2017年雅思写作真题分析与高分范文

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首段简单介绍背景后，切入主题

In

this

contemporary

era

which

features

high

pressure

and

fierce

competitions,

ambition

is

a

powerful driving force on modern people's way to success. As the proverb goes that most people

would succeed in small things if they were not troubled with great ambitions.

主体段

1

回 应

How important is ambition for being successful in life?

这个问题。此次明显正面论证

ambition

对成功的重要性更好下手，

vivi d examples

可以使起来，牛顿等科学艺术政坛赫赫人物都可以

作为有力佐证

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It is believed that ambition is putting a ladder against sky. If Newton had no ambition to figure out

why apples fall down on the earth rather than flying to the sky, gravity can never be discovered; if

the allied nations in World War Two had no ambition to defeat the Nazism led by Hitler, massive

slaughter

would

be

recorded

in

human

history.

It

is

ambition

that

enables

individuals

to

be

equipped

with

self-motivation

and

self-discipline

that

are

regarded

as

indispensable

factors

for

overcoming

barriers

as

well

as

resisting

temptation

when

devoted

to

work

or

studies.

Unfortunately,

it

is

difficult

for

people

who

lose

ambitions

to

pursue

their

goals

or

make

themselves come out on the top even if their inspiration spring up every second.

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2

在

Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?

选择立场，这里注意和上一段有个对应，

如果上一段论述过程倾向

positive,

本段选择

negati ve

的立场不是很合适哟

~

论证过程同 样可以用

explanation

或

e xample

等方法

~

Although

a

heavy

ambition

is

often

thought

to

be

connected

with

the

greed

or

an

addiction

to

power, it is not the case. Ambitious people have courage and persistence to challenge tasks which

cannot be completed by ordinary people; have aspiration to break down the routine as well as to

fight

for

what

they

believe

in.

In

a

large

scale,

the

civilization

of

mankind

would

not

thrive

supposing that humans refuse to admit or achieve their ambitions.

尾段对全文的主要观点简要概括下

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In a word, ambition is one of the most crucial characteristics for human beings. It gives us goals

and pushes us to lead a life filled with satisfaction and glory. However, the realization of personal

ambition can never be at the expense of violating others' interest.

看完

2

月第一场 的范文启迪思路还不过瘾？回复可见其余场次写作真题范文哦

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2

月

16

日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1: The chart below shows the percentage of international students in Canada and USA,

also compare the three top source of countries in Canada and USA.

Task1

作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The

tables

illustrates

information

about the

number

of oversea

students

in

Canada and

the

USA

and how the number changed in two academic years.

As for Canada, most students came from China and the number experienced a dramatic increase

by 14%, rising from 3210 to 3741. The rest of the students mainly came from the USA and India,

both of which witnessed a moderate growth by 6% and 7%.

Yet the situation in the USA was quite different, with most students coming from India (10052 in

2002 and 14041 in 2003). And only a small number of students was from China, though the data

rose by 7% from 1741 to 2312. 6421 students came from Canada in 2002. However, this figure had

fallen to 5742 by 2003.

To

sum

up,

compared

with

Canada,

there

were

many

more

oversea

students

from

these

three

countries and the number of students in both countries witnessed a slight increase between 2002

and 2003.(162 words)

Task2: Some people think

best. Others think

views and give your own opinion.

Task2

作文范文与解析

Sample answer

：

第一段做同义改写

~

When it comes to

the issue

about city layout, some

people

may argue that filling a city with tall

buildings is an optimal choice while others believe that there should not be so many skyscrapers in

a city.

第二段讲支持多来点高层建筑的好处就是促进经济发展

~

On

the

one

hand,

a

city

full

of

tall

buildings

may

have

more

development

opportunities.

It

is

acknowledged

that

high-rise

buildings

mean

a

higher

spatial

efficiency

because

those

buildings

could

accommodate

more

enterprises.

Then,

some

industrial

zones

or

central

business

districts

may be constructed, contributing to more working opportunities.

第三段可以说一下没那么多高层建筑的城市更有人情味

~

On

the

other

hand, residents

may

have

a

stronger

sense

of

community if

there

are not so

many

high-rises.

When

people

reside

in

tall

buildings,

they

do

not

communicate

with

neighbors

frequently. However, if there were many low-rise buildings, residents would be more likely to meet

neighbors

in

public

areas

like

parks

where

they

could

communicate

mutually

or

take

exercise

together, but not just take an elevator to their floors and live a lonely life.

