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上海中考英语备考训练
上海中考英语备考训练：写作
一，
一等文要求，
1
，
结构三段式：
第一段：简单明了，开门见山。
如我们想表达小强很强壮，
直接说
XQ is extremely strong.
观点明确，一句足矣。
第二段：分析为什么他强壮。
A.
每天吃
10
顿饭，
He has ten meals
everyday!
详举吃的是什么。
B.
每天运动
2
小时，
He does exercise 2 hours
a day!
详举做了什么运动。
第
三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建
议等。如，
How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to
be him one day!
2
，内容和要点：
话题
topic
必须符合题意，提
示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、
要点是要发
表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示
< br>内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题
,
跟
主旨无关的话不要写。
3
，逻辑合理：
递进：
first, second, third,
finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition,
what's more,
moreover, on the one hand,
on the other hand, the last but not the
least
。
转折：
but, yet, however, as
far as I am concerned, in the
meantime
。
总结：
in a word, all in all,
in conclusion
。
4
，语法和亮点：
< br>单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，
编
几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。
二，
三段十句话：
1
，三段布局：
高考作文题型多样
,
有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料
,
按
要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，
社会热点现象。无论
哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描
述文都可以用
三段法：引入，具体，结尾。
记叙文：
A.
背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。
B.
故事发展经过结果。
C.
结局
和感受。
议论文：
A.
发表观点。
B.
论据理由。
C.
结论呼应论点。
图片文：
A.
描述图片内容，提炼观点。
B.
论据理由。
C.
结论呼应论点。
日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。
通知，书信，演讲稿在引入部分写话题，
意图，
主题；在具体部分写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾部分写活动时间
、
地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。
2
，
十句成篇：
Passage 1,
1
）
Topic
话题
2
）
Thesis
论点
Passage 2,
3
）
Transition
过渡句
4
）
Argument1
论据
1
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）
Detail 1
论据
1
的支持句
6
）
Argument2
论据
2
7
）
Detail 2
论据
2
的支持句
8
）
Argument3
论据
3
9
）
Detail 3
论据
3
的支持句
Passage 3
10
）
Conclusion
总结
以上为议论文的三段十句结构。
根据具体情况可调整加减。
其它文体在此基础上
略作修改即可。
三，
具体各类题型写法：
1
，
描述图片类：
P1
图片描述
,
图片主旨。
P2
过渡句加论据和支
持句。视字数调整论据和支持句
个数。
P3
总结。
2
，
夹叙夹议文：
写法
1
，
P1
话题记叙或描述。
P2
观点或感想，写
2
个论据和
2
个支持句。
P3
总结。
写法
2
，
P1
话题和观点。
P2
事件起因、经过、结果以证明论点。
P3
总结说明事
件，再次证明话题和论点。
写法
3
，
P1
回忆记述事件。
P2
感受、观点。
P3
总结。
3
，
两主旨议论文：
有时需要写两个主旨，
如第一个为什么喜欢读书，
另一个喜欢读什么书。
或第一
个水为什么珍贵，另一个怎么节约水。可以分成两大部分写：
P1
话题、一个论据和支持句。
P2
过渡句、另一个论据和支持句。
P3
总结
4
，建议型议论文：
写法
1
，倾向建议：提出一个问题，
简单说明该问题，并针对此问题给出多个建
议：
P1
写信目的，一个问题。
P2
针对这个问题若干建议。
P3
总结希望。
写法
2
，问题建议并重：提出两个问题，然后给出相应的两条建议：
P1
写信目
的。
P2
提两个问题并说明。
P3
针对两问题给两建议。
写法
3
，倾向于问题：提出一个问题
，详细阐述问题并分析原因，结尾给出一个
建议。
P1
写信目的。
P2
提出一个问题，原因及危害等。
P3
建议、总结。
5
，
说明文和纯事实新闻报导：
同纯记叙
文，不涉及议论，只将起因、经过、结果写清即可。重事实轻情义。
四，
写作四步骤：
1
，
审题：
主题，体裁，人称，时态，内容要点。在试卷中画出要点。
2
，
框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式写作再梳理锤炼。
3
，
成文：
一要凝练，二要变化。使用过渡词、从句、不同句型和词组搭配。
4
，检查：内容要点，语法错误。名词查单复数和冠词，动词查时态语态和主
谓一致。变换句式：不用过于简单的结构。
总之：认真审题
,
提炼要点
紧扣主题
,
扩词成句
表述准确
,
连句成文
通篇检查
,
确保无误。
五，
英文文章开头有两种可以选择：
1<
/p>
，每段开头空两格，四或五个字符，段落之间不空行。标题和文章间不用空行。
2
，每段开头顶格写，段落之间空行。标题和文
章间不用空行。
两种都可以，但是空格与不空格不能混用，第一种用的比较多。
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上海中考英
写作
：真
范文
2018 VI.
Writing(
作文
)(
共
20
分
) Write at least 60 words
on the
topic
progress(
以
“ 步了
”
,
写一信不少于
60
个
的短文
,
点符号不占格
)
你在生活或
中一定取得
不少
步
,
比如生活枝能的
得、
学
方法的掌握、良好
慣的养
成。
取其中一个方面
,
合自身
,
一
你是如何取得
一
步的。（注意
:
短文中不得出
任
何人名、
校名及其它相关信息
,
否
不予
分。
) The following is for
reference
only(
以下
表达
供参考
)
?
try my best to
do
?
make
progress in( doing)
?
