2020年6月浙江省温州市高三模拟联考英语作文读后续写写作指导(含范文)

2020

年

6

月浙江省 温州市高三模拟联考

英语作文读后续写写作指导

一、续写原题

It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger, I knew if I didn't leave

the

house

soon

I

would

lose

my

temper

with

my

husband,

Joe

.

As

rain

came

down

in

sheets,

Joe

offered

to

take

me

to

work.

I

struggled

into

my

jacket,

seized

my

bag

and

teaching

plans and ignored him.

He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and

the dirty dishes still on the table.

of myself.

shouted

after me not

to take the

shortcut

(

捷径

).

Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack

that

past

spring

forced

him

to

leave

his

job

earlier

than

we

had

planned.

As

the

medical

bills mounted we

realized

I would have to continue working full- time while Joe

stayed home and took over the

housework

.

The

new

arrangement

was

a

disaster.

Exhausted

after

a

day

of

full

work,

all

I

wanted

was

a

hot

homecooked

meal

and

a

good

night's

sleep.

However,

what

greeted

me

at

the

table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal(

燕麦

) for several

nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover

Joe

had

turned

our

white

sheets

blue.

He

told

me

he

had

found

out

how

to

save

on

water,

soap and electricity. He

patted

his blue trousers and announced proudly washing

everything together was just the secret.

Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe's warning I turned off the main route(

道路

). I

thought it hadn't rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner,

water

rushed

across

my

path.

After

a

few

feet,

the

car

got

stuck.

I

opened

the

door

and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn't risk walking in this.

Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got

frightened

to death when I

heard three long honks(

喇叭声

).

注意：

1.

所续写短文的词数应为< /p>

150

左右；

2.

应使

5

个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，

每段的开头语已为你写好 ；

4.

续写完成后

,

请用下划线标出你所使用的

关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a

truck.

Paragraph 2:

I screamed that I couldn't make it.

二、下水思路

1.

确定主题

：

大主题是老夫老妻的爱情故事。