最后，两边平衡，表明不同的人适合不同的城市

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From my own perspective, vertical cities and horizontal cities have different characteristics and the

key question is what kind of life one pursues. Providing that a person is ambitious to fulfill his/her

life target, a vertical city may be a suitable choice because of more working opportunities there. In

addition, citizens who want a higher life quality should choose to live in vertical cities since more

services and high-tech products could be provided by enterprises. However, if a person prefers a

quiet life, dwelling in a horizontal city should be his/her first choice since the pace of life is slow

and leisurely.

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2

月

18

日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1: Compare and summarize the changes of Conference Center.

Task1

作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The proposed modification for a conference center is clearly illustrated in the given maps.

Before

reconstruction,

a

big

hall

is

located

right

in

the

middle

of

the

center,

with

two

meeting

rooms

located

to

its

west

and

a

car

park

to

its

southeast

with

a

long

path

connecting

the

road.

Next to the car

park, a mini-garden lies

in the northeastern corner of

the center while a toilet, a

reception and a cafe

，

with one adjacent to another

，

are situated in the southwest.

In

the

future

，

the

center

will

experience

huge

changes.

The

big

hall

will

be

downsized

to

make

room

for

a

newly-built

kitchen

and

the

relocation

of

the

cafe.

The

car

park,

similarly,

will

be

redesigned to leave room for the expanded garden and make parking more convenient with two

newly-constructed

paths

near

the

road.

The

meeting

rooms

will

shrink

in

size

but

increase

in

number and a fitting room will occupy the place of cafe.

Overall, the conference center is projected to become more user-friendly.(178 words)

Task2

：

Some people believe that developments of technology are making life more complex

and the solution for everybody is to accept a simpler life without using technologies. To what

extent do you agree or disagree?

Task2

作文范文与解析

Sample answer

：

Over

the

past

century,

science

and

technology

has

been

developing

unprecedentedly

and

changing

every

aspect

of

people's

lives.

In

my

point

of

view,

technology

brings

about

higher

efficiency

and

greater

convenience,

even

though

it

causes

confusion

and

disorder

under

some

circumstances.

The benefits of modern technologies are multiple. Automation is widely used on the assembly line,

setting free millions of people from the arduous and repetitive work. Thanks to the widespread use

of the Internet, people have easier access to information than ever before. Instead of going to the

library

to

consult

reference

books,

they

can

acquire

any

information

they

want

via

the

Internet.

Moreover,

emails

and

mobile

phones

enable

people

to

stay

in

touch

more

conveniently

and

efficiently,

compared

with

the

old

days

when

they

had to

go

to

the

post

office

or

visit

others

in

person.

Despite

the

above-mentioned

benefits,

we

cannot

deny

the

fact

that

technology

may

lead

to

complexity and inconvenience in some cases. For instance, some old people find it difficult to use

public facilities equipped with electronic-devices. However, this issue can be addressed with clear

instructions

provided.

Another

example

is

cyber

fraud,

which

is

difficult

to

prevent

as

the

false

information

can

spread

very

fast

on

the

web.

Those

who

get

deceived

may

complain

that

the

virtual space generates more crimes.

Overall,

there

is

no

denying

that

some

problems

and

troubles

may

occur

when

various

new

technologies are applied to people's lives. However, returning to a simple life without technology

is not a solution and I believe a better future of mankind lies with the further progress of science

and technology.(268 words)

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2

月

25

日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1:

The

first

chart

shows

the

number

of

people

per

kilometer

square

of

six

countries

in

2003. The second chart shows the percentage change of population in urban area of the six

countries

from

2003

to

2005.

Find

the

important

features

of

the

two

charts,

and

make

a

comparison between them.

Task1

作文范文与解析

Sample answer

：

The given bar charts compare the difference of population density in six countries in the year of

2003 and illustrate the population changes in these countries during the period of 2003 to 2005. It

can be seen clearly that Japan ranked the first in density of population and Sweden was the only

country that experienced negative population growth.

As is revealed in the first chart, Japanese lived much closer to each other with a total of 338 people

living in one square kilometer, followed by British and Italy. By contrast, the population density in

Australia and Canada were quite low (both were 3).

The second chart indicates that the period from 2003 to 2005 witnessed an overall upward trend in

population across the board with Sweden the only country bucking the trend. To be more specific

，

Australia

and

Canada

experienced

the

most

dramatic

increase

by

1.42%

and

1.06%

respectively,

while there was a less significant raise in other three countries.

