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强调实践重要性的大学英文作文
【篇一：大学英语作文
the differences
between college
study and high school
study
】
the
differences between college study and high school
study
when i ’m
a high school student, i’m longing for the college
life very much. from my point of view,
the college study is free
and easy .
now i have been staying in the university for one
and a half year which shows that my
previous thought isn’t
true. it is very
different between college study and high school
study .
at high school, the students’ subjects
are same. but at college,
the students
can have subjects they like. in high school, your
teacher often spent time going over the
assigned reading and
the assigned
problems in class or going over important points
again and again. in college, learning
does not take place
primarily in the
classroom, and you, not your professors, are
responsible for what you learn. in high
school, the teacher
planned most of
this time for you. in college it is you who must
be responsible for this time. managing
this shift in
responsibility is one of
the most important things you can do
to
increase your likelihood of success.
knowing the differences in the way
learning is structured at
college can
help you be successful. the key is to understand
how important your time is and to use
it well. here are some
tips for using
your learning time effectively:
plan a balanced schedule of activities
including school, work,
sleep and
fun.
take good class notes
and study your notes as soon after
class as possible. if this is not
possible reserve some time the
days of
your classes to review the material. remember
academics are your primary
responsibility.
college is
different than high school, but you can be
successful and still have fun. get
yourself a good planner, do
your
scheduling, and have a great year!
when i m a high school student, im
longing for the college life
very
much.
[
推荐词汇
] very
在写作中使用
的太多，可考虑换为
extremely,
exceedingly, remarkably,
intensely
。
improperly implemented, dials can be
extremely difficult to
manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
between 1890 and 1930 the woman
suffrage movement
became exceedingly
militant.
一八九
○
年到
一九三
○
年间妇女争取
选举权运动变得
非常激烈。
the surface of mars
is remarkably diverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
he
was so informed and intensely forceful.
他是那么见多识广，极了不起。
?
?
[
语法检查
] a high (wrong
article) [
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: college,
university, institute, school, academy
均含有
“
学院，大学
< br>
”
之意。
from my point of view, the college
study is free and easy .
now i have been staying in the university for one
and a half
year which shows that my
previous thought isnt true.
?
?
? [
点评
]
建议将
one and a half
year
改为
one and a half
years,
这
是习惯用法。
[
语法检查
] a half (wrong
article) [
学习提示
]
易混词
汇
: previous,
foregoing, preceding, prior, former
均可表
示
“
在前
的
”
之意。
?
[
错误搭配
] half
year
冠词缺失，建议改为
half a
year
it is very different
between college study and high school
study .
?
[
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: different, various,
diverse
均含
“
不同的
”
之意。
at
high school, the students subjects are
same.
?
? [
推荐词汇
] same
在写作中使用的太泛，可考虑换为
identical
?
等。
[
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: issue, subject, theme,
topic
均有
“
主题，
话题
”
之意。
but at college, the students can have
subjects they like.
in high
school, your teacher often spent time going over
the
assigned reading and the assigned
problems in class or going
over
important points again and again.
? [
高分词汇
]
important
可以考虑替换为
高分词汇
crucial
或
essential
crucial: extremely important/critical:
it is crucial that the report should
be on time
essential:
(something) very
important/indispensable:
it
is essential that you should take out a proper
insurance.
it is essential
for the applicant to wear a dark suit.
?
?
[
中式英语
] assigned...problem
在英语本族语中很少使用，建议
检查
[
搭配统计
]
动名搭配
spend...time
在教材中出现过
次
?
?
[
语法检查
]
请根据上下文确认本句时态是否正确
[
学习提示
]
易混
词汇
: problem,
question, issue, matter
均含
“<
/p>
问题
”
之意。
in college,
learning does not take place primarily in the
classroom, and you, not your
professors, are responsible for
what
you learn.
?
[
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: know, learn,
comprehend, understand
都含
“
懂，知道，明了
”
之意。
< br>
in high school, the teacher
planned most of this time for you.
? [
语法检查
]
请根据上下文确认本句时态是否正确
in college it is you who must be responsible for
this time.
managing this
shift in responsibility is one of the most
important things you can do to increase
your likelihood of
success.
?
?
