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一：具体化：
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我是一个老师
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我是一个英语老师
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我是上
海环球雅思主教雅思写作的老师
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关键
：一双慧眼：能够
敏锐地
找出一个句子中
比较笼统的，适合用具体化的思路进
行改写的对象。
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In the last century, the first man
walking on the moon said:“ It is a big step for
mankind.”
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In the last century: In the 1960’s(20
世纪
60
年代
);
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Man: American
astronaut Armstrong;
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Said: announced
In
the
1960’s,
when
American
Armstrong
landed
on
the
moon
for
the
first
time,
he
proudly
announced
that it was a
great step for the mankind
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二：单词转换：
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优先转换：动词；形容词
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Food
can
be
produced
much
more
cheaply
today
because
of
improved
fertilizers
and
better
machinery.
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Produce; cheaply; improved; better;
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Produce-----
manufacture
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Cheaply-----economically
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(improved;
better)------advanced
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Nowadays,
people
can
manufacture
food
much
more
economically
thanks
to
more
advanced
fertilizers and
machinery.
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谓语动词转换：
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英语句子不外乎是两种结构：
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实义动词和
be
动词结构
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因此可以在
什么怎么样和什么是什么之间
进行
切换
来实现改写。
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Many
people
say
teachers
should
only
teach
students
academic
subjects;
Others
say
teachers should also
take the responsibility of teaching students to
judge what is right
and
wrong.
Discuss the both viewpoints and
give your own opinion.
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第一句：
teach sb sth :
（什么怎么样
---
什么是什么）
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老师只应该教学生功课（什么怎么
样）
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教好学生功课是老师唯一的职责（什么
是什么）
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Some
people
believe
that
it
is
the
sole
task
for
a
teacher
to
introduce
academic
knowledge to the students.
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下面一句试试看：
Others
say
teachers
should
also
take
the
responsibility
of
teaching
students to judge what is right and
wrong.
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(1)Some
others
hold
that
a
truly
outstanding
teacher
should
be
the
mentor
of
both
knowledge and life to their
disciples.
(2)Some others
say
the responsibility of a
teacher
are
not
just
passing on professional skills,
but
also the improvements of
sound
judgment
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Although the practice has its benefits,
the potential problems
should never
be
ignored.
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Despite the benefits,
on no
account
should the potential problems
be ignored.
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(
五
)
加上常用句型：
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Air
travel
has
benefited
a
lot
of
people,
but
it
is
claimed
that
non-essential
travel
should be
reduced.
To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
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