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无私奉献英语作文
【篇一:无私奉献高考英语作文指导
——
议论文】
禁庭春昼,莺羽披新绣。
百草巧求花下斗,只赌珠玑满斗。
日晚却理残妆,御前闲舞霓裳。谁道腰肢窈窕,折旋笑得君王。
高考英语作文指导
——
议论文
knowledge
objectives
to help the
students to learn the basic writing skills on
argumentative composition
compentence objectives
to help the students to grasp their
basic writing skills
to
practice writing skills.(detailed information
general idea)
emotion
objectives to cultivate the love of
writing
teaching
approach:communicative approach
teaching aids: multi-media
difficult points :
teaching procedures:
i. pre-task: revision
lead-in
ii.
while task:learn some basic writing skills on
argumentative
composition
(一)
英文议论文的结构特点
汉语写作对
文章结构的要求不是很
高,如开头段应
该包括什么、论题句应该在什么时候出现、文章的结尾是否必
须总
结全文等等。而英
语写作要求文章结构必须十分严谨,文章各个部分的功能都要十分
清晰,开
头、中间
和结尾都有严格的要求。
简而言之,英语议论文共有三大特点:
1
、
观点鲜明的开头;
2
、
紧扣主题的结尾;
3
、
有主题句并且衔接自然的中间段落。
所以,既然高考英语考的
是英语文章,大家就应该遵循英文议论文的写作思
路和习惯:表示支持则旗帜鲜明地支持;表示
反对就彻彻底底地反
对,而不能采取
“
墙
头草两边倒
”
的做法。
(二)英语议论文写作要点
:
straight:
开门见山,直来直去。
brief:
文章
“
简为贵
”
,要抓住要点,简明扼要。
< br>
coherence:
文理通顺,前后连贯。
divis
ion:
词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当,划分要清楚,避免使
用重复字句和片段。
ambiguity:
尽量不用可能会引起歧义的词语或句子。
key
:用适当的关键词突出主题,每段都应有主题句。
omit:
合理删除多余的不必要部分。
sentence
pattern:
句型要尽量多样化。
tense:
动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。
(
三
)
英语
议论文写作手法
1.
引言段
高
考英语议论文的引言可以有两部分组成:现象
+
观点。
现象就来自作文题目。所以学生必须要理解
题目中的每句话,把题
目中的中文用英语
表达出来就能成为不错的开篇。然后再开门见山地亮出自己的
观点。
2.
主体段
要想写好英语议论文,就要讲究好的论证方法。
一般说来,有两种方法可采用,一是逻辑说理,即
“
晓之以理
”
;一
是从感情上打动
他人,即
“
动之以情
”
。这两种方法并不是孤立地出现,往往是你中
有我,我中有你。
除此以外,我们还可以运用:
①
引证法
(
即引用一些名人名言、成语、格言、谚语灯作为论据
)
;
②
例证法
(
即举例来进行论证
)
③
喻证法
(
用比喻的方法来论证事理,把深奥、抽象的事理表述得浅
p>
显易懂,使文章
既生动又形象
)
④
对比论
证法
(
通过对事物的正反两个方面的对比来分析论证,使文
p>
章的表达效果更
强烈,给人留下深刻印象
)
⑤
归纳法
(
从分析典型,即分析个别事
物入手,找出事物的共同特
点,然后得出结
论。
)
⑥
推理法
(
从一般原理出发,对个别事
物进行说明、分析,而后得
出结论
)
⑦
驳论法
(
先列出错误的观点,然后加
以逐条批驳,最后阐明自己
的观点
)
。
在主体段中,务必要牢记应采用先
分后总的手法
——
先亮出主题句,
然后
再用发展句
充实段落。你必须围绕
着引言段的观点展开,千万不能让人觉得的
的文章段落之间没
有衔接。
此外,在主体段中要恰当地使用过渡词,有明显的层次感,引领阅
读者一层一层地根
据你的分论点走向最终你要阐述的观点。
3.
