
elephants
there.
There are two tigers and they are from
Harbin. They are about two years
old
and they are strong. They are a little dangerous
so I stay away from
them.
The
elephants
are
from
Asia.
They
are
big
and
tall
and
they
are
kind. So I usually stand
near them. The elephants like eating the grass in
my hands. What’s your favourite
animal?
14
请根据表格中内容提示，以“
A visit to the
zoo
”
为题介绍一下动物园里新来的两
只动物。词数：
60
词左右。
animal
name
from
food
character
age
panda
Feifei
China
Bamboo
Lovely, shy
2
lion
Karl
Africa
Meat
Strong,dangerous
3
A visit to the zoo
There are two new animals in the zoo.
The panda
’
s name is Feifei.
She is from China. She likes eating
bamboo. She is lovely and shy. She is
two years old. The other animal is a
lion. His name is Karl. He is from
Africa. He likes eating meat. He is
very strong and dangerous. He is three
years old. I love them very much.
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假设李敏是你的好朋友。请根据下面提示用英语写一篇短
文介绍李敏的学
习和生活。内容可适当拓展，不少于
70
词。
提示：
1.13
岁，在武汉上学；
2.<
/p>
每天早上八点开始上课，四节课，下午上三节课，五点半放学；
3.<
/p>
最喜欢计算机课，善用计算机做事情；
4.
周末通常玩电脑游戏或者打篮球。
Li
Min
is
my
good
friend.
She
is
a
thirteen-
year-old
girl,
and
she
studies in Wuhan. In the
m
orning, she starts work at eight
o’clock and she
has
four
lessons.
There
are
three
lessons
in
the
afternoon.
She
finishes
school at half past five in the
afternoon.
Her favourite subject is computer. She
is good at using the computer.
She can
write her homework and talk with her friends on
the computer.
At weekends she usually
plays computer games or plays basketball with
her friends. This is my good friend.
Who is your friend?
16
假如你在网上结识了一个名叫
Jenny
的网友，请根据她发的有关信息，向你的同学简单的介绍一下她。
I
have
a
net friend.
Her
name
姓名
Jenny
年龄
15
籍贯
英国伦敦市
学校
Apple Tree
School
家庭情况
父亲是老师
，母亲是经理，两个哥哥是工人，一个妹妹是学
生
爱好
爱吃米饭、肉和蔬菜；喜欢读书
、上网聊天（
chat
）
is
Jenny.
She
is
from
London,
England.
She
is
fifteen
years
old
and
studies
at
Apple
Tree
School.
There
are
six
people
in
her
family.
Her
father is a teacher and her mother is a
manager. She has got two brothers.
They
are workers. She has also got a sister. She is a
student too. She likes
to eat meat,
rice and vegetables. In her free time, she likes
reading and
chatting on the Internet
with her friends. I like my net friend very much.
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