? [
高分词汇
] increase
在做
“
增加
”
讲时，是普通词汇，建议替换
soar
[
点评
]
表达不规范，建议将
things
改为
thing
。
[
搭配统计
]
动名搭配
manage...shift
在教材中出现过
次
?
[
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: control, direct,
govern, manage, rule,
supervise,
administer
均有
“
管理，
支配
”
之意。
knowing the differences in the way
learning is structured at
college can
help you be successful.
?
[
推荐词汇
]
successful
在做
“
胜利的
，成功的
”
讲时，是普通词汇，
建议替
换为
triumphant
they tried to stir the peoples of the world into
triumphant
action.
他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。
they tried
to stir the
peoples of the world into
triumphant action.
他们试图激励人民
大众的无限热情。
they tried to stir the
peoples of the world into triumphant
action.
他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。
? [
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: difference,
distinction, discrepancy,
discrimination
都有
“
差别，区别
”
之意。
the key is to understand how
important your time is and to use
it
well.
?
[
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: know, learn,
comprehend, understand
都含
“
懂，知道，明了
”
之意。
here are some
tips for using your learning time effectively:
plan a balanced schedule of activities
including school, work,
sleep and fun.
? [
学习提示
]
易混词汇
: contain, include,
embrace, involve,
comprehend, hold,
comprise
均含有
“
包括，包
含
”
之意。
take good class notes and study your
notes as soon after
class as
possible.
?
[
推荐词汇
] good
在写作中使用
的太泛，可考虑换为
positive/rosy/promising
或
pleasurable
等。
every time you press a key, you hear
a faint but positive
sound.
每次你按下键盘，你都可以听到微弱，但是正面的声音。
he was rosy and decidedly well
fed.
【篇二：
2013-201
2
年大学英语四级写作答案】
2013
年
12
月大学英语四级写作
【作文<
/p>
(
一
)
】
the impact of the internet on
the way people communicate
internet does exert such a profound effect on our
life that it
revolutionizes the way of
people’s living and thinking. as is
subtly revealed in the
portrayal
，
there are parents
sitting in
the front of
computer
，
who are chatting
with their child on the
internet. what
a meaningful picture!
互联网也产生了深刻影响我们的生活，它变革了人们的生活方式和
思维方式
。正如在描绘中所揭示的那样，有父母坐在前面上网的人
和他们的孩子聊天。一幅有意义
的画！
from my perspective,
the electronic contact cannot replace
face to face communication owing to the
following factors. to
begin with, over-
reliance on electronic contact will damage the
interpersonal relationship, for the
cold machine never replaces
a warm-
hearted greeting face to face. for example, the
aged
parents would like their only son
who works far away home to
come back
home more often rather than to talk with him on
the
internet occasionally. what’s more,
face to face communication
is
preferable because it is beneficial to build a
harmonious
society, for it attaches
more importance on human affection
and
feelings instead of convenience and speed.
从我的角度看，
由于以下因素的影响，电子接触不能代替面对面的交流。首先
，过
度依赖于电子接触会损害人际关系的研究的关系，为冰冷的机器无
< br>法代替一个热心的面对面问候。例如，年迈的父母会喜欢他们离家
出走的独生子回
家，而不是和他在网上偶尔地聊天。更重要的是，
面对面交流是可取的，因为它有利于构
建一个和谐社会，因为它更
重视人类的感情和感觉，而不是方便和速度。
hence, it is necessary for us to
use internet in a reasonable
way. after
all, internet is invented to connect you and me,
and
to bring conveniences to our life
rather than set a barrier to
keep
people beyond reach. if we want to keep our
interpersonal relationship more
effectively, we should spend
more time
with them face to face in real life. only in this
way
can we not only make full use of
the communication tool on
the net but
also make our relationship tighter.
因此，我们有必要以合理的方式使用互联网。毕竟，互联网是
发明
来连接你和我，并为我们的生活带来方便，而不是设置一个障碍让
< br>人们遥不可及。如果我们想让我们的人际关系更有效，我们就应该
在现实生活中花
更多的时间去面对现实生活中的人际关系。只有这
样，我们才能充分利用网络上的交流工
具，也使我们的关系更紧密。
【
作文
(
二
)
】
people are crossing the
street looking at their cell phones and
using sticks in order to see.
