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专题五
短文改错
第
1
讲
词法错误
[
真题演练
]
Passage 1
(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)(导学号
58210041)
In
the
summer
holiday
following
my
eighteen
birthday
，
I
took
driving
lessons.I
still remember how
hard
first day
getting into
the car
，
I thought I had
learned the instructor's
orders
，
so once I started the
car
，
my mind goes blank.I
forgot what he had said to me
instructor kept repeating the
word
，
“
Speed
up
！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！”I was so
much nervous that I could
hardly tell
which direction was left.A few minutes
late
，
the instructor asked me
to stop the was a relief and I came to
a suddenly stop just in the middle
on
the road.
答案：
eighteen
In
the
summer
holiday
following
my
birthday
，
I
took
driving
lessons.I
eighteenth
still remember how
hard
first day getting into the
car
，
I
so
once I started the car
，
but/yet
thought I
had learned the instructor's
orders
，
goes
my
mind
blank.I forgot what he had said
to me instructor kept
went
w
ord
Turning
repeating
the
，
“
Speed
up
！”“Slow
down！”“
left
！”I
was
so
much
words
Turn
nervous
that I could hardly tell which direction was
left.A few minutes
the instructor asked
me to stop the was a relief and I came to a
on
stop just in the middle
the road.
of
【语篇解读】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者学车第一天的经历。
71
．
解析：
词法
错误。
表达多少岁生日用序数词，
因此
eighteen
应该改为
eighteenth
。
答案：
eightee
n→eighteenth
72
．<
/p>
解析：
词法错误。句意：我仍然记得第一天有多艰难。表示第几天
，序数词前要加
late
，
later
suddenly
sudden<
/p>
定冠词
the
或者用限定词进行修饰。<
/p>
答案：
first
之前加
the
或
my
73
．
解析：
行文逻辑错
误。根据前后句意思可知这里表示转折概念，并非因果，所以把
so
改为
but
或
yet
。
答案：
so→but/yet
74
．
解析：
句法错
误。文章描述过去的经历，上下文均使用了相应的过去时态，这里应
保持一致，用一般过
去时，所以把
goes
改为
went<
/p>
。
答案：
goes→went
75
．
解析：
词法错误
。根据后面引号内的内容可知
word
应该用复数形式
words
。
答案：
word→words
76
．
解析：
句法错
误。根据前面教练发出的两个指令可知，这三个属于并列结构，都是
祈使句，都以动词原
形开头。
答案：
Turning→Tur
n <
/p>
77
．
解析：
句
法错误。
这句话中含有
so...that...(
如此……以至于……)结构，
故
much
在此处是多余的。
答案：
去掉
much
78
．
解析：
词法错误。“一
段时间＋later”表示多长时间之后，是固定用法。
答案：
late→later
79
．
解析：
词法错
误。此处
stop
是名词，名词前用形容词修饰，所以把
suddenly
改为
sudden
。
答案：
sudde
nly→sudden
80
．
解析：
词法错误。
in the
middle
of...
意为“在……的中间”，是固定搭配。
答案：
on→of
Passage 2
(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)
all
work in our live far from the
school
，
and it
takes them about a hour and a half to
go to work every their spare
time
，
they
are
interesting
in
planting
vegetables
in
their
garden
，
that
is
on
the
rooftop
of
their
often
get
up
earlier
and
water
the
vegetables
have
also
bought
for
some
gardening
，
they
often
get
some
useful
informations
from
the
summer
came
，
they
will
invite
their
students
pick
the
fresh
vegetables!
答案：
work
in
our
live
far
from
the
school
，
a
and
it
takes
them
about
hour
and
a
half
to
go
to
work
every
their
spare
an/one
interesting
that
time
，
they
are
in
planting
vegetables
in
their
garden
，
is
on
the
interested
which
rooftop
of
their
often
get
up
have
also
bought
some useful
earlier
and
water
the
vegetables
early
Beside
some
gardening
tools.
，
they
often
get
Besides
informations
came
from the summer
，
they will
invite
information
comes
their students
pick the fresh
vegetables!
