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（
1
）
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of
sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I
go to the bookstore with my
friends.
There was a lot of new books. I didn?t know what
one to buy because these books were all useful to
me. At
10:00, we went to cinema. The
film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but
some people were waiting outside the
booking office. It took us about two
hours to see it. Having been seen the film,
everyone was deeply moving. Some of
my
friends even burst into tear. That
?s a
really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.
What a happy day! I hope
tomorrow I will be even happier.
（
2
）
Dear Mary,
Our
city
had
changed
a
lot in
the
past
5
years.
Firstly,
more
high
buildings
have
appeared,
that
are
modern
and
beautiful. Many
overpasses have set up, so it has become very
convenient for people to travel. However, many
families
have got c
ar of
their own. The people?s life here has become rich
or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling
on
the holiday. To my delighted, I can
taste delicious food of different countries. And
now it is easy for me to keep touch
with you than before, for I can email
you in my office.
Yours,
Christine
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（
3
）
Patience is of great importance in our
daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.
30 minutes past, but no bus
came. Both
upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But
no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I
thought if I had
waited for one more
minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take
a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30
minutes. Only then do I realize my
problem. Being impatient will possible waste all
the effort that we have put it in. Now
whenever I am close to lose
my patience, I?ll think of this
experience.
（
4
）
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil
and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an
accident and hit another car, and I
needed to stay in a hospital for at
least two week. I called my parents, so I did not
tell them what had happened. I knew
that they will be worried about myself
because I was so farther away, and that my mother
would not sleep if she knew.
Therefore,
I told them interested stories and how I was
enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I
still think that it
was the right thing
to do.
（
5
）
Dear manager,
I?m one of your customer. The day
before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop.
Before I left, I do check it
carefully
and
everything
was
all
right.
When
I
got
home,
therefore,
I
found
a
fault
with
it.
The
problem
is
what
the
“Play”
doesn?t work at all. Probable it?s not your fault
and so is mine. Anyhow, I can?t solve the problem
in
see, a walkman is of great useful
for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too
long before this problem is solved.
Hopefully you will deal with the
walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.
Hoping to hear
of you in the earliest possible time!
Your sincerely,
Li
Hua
（
6
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Dear Jim,
I
am so exciting that you will come to China. I will
free from December 18 and will have a plenty of
time to be
together with you.
I?ll meet you at the
airport and then you will ta
ke No.8 bus
for my home.
You worry
about the
weather here in your email.
In fact, the weather here is quite different from
it in your city.
It isn?t
very cold, but you
needn?t bring many
clothes with you.
During
your stay here, I?ll take you to some
pla
ces of interests and you can taste
some local snacks.
I am sure we will have greatly fun
together.
I?m looking forward to
meeting you soon.
Yours,
John
（
7
）
Dear Miss Li,
I?m one of your
student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I
meet a great many difficulties when studied
English.
To begin with, it is very
difficult of me to memorize a large number of new
words. In addition, grammar is too complex
to understand, that has influenced my
English writing seriously. And my performance on
reading and correcting are not
satisfying.
Faced
with
such
a
dilemma,
you
hope
that
you
can
give
me
a
hand.
Would
you
provide
me
with
some
effectively approaches?
Secondly, I believe that I will have good command
of what you teach, if you will slow down
your speed in the class. There is no
doubt whether I will achieve great progress in
English learning with your assistance.
Thank you.
Yours,
Wang Min
（
8
）
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am
going to talk with what you should do when a fire
alarm go off. If you hear the
alarm,
stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to
lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and
classmate. Don?t
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panic or
get out of line,
and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the
firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it?s
a
false
alarm
and
there
is
no fire,
your
teacher
will
lead us
back
to
the
classroom.
If
you
notice
that
when
someone
is
missing and hurt, tell your teacher
immediately.
（
9
）
Nowadays there was a kind of language
called Web language. Some people even speak
Chinese mixed in English
words. This is
a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some
people think it makes no difference in helping
people
learn English. Besides, it will
ruin the Chinese language. However, the others,
especially the youngsters, are fond this
new language. They think it of special
help in expressing them. What?s more, it may make
the language to have more
uses. In my
opinions, it?s no good using this kind
of language. It may be popular, and you may also
get others confusing.
（
10
）
Nowadays, with the growing popularity
of computers, students were paying less and less
attention to handwriting.
According
to
a
recently
survey,
many
students
don?t
want
to
improve
their
handwriting
for
various
reason.
52
percent of them think that they can
just use a computer, so it is no need to waste
time improving our handwriting. 32
percent
believe
that
they
are
too
busy
with
the
study
that
they
have
no
time
to
practising,
and
16
percent
think
that
practicing handwriting
is useless.
As
the
saying
went,
writing
style
shows
the
man.
Beautiful
and
neat
handwriting
is
great
benefit,
especially
for
students. Therefore, in my opinion, the
more importance should be attached to handwriting
from now on.
（
11
）
I learned early in life that I had to
be more patient and little aggressive. From the
time I was about four until I was
about
six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when
the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got
angry and
broke it. For a while parents
bought me new toys. But before long they began to
see which was happening. When I tear
apart
my
fifth
birthday
toy
train,
my
father
said,
it.
