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四、关于论文的总体审查意见
1. This
is a carefully done study and the findings are of
considerable interest. A few minor revision are
list
below.
2. This is a
well-written paper containing interesting results
which merit publication. For the benefit of the
reader
, however
,
a number of points need clarifying and certain
statements require further justification.
There are given below.
3.
Although these observation are interesting, they
are rather limited and do not advance our
knowledge
of the subject sufficiently
to warrant publication in PNAS. We suggest that
the authors try submitting their
findings to specialist journal such as
–
4. Although
this paper is good, it would be ever better if
some extra data were added.
5.
This
manuscript
is
not
suitable
for
publication
in
the
journal
of
–
because
the
main
observation
it
describe was reported 3 years ago in a
reputable journal of - .
6.
Please ask someone familiar with English language
to help you rewrite this paper
. As you
will see, I have
made some correction
at the beginning of the paper where some syntax is
not satisfactory.
7. We
feel that this
potentially interesting
study has
been
marred by an
inability to
communicate the
finding correctly in
English and should like to suggest that the
authors seek the advice of someone with a
good knowledge of English, preferable
native speaker
.
8.
The
wording
and
style
of
some
section,
particularly
those
concerning
HPLC,
need
careful
editing.
Attention should be paid to the wording
of those parts of the Discussion of and Summary
which have been
underlined.
9. Preliminary experiments only have
been done and with exception of that summarized in
Table 2, none
has been repeated. This
is clearly unsatisfactory, particularly when there
is so much variation between
assays.
10. The condition of incubation are
poorly defined. What is the temperature? Were
antibody used?
五、给编辑的回信
1. In
reply to the referee’s main criticism of
paper
, it is possible to say that
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One minor point raised by
the referee concerns of the extra composition of
the reaction mixture in Figure
1. This
has now been corrected. Further minor changes had
been made on page 3, paragraph 1 (line 3-8)
and 2 (line 6-11). These do not affect
our interpretation of the result.
2. I
have read the referee’s comments very carefully
and co
nclude that the paper has been
rejected on the
sole grounds that it
lake toxicity data. I admit that I did not include
a toxicity table in my article although
perhaps I should have done. This was
for the sake of brevity rather than an error or
omission.
3. Thank you for your letter
of
–
and for the
referee’s comments concerning our manuscript
entitled “”. We
have studied their
comments carefully and have made correction which
we hope meet with their approval.
4. I
enclosed a revised manuscript which
include
s a report of additional
experiments done at the referee’s
suggestion. You will see that our
original findings are confirmed.
5. We
are sending the revised manuscript according to
the comments of the reviewers. Revised portion
are underlined in red.
6. We
found the referee’s
comments most helpful and have revised the
manuscript
7. We are
pleased to note the favorable comments of
reviewers in their opening sentence.
8.
Thank you for your letter
. I am very
pleased to learn that our manuscript is acceptable
for publication in
Cancer Research with
minor revision.
9. We have therefore
completed a further series of experiments, the
result of which are summarized in
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