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英语满分作文句法分析表
1
When
a
country
develops
its
technology,
the
traditional
skills
and
ways
of
life
die
out.
It
is
pointless
to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with this opinion?
Sentence No.
句首
句中
句末
expressed
分词，
后置定语
out
宾语从句
“traditional
skills
and
ways
of
life”
are
not
automatically
of
one
country,
but
of
a culture or
community
（注意
be
of
结构）
1.
Overall,
I
disagree
with
the
Overall,
副词
opinion expressed.
2.
I would like to begin
by pointing
out
that
“traditional
skills
and
ways
of
life”
are
not
automatically
of
one
country,
but
of
a
culture
or
community.
3.
In
many
ways,
the
history
of
In
many ways,
civilization
is
the
history
of
介词短语
technology:
from
the
discovery
of
fire
to
the
invention
of
the
wheel
to
the
development
of
the
Internet,
we
have
been
moving
on
from
previous
ways of doing
things.
4.
Some
technologies,
such
as
weapons
of
mass
destruction,
are
of
negative
impact.
5.
Others,
such as
medical advances,
positively
help
people
to
live
better
or
longer,
and
so
very
much
help
traditional ways of life.
6.
Surely,
few
people
would
seek
to
副词
preserve
such
tradition
as
living
in
Surely,
caves.
7.
Interestingly,
technology
can
副词
positively
contribute
to
the
keeping
Interestingly,
alive of traditional skills and ways of
life.
8.
For
example,
the
populations
of
介词短语
some
islands
are
too
small
to
have
For example,
normal schools.
9. Rather than breaking up
families
by sending children to the
mainland,
education
authorities
have
been
able
to
use
the
Internet
to
deliver
schooling online.
by
pointing
that…
介词短语
介词短语
from
A
to
含有介词的名词短语：
B to C
ways of doing
things
from the discovery of
fire
to
the
invention
of
the
wheel
to
the
development
of
the
Internet,
插入语
be of
结构
,
such as
weapons of
are of negative impact
mass destruction,
插入语
并列句
,
such
as
medical
and
so
very
much
help
advances,
traditional ways of life
含有动名词的名词短语
…the
keeping alive of…
介词短语
Rather
than
breaking
up
families
by
sending
children
to…
1
10.
In
addition,
the
Internet
and
介词短语
modern
refrigeration
techniques
are
In addition,
being
used
to
keep
alive
the
traditional
skills
of
producing
salmon.
11.
It can now be ordered
from, and
delivered to,
anywhere in the world.
conclusion,
without
suggesting
介词短语
that
all
technology
is
necessarily
In conclusion,
good,
I
think
it
is
by
no
means
“pointless”,
in
any
way
,
to
try
to
keep traditions alive with
technology.
13.
We should not ignore technology,
because
it
can
be
our
friend
and
support our way of
life.
含有介词的名词短语
the
traditional
skills
of
producing
salmon
插入语，并列关系
, and delivered to,
介词短语，插入语
介词短语
without
suggesting
with
technology
that…
插入语，强调
,
in any way
,
原因状语从句
because
it
can
be
our
friend
and
support our way of life
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本文核心词汇分析
本文的关键词
/
短语一共三个，处理技巧分析如下
technology
1.
原词重现
technology
2.
微调
Some
technologies
3.
省
略
Others
，
the traditional skills and ways of
keep them alive
life
1.
重
现
“traditional
skills
and
1.
替换词
preserve
ways of life”
2.
previous ways of doing
things
3.
traditional ways of life
2.
contribute
to
the keeping
alive
of
（第
7
句）
3.
重现
keep alive
（第
10
句）
4.
重
现
try
to
keep
traditions
alive
（第
12
句）
4.
原词重现
technology
（
第
7
句）<
/p>
4.
such tradition
as living in caves
5.
替换词
the Internet and modern
5.
重现
traditional
skills and ways
5.
替换词
support
our
way of life
refrigeration
techniques
（第
10
句）
of life
（第
7
句）
（第
13
句）
6.
原词重现
technology
（
第
12
句）
6.
the
traditional skills of producing
salmon
（第
10
句）
7.
原词重现
technology
（
第
12<
/p>
句）
7.
our way of life
（第
13
句）
8.
原词重现
technology
（
第
13
句）
9.