No
more
toys
to
you.
My
punishment
lasted
a
year.
Meanwhile, I found out that with more
patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude
changed from then on.
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（
12
）
We were assigned a composition but I
was in good mood for it until this morning. It is
Sunday today, so I had a
good
sleep.
When
I
get
up,
I
had
a
strong
desire
do
something.
So
I
set
about
doing
the
toughest
thing
--
writing
a
composition. I had an
extreme quick head and a good idea upon other
rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about
500 words. I skimmed through my work
and was quite satisfying. It should be another
model composition. I stretched
myself,
intend to polish it after a rest, so something
unexpected had happened: the power failed
suddenly. And I forgot to
save the
file!
（
13
）
My father and I stayed at the South
Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last
month. It is in the downtown
area, but
it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by
public transport.
We
lived
in
a
comfortably
double-room
with
a
big
bath.
What
I
liked
best
were
the
free
high-speed
Internet
connection in the
room. I checked my email messages every day. I
also shared for my friends many photos taking in
Beijing. The food was wonderful with
reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local
dish.
It is such great hotel that I
would recommend it to any friend of me who is
going to Beijing.
（
14
）
Dear Diana,
Thank
you
for
the
lovely
day
we
have
with
you.
It
was
so
kind
for
you
to
let
us
bring
Anne's
friend,
Gina.
Unfortunate, the only problem was the
journey home. There had been a terrible accident
on the highway and, for a result,
there
was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.
In the end, we drove to a service station and
waited there unless the
road was clear.
In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as
car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.
They
finally dropped Gina off at her
parents' and made our own way to home.
Li Hua
（
15
）
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You can not
imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed
that I took part in a race. At first, I could not
to run
very fast and fell behind. So I
didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students
on the playground cheer me on,
was
so
encouraged
that
I
ran
faster
and
fast till
I
caught
up
all
the
other
runners.
I
felt
as
if
I
were
flying
like
a
superman. In an end, I got to the
finishing line first. I won the race. I felt
very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate
threw me up into the air. Just at that
time
，
I woke up and found me
still in bed!
（
16
）
It has been half a year after we
parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always
accompanied with me when l was
homesick. It was very kind of you to
make me feel at home and cooked such delicious
food for me.
Last night I had a dream.
It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you'
re coming to travel in China and you need
a English guide. I eager to get round
China with you but I have to prepare me for the
coming National Speech Contest. It
is
so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it.
Feeling sweet and bitterly
，
I
can't help crying.
So, why not
come to visit China one day? I really look forward
to be your guide.
（
17
）
I was a newly qualified foot-health
practitioner
（执业者）
. One day I
was in the phone to a female patient recently,
go over the details of an appointment.
I careful
wrote down her
address, phone number and the set
time
in case of I
forgot.
We
were
just
finished
the
conversation
when
she
said,
“I
hope
you
don?t
mind,
so
I
have
a
rather
strange
question.”
“of
course”
I
reply.“
Go
right
ahead.”
“Well,”
said
a
lady
nervously,
“I
was
wondering
if
they
offered
discounts because I only have one leg.”
Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said
yes without hesitation.
（
18
）
Li
Ming
and Wang
Ying
are
two
student
of Senior Three.
They
both
work
hard but
they
have
similar
learning
methods.
Li
Ming
often
sleeps
in
class
instead
of
listen
to
the
teachers.
As
result,
he
misses
lots
of
points
that
the
teachers make and it usually takes him
more time to finish his homework. So he has to
stay up lately and doesn't get
enough
sleep.
However,
Wang
Ying
has
quite
a
different
way
of
learning.
She
listens
attentively
and
tries
to
catch
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everything
which the teachers say in class. Because of this,
she spends more time doing her homework, which
makes it
possible for her go to bed
early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more
effective in class and has more free time to enjoy
herself, so I prefer to her learning
method.
（
19
）
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and
ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the
morning and two in the
afternoon.
We
didn?t
need
to
do
so
many
homework.
Therefore,
we
have
more
time
with
after
-school
activities.
For
example, we can do reading for one and
a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden.
There are all kinds of the flowers and trees
around the classroom buildings.
We can
lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake
listening music. The teachers here are kind and
helpfully. They are
not only our
teachers but also our friends.
（
20
）
I hardly remember my grandmother. She
used to holding me on her knees and sing old
songs. I was only four when
she passes
away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He
was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that
turned from black toward
gray
over
the
years.
He
had
a
deep
voice,
which
set
himself
apart
from
others
in
our
small
town,
he
was
strong
and
powerful.
In
a
fact,
he
even
scared
my
classmates
away
during
they
came
over
to
play
or
do
homework
with
me.
However,
he was the gentlest man I have never known.
（
21
）
When
I
walked
into
the
classroom,
the
teacher
was
handing
in
the
tests.
I
was
feeling
very
nervous.
I
had
studied at all at the weekend as I had
thought it would be easy test. I went through the
test for many times but I could
only
answer three out from the twenty questions. I did
not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book
under my desk,
opening it and started
looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking
at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a
hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught
me cheating.
I don't know what to say.
Luckily, the
teacher did not
punish
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