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英文论文审稿意见汇总

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1

、目标和结果不清晰。

It

is

noted

that

your

manuscript

needs

careful

editing

by

someone

with

expertise

in

t

echnical

English

editing

paying

particular

attention

to

English

grammar,

spelling,

and

sen

tence

structure

so

that

the

goals

and

results

of

the

study

are

clear

to

the

reader.

2

、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。

◆

In

general,

there

is

a

lack

of

explanation

of

replicates

and

statistical

me

thods

used

in

the

study.

◆

Furthermore,

an

explanation

of

why

the

authors

did

these

various

experiments

should

be

provided.

3

、对于研究设计的

rationale:

Also,

there

are

few

explanations

of

the

rationale

for

the

study

design.

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、夸张地陈述结论

/

夸大成果

/

不严谨：

The

conclusions

are

overstated.

For

example,

the

study

did

not

show

if

the

side

effects

from

initial

copper

burst

can

be

avoid

with

the

polymer

formulation.

5

、对

hypothesis

的清晰界定：

A

hypothesis

needs

to

be

presented

。

6

、对某个概念或工具使用的

rationale/

定义概念：

What

was

the

rationale

for

the

film/SBF

volume

ratio?

7

、对研究问题的定义：

Try

to

set

the

problem

discussed

in

this

paper

in

more

clear,

write

one

section

to

define

the

problem

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、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写

literatu re

review:

The

topic

is

novel

but

the

application

proposed

is

not

so

novel.

9

、对

claim,

如