7分评分标准及范文

考官

7

分评分标准

(a). task response:

?

addresses

all

parts of the task

?

presents a

clear position throughout

the reponse

?

presents, extend and supports

main ideas, but there may be a tendency to

over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.

(b). coherence and cohesion

?

logically organizes

information and ideas, there is clear progression throughout

?

utilises a range of

cohesive devices

appropriately although there may be some

under-or over use

?

presents a

clear topic

within each paragraph

(c). lexical resource

?

uses a

sufficient range

of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

?

uses

less common lexical items

with some awareness of style and collocation

?

may produce

occasional errors

in word choice, spelling and/or word formation

(d). Grammatical range and accuracy

?

uses a variety of

complex structures

?

produces

frequent error-free sentences

?

has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a

few mistake

几篇

7-8

分的范文

1. Argumentation

–

社会类

In

many

countries,

traditional

foods

are

being

replaced

by

international

fast

foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what

extent do you agree or disagree?

Recent decades have witnessed an obvious trend that

international fast foods have

gradually

taken the place of

traditional foods in many regions.

Although

fast foods may

bring about some direct benefits in people's daily lives,

I personally believe that

these

foods

exert an adverse impact on

both families and societies.

It is undeniable that

international fast foods, such as hamburgers and fried chickens,

have

helped

people

save

time

for

cooking

and

extricated

them

from

a

series

of

complicated

cooking

processes

that

are

used

in

cooking

traditional

foods.

This

is

especially true when we consider the fact that

nowadays more and more people are

participating in the labour market and undertaking an enormous amount of work. However

,

the negative effects induced by these fast foods

should not be ignored

, since they are,

actually or potentially,

detrimental to

individuals and societies.

For families, one of the most direct influences induced by fast foods is that they worsen the

quality of people's health.

It is widely accepted that

international fast foods

have long

been criticised as

junk food because they contain a considerable number of calories with

high level of heat and fat. If people

get accustomed to

eating these foods, they may

be

easily stricken with

some severe chronic diseases, such as heart disease, high blood

pressure, cancers

and so forth

. Therefore, these foods,

to some extent

,

render

people

weak

in combating diseases.

For

societies,

the

introduction

and

the

growing

popularity

of

international

fast

foods,

directly

and

indirectly,

takes

its

toll

on

the

protection

of

traditional

culture.

It

is

generally acknowledged that

the culture of diets and foods

is an indispensable part

of

traditional culture, which reflects the unique character of a nation. If local people prefer

to

eat fast foods rather than cook traditional foods, the recipes of traditional foods will

gradually disappear

.

Consequently

, local citizens may lose a sense of cultural identity and

social

belonging.

Hence,

this

is

unfavourable

to

the

carrying

forward

of

traditional

culture.

To

conclude,

although

international

fast

foods

may

provide

people

with

some

direct

benefits,

they

pose

a

serious

threat

to

people

’

s

health

and

the

preservation

of

traditional

culture.

Therefore,

people

should

pay

attention

to

the

negative

effects

of

these fast foods and properly change their diet structure.

考官评分

(

按 照上述

4

项评分规则

)

：

7

，

8

，

8

，

8

总分：

7.5

2. Argumentation

–

政府类

Many people arts and music do not improve the quality of life, the government

should

spend

money

on

other things

rather than

the

arts

such as music and

painting, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of whether

governments should spend money on the arts

has sparked off

an

intense

debate

.

Some

people

argue

that

art

and

music

are

conducive

to

the

improvement

of

people

’

s

lives;

while

others

claims

that

it

is

of

great

urgency

for

governments to allocate money to the areas that are in need.

To my way of thinking

,

the governments should

give priority to

some basic social systems, such as education

and medicare programs

instead of

subsidizing the arts.

To begin with

, art and music

are not the key determinant of

a good quality of life.

It

is not uncommon that

the arts such as music and painting are a meaningless symbol to

many because

from their perspective

, those arts cannot generate direct benefits for

them. Therefore, subsidizing artist cannot help the public

get rid of

the heavy burdens of

their lives.

In

addition

,

it

is

more

urgent

for

governments

to

commit

money

to

some

fundamental social systems like education and public health.

This is simply because

a

well- rounded

social

system

is

the

guarantee

of

the

enhancement

of

the

quality

of

people

’

s

lives.

Investing

in

education

is

a

good

case

in

point

.

It

is

of

paramount

importance

to

equip

the

public

with

abundant

knowledge

and

impact

a

proper

outlook on life to

them.

Consequently

, the citizens can

become competent enough

to maintain their daily lives

by means of

their own efforts.

Obviously

,

it is money and

knowledge that contribute to

the improvement of people

’

s lives.