结尾段
结论,用一、二句话来结束文章,做到首尾呼应。一定要再次澄清
你的观点,切记与
引言段的观点一致,建议用不同的词句法表达一个意思。
(
四
)
、英
语议论文范文
private
tutors
with the development
od science and society, more and more
students are keen to take
on private tutors.
some people think taking on a private
tutor is good for
students in some
ways. the
tutor
can answer the students’questions individually and
carefully and give them
detailed
advice; some
private tutors assign their students more
exercises to do and the
students
will learn extra
knowledge from their tutors; it is known to us
all that a good and
experienced teacher can help his
students to review their
lessons in a
very good way so
that they
can have a better understanding of the knowledge
learned in class, which is
help
to them in their
examinations.
but every
coin has two sides. some people look upon it with
disapproval. they hold
the opinion that the students rely too
much on their tutor and
they even take
little notice
of what their
own teacher says in class; the private tutor
assigns them to do a lot of
extra exercises, thus occupying plenty
of rheir spare time and
they will be
too worn out;
contrary to
what their parents hope, their studies become
worse than before.
so it is hard to say whether taking on
a private tutor is good or
not. it all
depends
on the individual.
but in my opinion, if you want to take on a
private tutor, you should
choose one carefully since he or she
will have a great impact
on your
studies.
money for
education
in my opinion, it
is worthwhile to spend more of the money in
order to have the
children better educated.
first, as there are more than 40 or
even 50 students in a class,
in most
cases,
teachers can not
take care of all the students in class.
therefore many students have
to attend spare time classes or even
go to the tutors to make
up for
this.
second, we are now in
the 21st century. with the development
of society, only those
who have a good education are more
likely to get good jobs.
so the more
we learn now,
the more
chances we will have in the future. of course we
will
get a high pay.
in a word, spending money on education
is certainly
rewarding.
iii. post-task ( each composition
120-150 words)
请你谈谈在学习上遇到困难
时,如何想办法去解决,如何克服这些
困难?
iv. sentence patterns:
i think/believe that?
the point is that?.
in my opinion?
from my point of view?
as
for me?
as far as i am
concerned?
we must
recognize that?
there is no
doubt that?
the main reason
is that?
as we all
know?
v. summary: vi.
assignment: ( each composition 120-150
words)
1.
每一位高三的学生都面临着巨大的压力。对压力,高三的学生看
法不一,有的害
怕
压力;但有的却认为压力不是件坏事。请你谈谈你的看法。
2 .2010
年世博会将在上海举行。为了办好这次国际盛
会,上海市将
进一步改善环境。
与此同时,
提高市民的素质和修养也
势在必行,因为文明的举止在
国际交往中非
常重要。作为年轻人,我们自身也存在着一些不文明行为。请
例举
你所观察到的
2-3
种不文明行为(如:大小便后不及时冲刷;随地乱扔纸屑、废
物;
随地吐痰;插队
?
)
并就此做出评论或提出建议。
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高考英语书面表达常用词汇句型集锦
▲
举例:
for
example
,
for
instance
,
take?for
example
,
such
as
p>
,
like
,
an
d so on
,
so on and so
forth
,
and so on
and on and on
,
etc.
等。
▲
说明:
thats to
say
,
in other words
,
namely
,等。
▲
因果:
s
o
,
for
,
therefore
,
as a result
,
thus
,
because
,
because
of
,
thanks
to?
,
owing
to?
,
due to ?
等
p>
▲
递进:
then
,
besides
,
in
addition
,
furthermore
,
moreover
,
whats
more
等。
?
▲
顺序:
f
irstly
,
secondly
,
thirdly
,
finally
;
in the first
place
,
in the second
place
,
in the third
place
,
to begin
with
,
then
,
furthermore
,
finally
;
to start
with
,
next
,
in addition
,
finally
;
< br>first and foremost
besides
,
last but not
least
;
most important of all<
/p>
,
moreover
,
< br>finally
(以上为时间顺序)
in the front
of
,
in front of ?
,
before
,
behind
,
at the back
of
,
on the right/
left
(
of
),
< br>to
the right /left
of?
,
on the other side of
?
,
in the center of
?
,
in the middle of
?
,
at the
beginning of
,
at the end of
?
,
by the side of
?
,
on the top of
?
,
at the foot
of
?
,
on the bottom
of
,
inside
,
outside
,
upstairs
,
downstairs
(以上为空间顺序)
▲
转折:
n
evertheless
,
however
,
although
,
though
,
but
,
on the
country
,
after
all
,
oppositely
等。
▲
总结:
in
short
,
in a
word
,
in
general
,
generally
speaking
,
finally
,
at
last
,
as far as i
know
,
in
brief
,
briefly
speaking
,
in the
end
,
as a matter of
fact
,
in
reality
,
in
fact
,
on the
whole
,
in
conclusion
,
on account of
this
,
therefore
等。
▲
强调:
really
,
indeed
,
p>
certainly
,
surely
,
for
sure
,
above
all
等。
?
