雅思写作语料库--读书是否比看电视玩游戏更好

【教育类】

2015

年

12

月

12

日雅思写作回忆

Reading story books is better for children than watching television or

playing computer you agree or disagree.

读书比看电视和玩游

对于孩子更有利好， 是否同意

?

【名师预测】

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针对

2015

年

12

月

12

日

)

A study shows that a lot of children from the age 7 to 11 spend too much

time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this

problem influence the children their families and the society? What

measures should be taken to solve?

研究显示：

7-11

岁的孩子花费太多时间

看电视或者玩游戏，这对于 孩子和社会有哪些影响，如何解决

?

【范文赏析】

【首段】

背景介绍

+

争议焦点

+

作家立场

The contrivance of the television and the Internet has greatly diversified

modern people’s cultural life，

especially those children or teenagers.

People differ greatly in their views as to whether or reading story books

exerts a far more beneficial influence on those who are in the formative

years compared with watching television or playing on- line games. My

stand is that watching television and playing games is superior to

reading story books.

【解析】

The contrivance of the television and the Internet has greatly diversified

modern people’s cultural life

电视和网络的发明极大地丰富了人们的精神

生活。

【二段】让步原题观点的合理性

Indeed

，

children can become the beneficiaries of reading story books.

This debate reminds me of my little brother Paul. As a keen lover of

reading, he is in the habit of reading extensively, he has already punished

a number of stories through enthusiastic reading and constant writing

practice. After all, first-class books are the summarization of excellent

ideas and rich cultural deposits, so, I have to concede that reading

excellent story books can stir one’s imagination, stimulate one’s

creativity, strengthen one’s literacy and thus deepen one’s insight

into life.

【解析】

Reading excellent story books can stir one’s imagination, stimulate

one’s creativity, strengthen none’s literacy and thus deepen one’s

insight into life.

阅读优秀故事书籍，可以激发人的想象力和创造力，增强人的

读写能力及对于生 活的洞察。

【三段】反驳原题观点之不合理性

Notwithstanding all that, we can never undervalue the benefits brought

about by playing games or watching television. First, instructive

television programs could also enact the role of educator. To illustrate,

many prevailing talk show or speech contest programs are full of

inspiring information. The anchors of those programs are extremely agile

and eloquent, hence, TV viewers’ view of life could b

e greatly enlarged.

Also, properly playing on- line games, by occupying time so

constructively, makes teenagers contented, with no time for boredom.

Meanwhile, playing computer games help develop the players’

intelligence and teamwork spirit because many challenging team games

need strategy and cooperation.

【解析】

1. Anchors of those programs are extremely agile and eloquent.

这些节目

主持人思维敏锐、口才俱佳。

2. Properly playing on-line games, by occupying time so constructively,

makes teenagers contented, with no time for boredom.

适度游戏，通过有

建设性地利用了时间，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊 之感。