Overall,

even

though

Australia

and

Canada had

relatively

low

population

density,

their

populace

were soaring with an astonishing rate.(191 words)

Task2:

Some

people

want

the

government

to

spend

more

money

looking

for

life

on

other

planets, while others think it is a waste of public money and there are many problems on the

earth. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Task2

作文范文与解析

Sample answer

：

Traditionally

，

it is widely believed that public funds should be put into essential sectors that bring

immediate and tangible benefits

but in recent years

，

the technology boom has introduced us a

seemingly promising field: study on aliens.

The investment on extraterrestrial beings, undeniably, can better prepare mankind for the future

both

technologically

and

emotionally.

Tracing,

analyzing

and

studying

the

extraterrestrial

intelligence

allows

us

to

embrace

alien

technology

since

human

beings

，

living

on

this

relatively

young planet

，

have incredible inventions and creatures on much older planets are highly likely to

possess

superior

device.

Additionally,

we

temporarily

have

no

clue

about

the

nature

of

these

hypothetical aliens and it is unwise to assume they are friendly. Spending money in studying them

enables us to learn their intrinsic quality and to know whether we should open our arms or put up

shields when they pay us a visit.

On the other hand, it is argued that this investment is money-wasting when living beings on the

earth are struggling for environment degradation and food crisis. The former, like smog and soil

contamination, has posed a threat to people's health condition and even survival. As for the latter

，

many

people

stricken

by

poverty

are

suffering

from

starvation

and

diseases

brought

by

malnutrition.

As

it

is

government's

unshakable

responsibility

to

ensure

citizens'

physical

and

emotional

well-being,

allocating

public

money

in

environment

protection

and

food

supply

is

thought to be a must.

In

conclusion,

both

sectors

have

their

reasons

for

requiring

money

and

I

believe

it

is

better

to

invest in solving urgent problems like environmental issues and food shortage since it may lead to

chaos and social instability if policymakers fail to settle these problems.(298 words)

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3

月

4

日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1:

The diagram shows the main stages of how smoked fish is produced.

（流程图）

流程图难度不大，只要看懂步骤，按照一般套路写作即可。

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题目总共有八个步骤，关键在于对步骤进行分类。在范文里将

1, 2,3,4

归为一个段落，因为都是描述制作

熏鱼之前的准备，

5

为一段，是从鱼变成熏鱼的过程，

6 ,7

和

8

为第三段，描述了熏鱼制作完 成后的分类运

输。当然，有其它的分类方法也可。不过以不超过四段为宜。

**

小作文要客观，有什么就写什么，切记主观推 断。

Task1

作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The flow diagram demonstrates eight steps of making smoked fish. The first step is to killing fish

and then empty the fish. The second step is to preserve fish in salt and water, which will cost thirty

minutes. Then, fish will be fired for five minutes before being put into a fish bucket.

The

first

four

steps

provide

a

good

preparation

for

the

fifth

step

and

also

the

most

important

process

which

is

called

smoking.

The

fish

bucket

is

made

of

wood.

The

burning

coal

is

at

the

bottom of the whole bucket, and covered by a layer of sawdust. The space between sawdust and

the top of bucket is packed with fish.

After the smoking step, all fishes will be divided into two types. One type is smoking fish which will

be

packed

in

boxes

and

the

other

type

will

be

further

processed

by

yellow

coloring

and

then

packed into buckets. Finally, all the boxes and buckets will be loaded into trucks. (162 words)

Task2:

Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. Why? How

to encourage positive attitudes?

Task2

作文范文与解析

Sample answer

：

第一段做同义改写，表明态度

~

In

the

current

era,

there

is

a

phenomenon

that

the

current

generation

does

not

hold

a

positive

view of study when they leave school. This essay will examine the possible reasons and potential

solutions for this phenomenon.

第二段，提一下理论和实际的差距，让一些人觉得学习没用

To begin with, students do not know how to use what they learn, which makes them dislike study.

Currently,

some

students

are

satisfied

with

what

they

have

learned

from

the

class,

but

actually

there exists a huge gap between what one learns and what one can do. For example, if a mechanic

just

learns

everything

from

a

manual

theoretically,

it

does

not

necessarily

mean

that

she

or

he

could

successfully

fix

a

car

immediately.

Thus,

in

lack

of

internship

and

working

experience,

students may find that lessons given by teachers cannot be directly used in work and it is natural

for them to neglect study on purpose.

第三段强调学习好不是成功的唯一原因，可以以高分低能的学霸为例 ，讲一下只擅长学习的他们的窘境

~

Additionally,

study

is

not

the

only

factor

for

success.