代词替换
it
（第
13
句）
点评：不是所有词都可以找到替换词，很多基础词汇可能没有合适的替换词。
提醒：没有把握坚决不要找同义词替换，以免出现表达不当甚至偏题或跑题。
建议：多想想代词替换法和词汇短语微调（不改变核心词，如
本文部分词汇、短语的处理方法）
2
指点迷津：
1.
语法学习初级阶段应该以简单句为核心，如何把简单句写
好（精确）并增加变化是关键；简单句都无法
亮化的话，针对从句、复杂句的训练都是徒
劳。
2.
介词短语、非谓语动词、插入语是增加单句句子信息含量以及句法变化的主要手段。
3.
传统的语法学习要么思维错误
要么过于繁杂，往往以词汇为中心，而不是站在句子的整体高度（
at
the
sentence
level
）
4.
以句首、句中和句末为特点的语法分析简化了语法学习，
学习效果却要好得多。按照写句子的顺序，任
何句子都必须先想好句首如何书写（主要是
三种：比如以介词短语开路，从句开路，或者副词打开一个句
子；当然，也可以考虑含有
动名词的名词短语作为主语）
，再想想句子中间的写法（三种：并列句为主，
其次是插入语，最后是定语从句）
，最后再考虑句末增加一些什么变化（三
种：介词短语，非谓语作状语
或者后置定语，从句）
5.
从句的学习应该尽量简化：建
议重点学习三种状语从句（原因、条件和让步）
；名词性从句的学习以背
诵固定的句型为主；形容词性从句也需要重点训练。
6.
分析的文章越多就越是头脑清醒，也可以多掌握一些搭配
和从句；大小作文大抵如此，小作文更简单。
3
英语满分作文句法分析表
2
In
many countries children are engaged in some kind
of paid work. Some people
regard
this
as
completely
wrong,
while
others
consider
it
as
valuable
work
experience,
important
for
learning
and
taking
responsibility.
What
are
your
opinions on this?
Sentence No.
1.
The
issue
of
children
doing
paid
work
is
a
complex
and
sensitive
one.
句首
含<
/p>
有
介
词
以
及
动
名
词
的
名
词
短
语
The
issue
of
children
doing paid work…
句中
句末
含
有
代
词
one,
指
代
（
referencing
）是一种重要的
逻辑衔接手段
a
complex
and
sensitive
one
2.
It
is
difficult
to
say
who
has
固定句型
宾语从句
宾语从句
the
right
to
judge
whether
It
is
difficult
to
…who
has
the
right
whether
children
working
is
children
working
is
?wrong?
or
say…
to
judge…
?wrong? or
?valuable?
?valuable?.
3.
Opinions will also differ
as
to
?learning?
benefits:
no
doubt
teachers and factory
owners
, for
example,
would
have
varying
concerns.
4.
An
important
consideration
is
the kind of work
undertaken
.
5.
Y
oung
children
doing
arduous and
repetitive tasks on a
factory
production
line
,
for
example,
are
less
likely
to
be
?learning?
than
older
children
helping in an old
people’s home
.
<
/p>
冒号后面是同位语从句，
是对
前面句子内
容的解释；另外，
for example
做插入语使用
句
末
出
现
分
词
作
后
置<
/p>
定
语
（
unde
rtaken
）
程度控制
are less likely to be
?learning? than older children
< br>（
分
词
结
构
作
后
置
定
语
）
helping
in
an
old
people’s
home
含
有
动
名
词
的
名
词
插入语
短语
Young
children
for
example
doing
arduous
and
repetitive
tasks
on
a
factory
production
line
<
/p>
可数名词
issues
(
可
6.
There
are
health
and
safety
issues
to be
considered
as well.
< br>不
定
式
作
后
置
定
语
t
o
be
数名词一般不可以
cons
idered
（逻辑衔接）
as
well
单独使用，需要添
加冠词或
使用复数
)
含有强调句
it
is
this
type
of
exploitation
that
should be
discouraged
7. It is an
unfortunate fact that
many
employers
may
prefer
to
use
the
services
of
children
simply
to
save
money
by
paying
them
less
than
adults
and
it
is
this
type
of
exploitation
that
should be
discouraged.
含有同位语从句
It is
并列句连接词
and
an
unfortunate
fact
that
…
simply
to
save
money
（介词短语）
by
paying
them
less
than
adults
8.
However,
in
many
countries
副词
However,
逻辑
children
work
because
their
转折
families
need
the
additional
income,
no matter how
small
.