▲
对比:
in the same way
,
just
as
,
in common
with
,
compared
with
,
on the one
hand?on the other hand
,
for
one thing? for
another
,
similarly
等。
▲
平行:
a
nd
,
both?and
,
as well as
,
as well
,
neither?nor?or
,
either?or
,
not only?but
also
等。
< br>二、书面表达的常考常用句型在实际的英语写作中,我们应该掌握
一些常用的句型
以便在实战中发
挥作用。高考英语
书面表达的句式基本上都是简单句,就是复合句
也大都是极普通的常用句式或句
型。先讨论简单句的使用情况。所谓简单句
式在英语中无非是三种
基本句型及其扩充。
一类是
s.+v.+o.
式,例如,①
i like english and
computer best.
(
nmet1996
)
②
i started school from 1984
to 1990.
(
nmet1996
)
二类是
s.+v.+adv.
式,例如,①
my parents
live in the country.
(
nmet199
3
)
②
the other day my brother
and i went to the cinema by bicycle.
(<
/p>
nmet1997
)
三类是
s.+v.+pre.
例如,①
my name is li hua.
(
nmet1996
)
②
the playground
is now in front of the school.
(
< br>nmet1999
)
③
it was
7
:
15 on the morning of
february 8
,
2000.
(
nmet2000
)
高考英语书面表达中的复合句式多为带时间状语从句的复合
句和带
宾语从句的复合句,其他如强调
句型、带定语从句的复合句、带主语从句的复合句、
条件句、让步
或转折的句式等,
也是常见常
用常考的复合句形式。有些复合句式几乎年年都考。复合句虽可化
简,但就一篇文章而
言,若全是
简单句,无一复合句或
难句起采,难见考生功力,得高分就不容易
了。所以,该用复合句或难句表
现的,而且自信没什么问题,就应大胆写出来,
考生切记。
1.
带时间状语从句的复合句①
②
its also possible a
pickpocket stole your money while you
were shopping.
(
2
004
北京卷)
< br>这类时间状语从句不仅考得频繁,而且连词
when
,<
/p>
while
,
as
,
before
,
after
甚至
by the
time
都考到了,时态上现在时
、过去时、过去进行时和过去完成时等都
出现了。而且有些年份带时间状
语从句的复合句还同时出现多次。因此我们建议广
大考生应加强训
练这类复合句,在高考中尽量少
犯错误。
2.
带宾语从句的复合句
①
i think this is a good
chance for you to show your singing
talent
,
and how
well youve learned chinese.
(
nmet2004
,
i
)
②
i am so sorry that i wont
be able to attend the lecture on
american history tomorrow
afternoon.
(
nmet2004
,
iii
)
③
i would also think that the
growth population should be
brought
under control so that well have a
better
hometown in future.
(
2004
江苏卷)
< br>
3.
带定语从句的复合句
①
if there is
anything i can do for you
,
i
would be more than
glad to help.
(
nmet2004
,
i
)
②
as is shown on chart
2
,
only 10% of the time is
taken up
with sports activities.
(
2004
北京卷)
【篇二:无私奉献高考英语作文写作实用技巧】
禁庭春昼,莺羽披新绣。
百草巧求花下斗,只赌珠玑满斗。
日晚却理残妆,御前闲舞霓裳。谁道腰肢窈窕,折旋笑得君王。
高
考英语作文写作实用技巧
(一)掌握技巧:
(
1
)注意
篇章结构,合理布局
开始部分(
opening
para
graph
)
——
说出文中的要点、核
心问题。
正文部分(
body paragraphs
< br>)
——
围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分(
concluding paragraphs
p>
)
——
对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联
系,内容完整、连
贯。前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容
.
p>
(
2
)确定主题句
主题
句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到
“
画龙点
睛
”
的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文
章的开头,而后,全文对主题
句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点:
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。
(二)巧用连接词
要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词
表示罗列增加
first, second, third,
first, then / next, after that / next,
finally
for one
thing … for another…,
on (the) one hand…on the other
hand,
besides /
what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover
/
another / also, especially / in
particular,
表示时间顺序
now, at
present, recently,