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高考英语书面表达真题及满分范文汇总
全国
I
卷
题目要求
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦
学习，
得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。
请写一封信申
请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.
写信目的：
2.
个人优势：
3
.
能做的事情。
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
< br>2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.
结束语已为你写好。
优秀满分范文
Dear
Sir/Madam,
I
’
m
Li
Hua,
an
exchange
student
from
China
during
this
summer
vacation.
I
’
m
delighted to learn that volunteer
students are wanted for a Chinese painting
exhibition
to be held in the local art
gallery. Now I
’
m writing to
apply for the position.
The
reasons
for
my
application
are
as
follows.
First
of
all,
having
been
exposed
to
foreign
teachers
since
a
young
age,
I
can
communicate
freely
with
others
in
English.
What
’
s more,
years of being monitor makes me a brilliant
organizer, which will help a
lot
to
keep
the
exhibition
in
order.
The
most
important
factor
is
that
my
related
knowledge will
undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the
unique Chinese
art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility
will make me a qualified volunteer.
I
’
d appreciate it
if you could take my application into
consideration.
Yours,
Li
Hua
写作解析
< br>这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，
可以按照申请信的思路来写，
同时要注
意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。
<
/p>
第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来，文章用
First
of
all
，
What
’
s more, The
most important factor is that
等过渡性结构自然地
串联三个要点。
同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。
最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。
全国
II
卷
题目要求
假定你是校排球队队长李华
。
请写封邮件告知你的队友
Chris
球队近期将参加比赛，
内容包括：
1
.
比赛信息；
2.
赛前准备；
3.
表达期待。
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
< br>2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分优秀范文
Dear
Chris,
How is everything
going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball
match is going to be
held in a few
weeks and our team will participate.
As for the detailed information of the
match, there will be probably dozens of teams
which
are
going
to
make
a
revolving
competition.
Additionally,
not
only
can
the
top
three teams each be
awarded a medal but all the other teams taking
part in it will get a
reward as well.
What will be the most attractive is that it will
be a great honor for the
top three
teams to receive special volleyballs that have the
name of the most popular
volleyball
player
on
them.
Therefore,
we
must
do
enough
preparations
before
the
match, such as training
as frequently as we can.
So
excited am I that I can
’
t
wait to join in about you? Looking forward to
your
reply.
Yours,
Li
Hua
写作指导
本题要求：作为排球队队长
李华，给队友
Chris
写一封邮件告知他近期球队将参加
比赛，主要的要点包含三项，分别是：比赛信息、赛前准备、表达期待。字数要求
100
左右，考生应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
作文的难度不大，
可以灵活运用
学过的高级短语和句型，例如定语从句；
名词性从
句；非谓语动
词；倒装句等等。另外要注意衔接词汇的使用以使行文连贯；高级词
汇的使用以提升作品
的档次。
全国
III
卷
题目要求
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友
Allen
参加，内
容包括：
1.
时间；
2.
活动安排；
3.
欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右；
< br>2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
优秀满分范文
Dear Allen,
How
is everything going? Our school will hold a music
festival next Sunday morning in
the
school hall. And I
’
m writing
to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00
am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech.
Then there will be various fantastic
performances played by talented students. You are
definitely welcome to show up on stage,
which will add color and fun to our
festival.
Looking forward to
your early reply.
Best
wishes,
Li Hua
写作指导
今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活
动安排等具体信息，
最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二，
根据提纲，
< br>确定关键词语，
如：
How is
everything going? a music
festival
，
in the
school hall
，
The
opening ceremony
等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
点评
本文
内容完整，
详略得当。
并使用了高级句式。
如：
You are definitely welcome to show
up on stage, which will add color and
fun to our festival.
定语从句。提升了文章档次。
北京卷
题目要求
第一节
(15
分
)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友
Jim
打算暑假期间来北京、天津和
上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给
他回复邮件，内容包括
:
1.
交通出行；
2.
