考研大作文指导及范文解析

2

）

Exemplification

：举例论证

A.

Numerous examples can be given, but this/these will suffice.

B.

I can think of no better illustration than the following one(s).

C.

This/These case(s) effectively clarify that…

3

）联系现实：以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体 想为群体，具体想

为抽象

（

4

）正反论证：

3

）

Summary

：小结，概括论证，总结本段，

1

句

3

、

Conclusion

/

归纳结论，

4

句左右

1

）

Concluding sent ence

：结论句，呼应象征寓意，

1

句

2

）

Suggestions 1

、

2

：两点建议（针对双方提建议）或两句 评论，

2

句

3

）包装结尾、展望未来：

1

句，考研 写作三大优秀句型

（

1

）倒装句：

Only in this way can we

solve this problem.

只有这样我们才能解决这个问题。

（

2

）强调 句：

It

is

persistent

work

that

is

conducive

to

your

grasping

a

considerable

vocabulary.

只有长期学习才有助于你掌握大

的词汇量。

（

3

）虚拟语气：

It is high time that

we solved this problem.

我们早就该解决这个问题了。

七、大作文：

1.

< br>伦理道德：冲刺班二十大必背范文之十一

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,

you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

In

the

picture

above

is

an

old

man

tumbled

on

the

road

accidentally.

Unfortunately, a great many passers-by are hesitant about giving the old man a hand.

Seeing that,

nobody would like to be responsible for the accident.

The above picture reminds me of the recent heated discussion about whether

to

assist

the senior citizens

who are suddenly sick or injured.

Such discussion is

a

shame for the society, for

helping people in

distress

should be considered as

the

basic

social

morality

and

traditional

virtue.

Unfortunately,

the

debate

indeed

broke out after

several help-givers were successively reported to be falsely identified

as

offenders

and

sentenced

to

pay

economic

compensation.

Due

to

those

cases,

people

worry

that

the

assistance

recipients,

especially

aged

people

with

poor

judgment,

may

fail

to

tell

right

from

wrong

and

helping

them

will

probably

incur

troubles.

This

thought halts people’s attempt

to

help

and has

indirectly

murdered

some aged people. Several months ago, an old man died after falling because nobody

dared to offer assistance.

Such tragedy should never recur. To achieve it, firstly,

helping aged people in

need

should be advocated. More importantly, efforts should be made to protect

the benefits of those who

provide help.

Only in these ways, can we be sure that, on

one

hand,

the

elderly

receive

timely

aid

and

on

the

other

hand,

warm-hearted

people

never

suffer

from

loss.

After

all,

just

as

Ernest

Hemingway,

the

great

American

writer

said,

“I

know

only

that

what

is

moral

is

what

you

feel

good

after and what is immoral is what you feel bad after”.

(272 words)

2

、图表作文：经济问题，

2011

年英语（二）真题，冲刺班二十大必背范文之十二

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)

interpret the chart and

2)

give your comments.

You should write at least 150 words.

Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

2008

< br>、

2009

年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图

（从左至右：国产品牌、日系品牌、美系品牌）

The chart above demonstrates clearly that some changes have taken place in

terms of the

car market of China.

Based upon the data of the chart, one can see

that

the percentage of domestic cars

has been on a rise, while

the sales percentage of

cars

made

in

Japan

has

witnessed

been

on

a

decline.

In

the

year

of

2008,

the

percentage of cars made in China

was nearly

25%,

while within no more than

a year,

it went up to nearly

33%.

The percentage of

cars made in Japan

was

35%,

while it

went down to

25%

in

2009.

It’s no difficulty for us to come up with some possible factors to account for

this trend. At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and

society, more and more people prefer

civil products to foreign ones.

It

’s reported

that,

approximately

55%

of

families

in

Chinese

big

cities

are

found

cars

made

in

China.

In addition, we must admit that the government appeals to us to

support

our native industries.

Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that,

the

cars made in China

are increasingly qualified.

Taking into account what has been argued,

we can come

to the conclusion

that this established trend is positive and therefore acceptable. And I am firmly

certain that this trend will continue in the years to come.

(232 words)

3

、

2000

年真题：环境问题，冲刺班二十大必背范文之十三

Directions:

A.