原因状语从句
让步状语从句
no
matter
how
because
their
small
（省略
it
is
）
families
need
the
additional income,
4
9. This was certainly the
case in
代
词
this
并列句连接词
the
past
in
many
industrialized
(referencing
,
避
免
and
countries,
and it is very
difficult
重复
)
to
judge
that
it
is
wrong
for
children
today
to
contribute
to
the
family income
in this way.
含有宾语从句的并列句
it
is
very
difficult
to
judge
that
it
is
wrong
for
children
today
to
contribute to the family income
in this way
10.
Nevertheless,
in
better
副
词
< br>Nevertheless
，
插入语
economic
circumstances
,
few
（逻辑转折）
in
better
economic
parents
would
choose
to
send
circumstances
their
children
out
to
full-time
paid
work.
11.
If
learning
responsibilities
and
work
experience
are
considered
to
be
important
,
then
children
can
acquire
these
by having light, part-time
jobs
or
even
doing
tasks
such as helping
their
parents
around
the
family
home
,
which
are
unpaid,
but
undoubtedly
of
value
in
children
?s
development.
5
条<
/p>
件
状
语
从
句
If
learning
responsibilities
and
work
experience
are
considered
to
be
important
,
含有介词短语
并
列
句
but
（
省
略
are
）
by
having
light,
undoubtedly
of
value
in
part-time
jobs
or
children?s development
even
doing
tasks
such as helping their
parents
around
the
family home
插入语
which are
unpaid,
★
本文核心词汇分析
本文的关键词
/
短语一共四个，处理技巧分析如下
:
children
paid
work
completely
wrong
valuable
work
experience,
important
for
learning
and
taking responsibility
1.
原词重现
wrong
1.
原词重现
valuable
1.
原词重现
children
1.
原词重现
paid work
2.
原词重现
children
2.
同根词
working
2.
灵活替换
2.
替换
it
is
this
type
of
?learning?
benefits
exploitation
that
should be
discouraged
3.
原词重现
wrong
of
work
3.
替换
?learning?
4.
基本重复
If
learning
responsibilities
and
work
experience
are
considered
to be
important
5.
指代
these
6.
< br>替
换
…
（
are
）
of
value
in
children
?s
development
3.
原词重现，
增加形
3.
替换
容
词<
/p>
作
对
比
Youn
g
the
kind
children
undertaken
4.
原词重现，
增加形
4.
替换
arduous
容
词
作
对
< br>比
older
doing
repetitive tasks
children
5.
原词重现
children
6.
代词
them
7.
原词重现
children
and
5.
替换
the services
of children
6.
动词
work
7.
灵活替换
to
contribute
to
the
family
income
in
this way
8.
原词重现，
添加形容词
full-
time paid work
8.
代词
their
9.
原词重现
children <
/p>
10.
原词重现
children
9.
灵活替换
(u
npaid)jobs
10.
灵活替换
(unpaid)tasks
11.
原词重现
children
12.
代词
their
13.
原词重现
children
6
英语满分作文句法分析表
3
Happiness is considered very important
in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving
happiness?
Sentence No.
1.
Happiness
is
very
difficult
to
define,
because
it
means
so
many
different
things to different people.
2.
While some
people
link happiness
to
wealth
and
material
success,
others
think
it
lies
in
emotions
and
loving personal relationships.
句首
句中
原因状语从句
because
it
means
so
many
different
things
to different people
句末
时间状语从句
While
some
people
link
h
appiness to…
固定搭配
link
< br>…
to
…
插入语
rather than
并列连词
either
…
or
…
宾语从句
others
think
it
lies
in
emotions
and
loving
personal relationships
The
(only)way
to
do
=way of doing
3.
Yet
others
think
that
spiritual
并列连词，
yet,
逻辑
paths,
rather
than either the material
转折
world
or
relationships
with
people,
are
the only way to
true
happiness.
4.
Because
people
interpret
happiness for themselves in so many
different ways,
it is
difficult to
give
any
definition
that
is
true
for
everyone.
5.
However,
if
there
are
different
kinds
of
happiness
for
different
individuals
then
the
first
step
in
achieving
it
would
be
to
have
a
degree of self-knowledge.
6.
A person needs to know
who he or
she
is
before
being
able
to
know
what
it
is
that
makes
him
or
her
happy
.
原因状语从句
固定句型
Because
people
it is difficult to
…
interpret
happiness for
themselves
in
so
many
different ways
副词
however,
逻辑
转折
条件状语从句
if
there
are
different
kinds
of
happiness
for…
定语从句
it
is
difficult
to
give
any
definition
that is true
for
everyone.