Some

students

regard

academic

performances

as

a

guarantee

for

job

seeking,

but

they

may

neglect

other

crucial

factors.

For

example,

communicative

skills

are

emphasized

in

almost

every

enterprise

currently.

If

a

person

does

not

know

how

to

cooperate

and

coordinate

with

peers,

even

if

he

or

she

has

a

good

academic performance, they may not be accepted by enterprises. Thus, it is the ignorance of social

skills that makes some candidates fail to secure employment, but they may attribute their failure to

learning.

第四强调下实习的重要性

~

In

order

to

spark

young

people’s

interest

in

studying

and

alter

t

heir

negative

attitude

towards

study,

universities

and

colleges

should

provide

them

with

more

internship

opportunities

before

graduation,

through

which

they

could

link

what

they

learn

in

class

with

practice.

Then,

after

graduation,

they

could

secure

employment

in

a

shorter

time

with

their

working

experience.

Meanwhile,

when

they

do

internships,

it

is

an

excellent

opportunity

for

them

to

learn

how

to

communicate with their workmates, improving their ability to cooperate and coordinate.

最后一段小总结就好啦

~

In sum, lacking working experience and social skills may account for the reason why young people

do

not

want

to

learn

when

they

leave

school

and

universities

and

colleges

should

take

this

responsibility and provide more internship positions to them.

< br>看完

3

月第一场的范文启迪思路后，是不是对其余

3

场充满好奇呀

~

建 议先自己尝试写下作文再看答案哦

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3

月

18

日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1:

Please

describe

the

information

on

both

pictures

and

then

make

comparison

and

contrast if necessary.

Task1

作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

The given two charts illustrate how the value of trade

between China and Australia has changed

from 1998 to 2004 as well as how the trade volume of four types of goods imported from China to

Australia varied between 2003 and 2004.

It can

be

seen

clearly

from

the

first

chart that the

given

period

witnessed

an

increasing

trend

in

both imports and exports. To be more specific, the former tripled from $$6 to $$18 billion while the

latter experienced a less significant increase, rising from $$4 to slightly more than $$10 billion.

As for the second picture, it indicates

that all

types of imported goods gained popularity except

clothing, which was the most popular in 2003 but replaced by toys and sports goods one year later.

Despite a slight increase ($$500 to $$ 800 billion), furniture stilled ranked last. The trade volume

of

telecommunication goods, on the other hand

，

rose much more dramatically from $$1500 to $$ 2500

billion.

Overall,

the

net

exports

in

Australia

were

negative

and

the

deficit

was

gradually

increasing

from

1998 to 2004 and the toys and sports goods were the most welcomed in 2004. (200 words)

Task2:

Children

can

learn

effectively

through

watching

TV.

Therefore

children

should

be

encouraged to watch TV regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree

or disagree?

Task2

作文范文与解析

Sample answer:

Traditionally, classroom-based education was the main source of knowledge but in recent years, it

is not uncommon that children are taking advantage of the television to study. Consequently, it is

suggested that they watch TV programs both in and out of school. In my opinion, it is beneficial for

their all-round development despite some drawbacks.

Initially,

the

educational

programs

on

TV

can

help

to

consolidate

knowledge

learnt

in

class.

For

example, documentary and public service advertisement about the environment

，

usually shown at

dinner,

can

disseminate

information

about

our

great

mother

nature

and

the

environment

problems facing today's world. This can be more impressive than lessons in their textbooks.

The

entertaining

programs

during

lunch

break

at

school

can

also

facilitate

their

learning.

To

be

more

specific

，

most

of

the

entertainments

aiming

at

children

are

inventive

and

fantastic.

The

vibrant colors and brilliant ideas can always attract them easily and contribute to developing their

creativity and innovation before they realize it.

Some

may

worry

that

the

unhealthy

information

on

TV,

like

violence

and

pornography,

would

mislead students, who are often considered as having no strong sense of right and may imitate the

wrongdoings

blindly.

However,

this

can

be

avoided

if

strict

censorship

is

enforced

to

grade

the

programs and ensure that students are enjoying appropriate shows when

it is their TV time and

that is exactly why they should watch TV in a regular manner.

In

conclusion,

television

programs

benefit

students

both

academically

and

spiritually

and

they

should be allowed to watch TV as long as they are protected from the malicious information.

(280 words)

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3

月

25

日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1:

The

chart

shows

the

percentage

of

dependents

in

total

population

in

5

countries,

compared the number in 2000 and the projections in 2050 (dependent: 15

岁以下的儿 童和

65

岁以上的老人

)

Task1

作文范文与解析