< br>人们正穿过马路，看着他们的手机，
用棍棒看路。
the impact of the mobil
e
phone in people’s life
the
thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common
phenomenon in contemporary society that
there is the
negative influence of
mobile phone. as is subtly shown in the
picture
，
so many
people are too much addicted to cell phones
that they use walking sticks to see the
road. what a meaningful
cartoon!
引人深思的绘画反映了当今社会普遍存在的现象，即手机的负面影
响。正如图中
所示的那样，这么多的人太沉溺于手机，以至于他们
用手杖去看路。多么有意义的卡通！
it is to me that indulging
in mobile phones produces native
influences on body and mind. first and
foremost, overusing
mobile phones is
detrimental to physical health for watching
mobiles for a long stretch definitely
impairs one’s eyesight.
suppose that a
man is addicted in cell phones in
whatever situation, it will be very
disadvantageous for him to
concentrate
on his work, learning, or daily life and is very
likely
to hurt him. furthermore,
overusing cell phones adversely
affects
state of mind. an addict may stay inside his
bubble
instead of pursuing other
endeavors, which eventually
prevents
the growth of think skills.
这是对我来说，沉迷于手机产生对身体和思想的原生影响。首先，
过度使用手机是有害于身体健康的，长时间的看手机一定会损害你
的视力。假定一个人
在任何情况下都会沉迷于手机，对他来说，把
精力集中在工作上、学习上、日常生活中是
很不利的，很可能会伤
害他。此外，过度使用手机影响精神状态。一个吸毒者可能留在他
的泡沫里，而不是追求其他的努力，从而最终阻碍了思维技能的增
长。
it is high time that we
took effective measures to curb this
trend. i cherish a belief that cell
phones themselves are good
or bad and
we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a
good control over them.
该是我们采取有效措施来遏制这一趋势的时候了。我坚信手机
本身
的好或坏，我们可以从我们只要好好控制受益很多我对他们。
【作文
(
三
)
】
漫画对白：
once i learn how to use
google, isnt that all the
education i
really need?
一旦我学会如何使用谷歌，是不是所有的教育我真的需要？
the impact of the internet on
learning
as is vividly
shown above, a teacher and a pupil stand in front
of a blackboard, talking about the
relation of internet and
education. the
pupil, holding a smart-phone in his hand,
questions whether he needs any other
education or not, with
the mastery of
google.
如上图所示，老师
和学生站在黑板前面，谈论网络与教育的关系。
那学生手上拿着一个智能手机，他是否需
要其他教育的问题，随着
谷歌的掌握。
while the internet has greatly
impacted how to learn,
education
doesn’t simply means learning to acquire
information because of the following
two factors. on one hand,
education is
very inclusive, so leaning to obtain message is
usually a part of it. if we
overemphasize students’ ability of
acquiring information, we will fail to
educate the young to be
developed
fully. on the other hand, it is only a passive way
of
learning to obtain information,
which do not parallel to creative
thinking that is essential for
education.
虽然互联网
已经极大地影响了如何学习，教育不只是意味着学习获
得信息，因为以下
2
个因素。一方面，教育是非常包容的，所以倾
向于获
得信息通常是它的一部分。如果我们过分强调学生获取信息
的能力，我们将不能充分地培
养年轻人的发展。另一方面，它只是
一个被动获取信息的学习方式，这与创造性思维的不
平行，这对教
育是至关重要的。
thus, while putting emphasis on education, we
should
cultivate the youngsters’
awareness of obtaining the
knowledge in
many aspects rather than just by the internet.
only in this way, can our society be
more harmonious; can our
economy be
more prosperous, and we, as individuals,
embrace more promising
perspective.
因此，
在把重点放在教育的同时，我们应该培养青少年在很多方面
获得知识的意识，而不是通过
互联网。只有这样，我们的社会才能
更加和谐；我们的经济会更加繁荣，我们作为个人，
更具前景的前
景。
2013
年
06
月大学英语四级写作
【作文
(
一
)
】
图画作文：
一屋不扫何以扫天下
we
cansee clearly from the cartoon there is a father
talking
with her
son.
havingheard his son’s words that “ dad, i am a bit
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