Admittedly

, arts and music,

to some extent

,

serve a valuable function

in enriching

people

’

s daily lives and help them to foster a positive attitude towards life. However

, they

are

by no means a unique tool

to achieve this goal. In fact, art and music

are not an

actual prescription to extricate people from

an array of worries and burdens.

To conclude

,

I concede that

the arts can

play a favourable role in

improving the

quality

of

people

’

s

lives.

Nevertheless

,

I

am

convinced

that

governments

should

attach heavier weight to

other sectors, such as education and medical care, which

are

considered as an essential way to

enable

people

to

live a decent life.

3. Argumentation

–

广告类

Many

people

argue

that

nowadays

consumers

buy

lots

of

goods

they

don

’

t

actually need because they are influenced by advertisements. To what extent

do you agree or disagree?

Although

it

is

widely

accepted

that

the

prevalence

of

advertisements

plays

a

positive

role

in

stimulating

consumers

to

go

shopping,

it

is

not

true

to

consider

advertisement

as the chief culprit of

the fact that consumers buy

a host of

things that

they do not need. In fact, some social factors, such as peer influence and celebrity effect,

contribute to

this phenomenon. Therefore, I disagree with this statement.

It

is

undeniable

that

advertisements

have

exerted

a

considerable

impact

on

triggering people to buy goods. Some advertisers may exaggerate the quality of products

in

an

attempt

to

mislead

customers,

thereby

promoting

sales

of

products.

Consequently

, customers

bear

the

brunt

of

these advertisements and purchase

an

array of

useless goods. However

, with the enforcement of relevant laws

in the realm

of

protection of consumers

’

rights, the advertisements

are no longer the main cause to

lead consumers to buy things that they do not need.

In

fact,

peer

influence

is

attributed

to

this

situation.

With

the

improvement

of

living

standards and the increase of disposal incomes, people

tend to

compare with their peers

and flaunt their wealth, so that they can enjoy the sense of accomplishment and vanity.

As

a result

, people

are gradually addicted to

buying goods, especially luxurious goods,

for the purpose of

gratifying their vanity. Obviously, those products

serve no helpful

function in

satisfying their real needs.

In addition

, some people, especially young teenagers, are significantly influenced by the

celebrities that endorse the products. They

tend to imitate their

idols

with

a

view

to

expressing their love and spiritual support for those stars. Accordingly, they may buy the

products

that

their

idols

are

in

favour

of

.

Hence,

such

purchasing

behaviour

is

not

actuated by

the needs of those products

To

conclude,

advertisements

have

a

certain

influence

on

customer

’

s

purchasing

behaviour

.

Nevertheless,

peer

influence

and

celebrity

effect

are

the

major

cause

of

people buying

a vast number of

goods that they do not actually need.

4. Argumentation

–

犯罪类

Giving

detailed

descriptions

of

crime

by

newspaper

and

television,

someone

says it could make bad consequence; this kind of media should be restricted. To

what extent do you agree or disagree.

The issue of whether

mass media should give detailed descriptions of crime

is of great

concern

to

the

public

.

From

my

perspective

,

it

exerts

an

advese

impact

on

individuals

and

society.

Therefore,

the

media

should

be

constrained

in

the

amount

of

details they report.

Admittedly

, giving detailed descriptions of crime can

serve as a warning to

potential

criminals, which reduces the possibility of the occurrence of similar crimes. Also it helps

people to

strengthen the awareness of

crime-prevention by popularizing the protective

actions against crime. However

,

the negative influences resulting from

these detailed

illustrations of crime

should not be ignored.

To begin with

, victims who

suffer from

crime

bear the brunt of

it. Giving detailed

demonstrations

of

crime,

to

some

extent

,

forces

those

victims

to

experience

the

nightmare

again.

Consequently

,

it

will

lead

them

to

be

afflicted

with

chronic

psychological

problems,

such

as

nervousness,

anxiety,

fear

and

so

forth

.

Also,

those

programs may give the public an illusion that they

are surrounded by

a considerable

number of

would-be criminals. Obviously, people may lose a sense of social security and

find it difficult to

trust others. Under this circumstance, the alienation of interpersonal

relationships

will ensue

.

In addition, those programs may give some would-be wrongdoers a chance to imitate the

anti-social behaviours that were described in the programs.

It seems that

those shows

do

nothing

but

indirectly

encourage

some

to

commit

a

crime.

As

a

result

,

the

whole

society will

fall prey to

it.

To conclude

,

I concede that

giving detailed descriptions of crime can

serve a positive

function

in combating the crime.

Nevertheless

,

I am convinced that

it

comes with