Study

the

following

two

pictures

carefully

and

write

an

essay

in

at

least

150words.

B. Your essay must be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET2.

C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:

1.

Describe the pictures.

2.

Deduce the purpose of the painter of the pictures.

3.

Suggest counter measures.

As is vividly/symbolically

shown/described/depicted/illustrated/re vealed/portrayed in the

cartoons/drawin gs/portrayals/photos/photographs/pictures, with the

rapid/speedy social and economic development

,

the number of

fishes

has

sharply

decreased

.

In one picture

,

there were

various kinds of fish and only one

fishing-boat in 1900.

On the contrary

, in 1995

there was

only one fish, but many

fishing-boats.

The

purpose/aim

of

the

pictures

is

to

show

us

that

due/utmost

attention/importance/significance

should/must/has

to

be

paid/attached

to

the

decline of ocean resources.

Owing /Due to/Because of

over-fishing,

the number of

fishes

has obviously shrunk. If we let this situation

go/continue

as it is, we do not

know

where

fish

will

be

in

the

near/forthcoming

future.

By

that

time,

our

environment

will

suffer

a great destruction.

Therefore/Hence/Accordingly,

it

is

imperative/necessary

for

us

to

take

drastic/effective/some/several

measures/steps/actions.

For

one

thing

,

we

should

appeal

to

our

governments/authorities

to

make/legislate/enact/issue/establish

strict

laws

and

regulations

to

control/regulate

commercial

fishing.

For

another

,

we should

enhance/increase/cultivate

the awareness/sense of people that

the ocean

resources

are

very/extremely

vital/essential/crucial

to

us

.

Only

in

this

way/by

doing so can we

protect

our ocean resources.

Also, I assume/maintain/reckon that

we

humans

can

overcome/surmount

this

difficulty,

and

we

will

have

a

bright/brilliant

future.

4.

青年面对社会（ 自立）

/

两代关系：

2003

年真题，二十大必背范文之十四

Directions:

Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay about 200 words based

on the following

1.

describe the set of drawings and interpret its meaning

2.

point out its implications in our life.

The set of drawings

above vividly

depict

the destiny of a flower in

different

circumstances.

As is shown in the first cartoon,

the flower is placed in a comfortable

greenhouse

that

shelters

it

from

the

threatening

lightning

and

storm.

With

proper

temperature,

moisture

and

fertilizer,

the

flower

is

growing

in

full

bloom.

On

the

contrary,

when

removed

from

the

greenhouse

and

exposed

to

the

driving

rain,

the

flower soon fades and withers, with the petals scattered on the ground.

To

begin

with,

the

purpose

of

the

drawings

is

to

show

us

that

the

flower

growing in the green house cannot withstand the test of the storm

, yet the symbolic

meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously.

The delicate flower

is

naturally

associated

with

young

people,

to

be

specific,

the

only

children

in

our

current society

;

the greenhouse

epitomizes

parents’ doting care and abundant material

supplies that can shield the children from the storms, or the harsh reality.

Once the

young

people

begin

to

seek

independence

and

accept

challenges

from

the

real

world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.

Accordingly,

it

is

vital

for

us

to

derive

positive

implications

from

these

thought-provoking

drawings.

On

the

one

hand,

we

can

frequently

use

them

to

enlighten

the

youth

to

be

more

independent

in

life.

On

the

other

hand,

parents

should be sensible enough to

give their children more freedom to deal with troubles

and problems

. Only by

undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity

can young

people

cultivate

strong

personality

and

ability,

and

only

in

this

way

can

they

become winners in this competitive world.

(271 words)

5.

青年面对社会（合作）

：

2008

年真题，冲刺班二十大必背范文之十五

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,

you should

1)

describe the drawing briefly,

2)

explain its intended meaning, and then

3)

give your comments.

You should write neatly on Answer Sheet 2.

As is vividly depicted in the picture,

two disabled men are running fast through

teamwork

although

each

of

them

has

only

one

leg.

Obviously,

it

is

teamwork

that

makes it possible for them to

go anywhere they want to.

Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the

development

of

economy

and

society,

competition

is

increasingly

fierce.

It

is

impossible for anyone to

finish a work all by himself.

Hence, people in mounting

numbers

put

great

emphasis

on

teamwork.