介词短语作后置定语
(
含
介
词
的
< br>名
词
性
短
语
)
.…
then
the
first
step
in
achieving
it
would
be
to
have
a
degree
of
self-knowledge
宾语从句，表语从句
before
being
able
to
know
what
it
is
that
makes him or her happy
同位语
all
固定搭配
contribute
to
宾语从句
A
person
needs
to
know
who
he
or
she
is
…
such as
插入语
7.
Of course,
factors
such
a
s
loving
介词短语
relationships, good health, the skills
Of course
to
earn
a
living
and
a
peaceful
environment
all
contribute
to
our
happiness,
too.
8.
But
this
does
not
mean
that
but,
逻辑转折
people
without
these
conditions
cannot
be happy.
代词，
this,
代上面所
宾语从句
强调句
(
双重否定
)
…
this
does
not
…
people
without
these
mean
that
people
conditions
cannot
be
7
指，避免重复；
9.
Overall, I think
an ability to keep
副词，
overall
clear
perspectives
in
life
is
a
more
essential
factor
in
achieving
happiness.
10. By
that I mean
an ability to have
介词短语
a clear
sense of what is important in
By that
our lives
(the welfare of
our families,
the
quality
of
our
relationships,
making other
people happy, ect.)
and
what
is
not
(a
problem
at
work,
getting
annoyed
about
trivial
things,
etc.).
11. Like self-
awareness, this is also
very
difficult
to
achieve,
but
I
think
these
are
the
two
factors
that
may
be
the
most
important
for
achieving
happiness.
介词短语
like self-awareness
固定句型
…
is difficult to
…
without
…
happy.
宾语从句
…
I
think
介词短语作后置定语
an
ability to
…
in
achieving happiness.
不定式作后置定语
…
I think an ability to
keep
…
不定式作后置定语
介词短语含宾语从句
…
an ability to have
…
a
clear
sense
of
…
a
clear senses
…
and
…
what
is
< br>not(
省略
句
)
…
and
连接两个宾语从句
并列连词，
but
，
转折
宾语从句
but
I
think
these
are
the
two
factors
that
may
be
the
most
important
for
achieving
happiness.
定语从句
…
the
two
factors
that
may
be
the
most
important
for
achieving
happiness.
8
★
本文核心词汇分析
本文的关键词
/
短语一共四个，处理技巧分析如下
:
happiness
difficult to define
1.
重现
（第
1
句）
1.
重现
（第
1
句）
灵活替换
because
it
means
so
many
different
things
to
different people.
factors
1.
灵活替换
（第
5
句）
…
then the first step
in achieving it
would
be
to
have
a
degree
of self-
knowledge
achieving happiness
1.
代词替换
(
第
5
句
)
……
then
the
first
step
in
achieving
it
would
be
to
have
a
degree
of
self-knowledge
2.
重
现
(
第
2
句
)
代词代替
(
第
2
句
)
2
.
灵活替换（第
2,3
句）
2.
原词重现
（第
7
句）
2.
词性替换
…
people
link
happiness
that makes him or her happy.
to
wealth
and
material
success,
…
emotions and
loving
personal
relationship.
…
Spiritual
paths
…
3.
替换
(
第
4
句
)
3.
替换（第
8
句）
3.
灵活替换
(
< br>第
7
句
)
Because
people
interpret
…
mean
that
people
…
a peaceful environment all
contribute
happiness
…
without
these
to
our happiness.
conditions
cannot
be
happy <
/p>
4.
第
4
句
)
4.
原词重现
（第
9
句）
4.
替换（第
8
句）
< br>
…
it
is
difficult
to
give
…
in
life
is
a
more
…
mean
that
people
without
these
any
definition
essential
factor
…
conditions cannot be happy.
5.
原词重现
（第
11
句）
5.
< br>原词重现（第
9
句）
two factors
…
essential
factor
in
happiness.
6.
词性替换（第
< br>10
句）
making
other people happy
7.
原词重现（第<
/p>
11
句）
…
the
most
important
for
achieving
happiness.
achieving
3.
原
词
重
现
（
增
加
形
容
< br>词
true
）
（
第
3
句）
< br>4.
原
词
重
现
（第
4
句）
5.
原词重现
（第
5
句）
6.
原词重现
（第
7
句）
7.
词
性
替<
/p>
换
happy(
第
8
句
)
8.
原词重现
（第
9
句）
9.
原词重现
（第
11
句）
9
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