【语篇解读】
本文是一篇记叙文。
文章主要介绍了一对张氏夫妇的工作以及他们的业
余爱好。
71
．
解析：
词法错误。
<
/p>
是两个人，
故用
both
。
因
both
在此作同位语，
也可以去掉。
all
指的是三者或三者
以上。
答案：
all→both
或去掉
all
72
．
解析：
词法错误。
hour
是以元音音素开头的单词，
前面要用不定冠词
an
。
表示“一
个小时”可以用
an hour
也可以用
one
hour
。
答案：
a→an/one
73
．
解析：
词法错误。
interesting
意为“有趣的”，多指事物；
interested
意为“感
兴趣的”，
多指人。
该句的主语是
they
，
故用
interested
。
be
interested
in
意为“对……
感兴趣”。
答案：
interesting→interested
74
．
解析：
句法错误。此处是非限制性定语从句，应用
which
而不能用
that
引导。
答案：
that→which
75
．
解析：
行文逻
辑错误。此处叙述他们经常早起这一事实，没有比较的意思，故不用
比较级。
答案：
earlier→early
76
．
解析：
词法错误。表示“买某物”直接用
buy sth.
。
buy
还可用于
buy
.
或
buy
sb.
，表示“为某人买某物”。
答案：
去掉
for
< br>77
．
解析：
词法错误。
此处表示“此外，
而且”，
应用
besides
。
beside“在……旁边”。<
/p>
答案：
Beside→Besides
78
．
解析：
词法错误。
information
是不可数名词，没有复数形
式。
答案：
information
s→information
79
．
解析：
句法错误。
when
引导的时间状语从句通常用一般现在时表示将来。
答案：
came→comes
80
．
解析：
词法错
误。invite do sth.“邀请某人做某事”。
答案：
pick
前加
to
Passage 3
(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)
The
summer holiday is classmates and I are talking
about how to do
during the can chose
between staying at home and take a we stay
at home, it is comfortable but there is
no need to spend in that
case
，
we
will
learn
little
about
we
go
on
a
trip
abroad
，
we
can
broaden
your
view
and gain knowledges we
cannot get from classmates suggest we can go to
places of interest nearby.I thought
that it is a good does not cost
many
，
yet we can still learn
a lot.
答案：
how
The summer holiday is
classmates and I are talking about
to
do
what
during the can
chose
take
between
staying at home and
a we
c
hoose
taking
but
sta
y
at
home
，
it
is
comfortable
there
is
no
need
to
spend
in
that
case
，
and
we will learn
little about
we go on a trip
abroad
，
we can broaden
your
knowledges
view and gain
we cannot get from
classmates suggest we
our
kno
wledge
thought
go
to places of interest nearby.I
that it is
a good
think
many
does
not cost
，
yet we can still
learn a lot.
much
【语篇解读】
本文主要讨论了暑假我们应该去做什么。
1
．
解析：
句法错误。
do
后缺宾语，应将
how
改为
what
。
答案：
how→what
2
．
解析：
句法错误。情
态动词后接动词原形。
chose
的原形是
choose
。
答案：
chose→choose
<
/p>
3
．
解析：
词法
错误。
between...and...
意为“在……和……
之间”，是固定结构。
and
前后连接的是并列成分。
and
前用了动名词
(staying)
，
and
后也应用动名词
(taking)
。
答案：
take→taking
4
．
解析：
行文逻
辑错误。
comfortable
与
n
o need to spend money
之间是并列关系，
不是转折关系。
答案：
but→and
5
．
解析：
词法错误。
world
是独一无二的事物，前面要加定冠词
the
。
答案：
world
前加
the
6<
/p>
．
解析：
行文逻辑错误。由前面的
we go on a trip
和
we
can broaden
可知，应把
your
< br>改为
our
。
答案：
your→our
7
．
解析：
词法错误。<
/p>
knowledge
意为“知识”，是不可数名词，没有复数形式
。
答案：
knowledges→k
nowledge
8
．
解析：
句法错误。
suggest
< br>在此处表示“建议”，后接宾语从句时，从句要用虚拟
语气，即谓语用“
should
＋动词原形”，
should
可以省略。
答案：
去掉
can
或者
can→shoul
d
9
．
解析
：
句法错误。由前面的
suggest
和后面的
does not
cost
可知，此处用一般现
在时。
I
thought
表示“原以为，本以为”。
答案：
thought→think
10
．
解析：
词法错误。
cost
表示“花费
(
时间、金钱等)”时，宾语是不可数名词，故
用
much
。
答案：
many→much
[
模拟演练
]
Passage 1
(2017·广州高三模拟
)(
导学号
58210042)
Last
night
，
I
dreamt
that
I
was
digging
a
hole
in
my
which
seemed
like hours of
digging
，
two objects come
into was mental them was
an old
treasure other object was an oil lamp covering in
was my
chance to get
rich
，
I thought.I was still
thinking about my new wealth while out
of
nowhere
20
sailor
wanted
for
me
to
lead
them
on
the
treasure
hunt.I
glad
ly
，
my alarm
clock
went off
and I woke
was
only a dream.