In

fact,

it

has

been

universally

acknowledged that

the ability of teamwork

is the most essential qualification that

anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.

Accordingly,

it

is

imperative

for

us

to

take

some

measures

to

enhance

the

sense

of

teamwork

in

our

society.

We

should

bear

in

mind

that

teamwork

is

of

great significance to both our society and ourselves. Every one should have the

ability of

teamwork.

Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way

can our society become more harmonious to live in.

6.

流行文化（网络）

：

2009

年真题，冲刺班二十大必背范文之十六

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,

you should

1)

describe the drawing briefly,

2)

explain its intended meaning, and then

3)

give your comments.

As is symbolically

illustrated

in

the

cartoon,

a

large

number

of

people

are

surfing on line within a

stretching spider web,

either to entertain themselves or to meet the work's needs.

Unfortunately, it seems rather ironic to present people

separated from each other

by the spider web when they attempt to communicate.

Undoubtedly,

the spider web

serves as a symbol of

Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each

other.

The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality

of

the

relationship

between

man

and

Internet.

On

the

one

hand,

there

is

no

denying

that

Internet

is

currently

one

of

the

most

efficient

media

used

for

interpersonal communication

. As a college student, I

get on line every day to discuss

news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to

chat freely through MSN Messenger with my friends.

But on the other hand, a good

many

people

admit

that

they

are

too

much

addicted

to

Internet

to

maintain

face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues.

Once indulged in the fictitious

world,

people

feel

reluctant

to

approach

others

and

to

concentrate

on

real

life.

That's why some people have lost the skill of

direct contact

and get alienated from

others.

Hence, it is necessary for us to

use Internet

in a reasonable way and restrain

from overindulgence. After all,

Internet

is invented to connect you and me, and to

bring

conveniences

to

our

life

rather

than

set

a

barrier

to

keep

people

beyond

reach.

(249words)

7.

文化问题：

2010

年真题，冲 刺班二十大必背范文之十七

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,

you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended meaning, and then

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

文字说明：佛 、梁祝、解构、人本、功夫、毕昇、儒、礼、后现代、老舍、

莎士比亚、爱因斯坦、道、 仁、天鹅湖、启蒙、京剧等

As

is

symbolically

illustrated

in

the

portrayal,

there

is

a

boiling

hot

pot

containing

various

ingredients

of

multi-cultures.

These

pluralistic

cultures

can

be

categorized as

celebrities home and abroad as Bi Sheng, Lao She, Shakespeare and

Einstein,

philosophical

concepts

as

Buddhism,

Taoism,

Confucianism,

Goodness,

ritual,

humanism,

Enlightenment,

post- modernism

and

deconstruction,

as

well

as

performing

arts

as

Beijing

Opera,

Gong

Fu,

Liang

Zhu

and

Swan

Lake.

We

are

informed that

the cultural “hot pot” is both delicious and nutritious.

The

purpose

of

the

cartoonist

is

to

show

us

that

instead

of

being

outdated

and

of

little

value

in

a

rapidly

modernizing

world,

cultural

blending

s

hould

be

encouraged

and

maintained.

On

the

one

hand,

mosaic

cultures

are

part

of

the

universal heritage of humanity and they are powerful means of

bringing together

diverse

peoples

and

social

groups.

Consequently,

cultural

integration

has

become

indispensable

as

a

means

of

promoting

further

cultural

development

and

maintenance. On the other hand, for China, as for any other rapidly developing

country, there is a danger that age-old customs and traditions may become lost in

the shadows of modernization.

If

Gong Fu, Beijing Opera or Swan Lake Ballet

ever

perished from the earth, it would be a tragedy of immeasurable proportions.

In my view,

multi-cultures

can be kept alive by the people with the time to do

so,

and

is

extremely

vital

in

ensuring

a

community’s

future

development

and

prosperity. As a consequence of successful commercialization efforts, unwavering

government

support

and

growing

interests

overseas,

the

future

of

cultural

blending

looks brighter and more secure than ever before.

(254 words)

8.

职业道德（食品安全）

：冲刺班 二十大必背范文之十八

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,

you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

Recently, the problem of

food safety

has received increasing concern all over

the

country.

In

the

portrayal

presented

to

us,

a

large

number

of

people

are