必备衣物。
< br>
注意
:
1.
词数不少于
50
；
2.
开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
优秀满分范文
Dear Jim,
I
’
m pleased that
you
’
re coming to tour in
China.
I suggest that you
begin from Beijing, and I
’
ll
show you around. Tianjin will be your next
stop. After that, you can go to
Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can
take
high
-
speed
trains to both cities.
Summer
in
these
cities
is
hot
and
rainy,
so
take
summer
wear
plus
an
umbrella
with
you.
Looking forward to your
arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
红星中学高三学生李华的英
国好友
Jim
打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发
来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括
: 1.
交通出行；
2.
必备衣物。本
< br>文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。
文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎
Jim
来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣
物；最后盼望朋
友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用
连接词、衔接词，使文
章自然、流畅。
点评
本文内容完整，
语言表述流畅。
文章使用了几个高分句型。
that
you
’
re coming to tour
in China.
和
that
you begin from Beijing, and
I
’
ll show you
around.
是宾语从句。
where
you can stay for a
week.
是非限制性定语从句。
题目要求
第二节
(20
分
)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
你们班上周组织了一次以
“劳动最光荣”
为主题
的社会实践活动。
请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，
写一篇英文周记，
记述整个过
程。
注意：词数不少于
60
。
提示词：西瓜
watermelon
图片
优秀满分范文
Last week
I took part in a farmwork programme in the
suburbs.
At
the
class
meeting,
our
teacher
told
us
about
the
programme
with
the
theme
“
Working is most
beautiful
”
. And he stressed
the importance of working with our own
hands.
When I got
home, I packed up my luggage for the
trip.
On the farm, we helped
pick watermelons. While working, I realised how
hard it was to
work in the fields under
a hot sun.
When I came back
home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And
they were very
proud of me.
写作指导
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，
你们班上周组织了一次以
“劳
动最光荣”
为主题
的社会实践活动。
要
求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过
程。图画作文内容要点比较
清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动
准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活
动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全
文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间
段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文
章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。
点评
本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章
< br>使用了宾语从句
how hard it was
to work in the fields under a hot
sun.
还使用了
At
the class meeting, When I got home, On
the farm,
While working,
When I came back
home
等过渡词。
浙江卷
题目要求
第一节
应
用文写作
(
满分
15
< br>分
)
假定你是李华，经常帮助
你学习英语的朋友
Alex
即将返回自己的国家。请给他写
一封邮件，内容包括：
1.
表示感谢；
2.
回顾
Ale
x
对你的帮助；
3.
临别祝愿。
注意：
1.
词数
80
左右；
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
满分优秀范文
Dear Alex,
Learning that
you
’
re leaving for the
United States soon, I
’
m
eagerly writing to express
my heartfelt
gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking,
it
’
s so nice of you to offer
me a class of practical learning skills.
Under your professional guidance, I
have made such unbelievable progress in English.
It
’
s
indeed
a
pleasant
surprise
for
me
to
even
rank
first
in
a
recent
English
speech
contest. Whenever I
encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and
help me out,
which
fuels
my
enthusiasm
for
English
and
promotes
me
to
regain
tremendous
confidence. No words are strong enough
to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant
journey home.
Yours,
Li
Hua
写作指导
1.
审题立意：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和
第二人
称，时态用一般现在时。
2.
谋篇布局：书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回
顾
Alex
对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。
3.
关键词和句
子：根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到
的词汇和句子有：<
/p>
leaving for the United States
soon
，
express my heartfelt
gratitude
，
unbelievable
progress
，
cheer me up
< br>。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章
写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写
或语法错误。
题目要求
第二节
读
后续写
(
满分
25
分
)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容
写一篇
60
词左右的内容概要。
Parents
everywhere
praise
their
kids.
Jenn
Berman,
author
of
The
A
to
Z
Guide
to
Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says,
“
We
’
ve
gone to the opposite extreme of a few
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