答案：
Last night
，
I
dreamt that I was digging a hole in my whichwhat
seemed like hours of
digging
，
two objects comecame
into was
mental
themit
was
an
old
treasure
other
object
was
an
oil
lamp
coveringcovered
in
was
my
chance
to
get
rich
，
I
thought.I
was
still
thinking
about
my
new
wealth
whilewhen
out
of
nowhere
20
sailorsailors
wanted
me to lead them on
the treasure hunt.I gladgladly
ly
，
my alarm
clock
went off and I woke was only a dream.
【语篇解读】
本文主要讲述了作者的一个荒诞离奇的梦境。
1
．
解析：
本句为名词性从句
，应用引导词
what
。
答案：
which→what
2
．
解析：
讲述的是
过去的事情，所以用过去时。
答案：
come→came
3
．
解析：
其中一个物
体是一个盒子，可数名词单数缺冠词。
答案：
mental
前面加
a
4<
/p>
．
解析：
指代
b
ox
，用
it
。
答案：
them→it
5
．
解析：
oil
lamp
被覆盖在泥土中，应用被动形式。
< br>答案：
c
overing→covered
6
．
解析：
根据结构
was/were doing
sth...when...“正在做某事，这时”，
was/were
about to do...when...
“将要做某事，
这时……”可知将
while
改为
wh
en
。
答案：
while→when
7
．
解析：
根据
20
个水手可知，
sailor
应用复数。
答案：
sailor→sailors
8
．
解析：
w
ant do
为固定搭配，删除
for
。
答案：
删除
for
< br>9
．
解析：
副词修饰动词，将<
/p>
glad
改为
gladly
。
答案：
glad→
gladly
10
．
解析：
wa
ke up
为固定搭配。
答案：
over→up
Passage 2
(2017·济宁高三检测
)
One
of the most important rule of finding happiness in
life is to do what you
love.I
remember
when
my
mom
takes
me
to
an
English
class
in
primary
school
，
I
suddenly
found that learn
English was fun and I really enjoyed voice at the
bottom
of my heart
said
，
“
Maybe I can
learn English well and become English
teacher.
”
It was
not easy at almost one and a half
year
，
I didn't do very well
in
all
my
English
ointing
and
frustrated
，
I
doubted
that
whether
I
could
follow
my
I
told
me
not
to
accept
this
l
，
my
grades
started
to
improve and I had much confidence than before.
答案：
One of the
most important rulerules of finding happiness in
life is to do what
you
love.I
remember
when
my
mom
takestook
me
to
an
English
class
in
primary
school
，
I
suddenly
found
that
learnlearning
English
was
fun
and
I
really
enjoyed
voice
at
the
bottom
of
my
heart
said
，
“
Maybe
I
can
learn
English
well
and
become
English
teacher.
”
It was
not easy at almost one and a half
yearyears
，
I didn't do very
well
in
all
my
English
exams.
and
frustrated
，
I
doubted
whether
I could follow my I told
not to
accept this reality.
，
my
grades
started
to
improve
and
I
had
【语篇解读】
本文主要讨论怎样才能生活的快乐。
1
．
解析：
one of
后面接名词复数。故
rule
改成
< br>rules
。
答案：
rule→rules
confidence
than
before.
2
．
解析：
根据语境可知，这里应用一般过去时。故
tak
es
改成
took
。
< br>
答案：
takes→took
3
．
解析：
f
ound
后面是宾语从句，宾语从句用动名词作主语。
故
learn
改成
learning
。
答案：
learn→learning
4
．
解析：
泛
指“一位老师”用不定冠词，
English
是元音音素开头的
单词，用
an
，或
者将
become
改成
turn
，
因为
turn
后面接名词不需要冠词。故
become
后面加
an
或
become
改成
turn
。
答案：
become
后加
an
或
becom
e→turn
5
．
< br>解析：
one and a half
后面接名词复数
。故
year
改成
years
。
答案：
year→years
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