My
used to do/be
Progress
I used to be poor
in English, especially in speaking English as I
was too shy
to open my mouth.
Things have been changed since I had a
new English teacher who was very kind
and told me the correct way to learn
English. With his encouragement, I gained
confidence and began to speak a little.
In the meantime, I spent more time in English
learning and try my best to improve my
English. I listened to English broadcasting
and imitated the pronunciation. I also
went to English Corner to practice my spoken
English with foreigners every Sunday.
Step by step, I have made substantial progress
in learning English. Not only can I
read English novels now, but also I can speak
English fluently.
As a
proverb says,
“
Nothing is difficult if you put your
heart in it.
”
I
’
my progress.
2017 VII.
Writing
（作文）（共
20
分）
Write at least 60 words
on the topic
“
There
’
s
always hope
（”以
“常
希望
”
，写一篇不少于
60
个
的短文，
点符号不占
格）面
困惑的
候、
化的
候、感
挫
的
候、遭遇逆境的
候
??
来自内心的
持、他人的帮助、社会的关
和科技的
展等，
能
人常
希望。
取一个方面
你的理解（可
合自身或他人的
）。
The following
is for reference only
（以下表达
供参考）
get out of
difficulty
give
?
a handnever
lose hope
There
’
s Always Hope
Difficulties and failures
are unavoidable in our lives, However, I believe
there
always hope as long as you
don
’
t give up.
I used to be poor in English. The
grammar, the vocabulary, the pronunciation
and writing were continuously torturing
me. I almost lost my heart and thought
about giving up. Luckily, I met a good
teacher who was so kind that he spent hours
helping me to correct my mistakes and
teaching me excellent methods. He always
gave me generous praise for any minor
progress of mine. With his encouragement, I
gained confidence and tried my best to
overcome all the difficulties. Day by day, I have
made substantial progress. Not only can
I read English novels now, but also I can
speak English fluently.
As
an old saying goes,
“
Where there is a will ,there is a
way.
”
No matter
ho
difficult things seem to be,
let
’
s cherish
hope and never give up.
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2016 Writing
（作文）
Write at least 60 words on the topic
“
I
’
m
ready
”（以
“我准
好
了
”
，写一篇不少于
60
个
的短文，
点符号不占格）你
明天一定有着美好的憧
憬．
此，你已
做好了哪方面的准
？
合你的
或特
等，
取一个角度具体
你是如何做
准
的．（
independent be good at
?
responsible
take
part in
hardworking
?
it helps me to
?
I
’
m Ready
When I
was young, my mother usually read books for me as
soon as she had
time. I was attracted
by the fascinating world of stories so I made a
determination
to become a writer.
To achieve the dream, I have been doing
my best all the time. First of all, I pay
great attention to my Composition
classes. Furthermore, I join school writing group
and take part in writing contest, which
makes me practice a lot in writing. Last but not
the least, I keep connection with a
famous writer who helps me to improve my writing
ability substantially. All in all,
through hard working I am good at writing now.
How happy I will be when my books that
will enrich children
’
s life are published
someday!
I hope my dream
will come true . I
’
m ready.
I'm ready
I always say to myself:
it
seems that I will never be ready for them
absolutely.
to what I do
efficiently. Of course, as a saying says: Practice
makes perfect. Essential
preparation is
necessary. We should make every effort to prepare
for what we do .
Say to
ourselves:
‘
I'm
，
readynd it
’
will help us play our best
card
！
2015
Writing (
作文
)
Write at least 60 words on the topic
“
I want to invent _____
(
以“我想要
明
________
”
，写一篇不少于
60
个
的短文，
点符号不占格
)
（注意：
1
、在答
上将
目
充完整。
2
、短文中不得出
任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，
否
不予
分。）
The following is for reference only.
以
(
下表达
供参考
) It can be
used to
It
?
will be
exciting/necessary/helpful to
?
I Want to
Invent a Family Robot Doctor
I want to
invent a family robot doctor because it is very
helpful to us.
First of all, a family
robot can cure illnesses for people at home
immediately
after you feel sick or get
hurt, which is very convenient and efficient,
especially in
emergency situations.
What
’
s
more,allasknow,we nowadays hospitals are always
occupied by patients who are anxious to
be taken care as soon as possible, so family
robot doctors can reduce the pressure
of hospital and alleviate the patients
Last but not the least, with the help
of a robot doctor, people can get duly advice for
healthy diet and live a better life. In
a word, a family robot doctor is
substantially useful for our society.
In order to achieve my dream of
inventing a family robot doctor, I will do
my best and learn hard.
I
Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot
’
a
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I want to invent a family
doctor robot, which can be used to cure the
illness
without going out of their
home. As far as I
’
m concerned, it will be extremely
helpful
and useful because of the
following reasons:
First, you can see
the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick
or get
hurt. It can save us a lot of
time, especially in emergency situations.
Furthermore,
hospitals today are always
filled with patients, not everyone can be taken
good
care of. However, with the help of
our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal
doctor one to one whenever you want.
In short, family doctor robots can make
great contribution to our society.
I
want to invent a time machine
As a
student who is experiencing unprecedented modern
life nowadays, I
would rather learn
about the history and the future life of human
being from a real
experience than learn
from a textbook. That
’
s
why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing
a time machine will be my first choice.
The most important usage of my time
machine will be visiting one of best
schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all
know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded
education. Therefore, when I visit the
school of the ancient city, I can not only try
different ways of studying but
communicate with people from different countries
as
well.
Using a time
machine is the most vivid way to learn history as
it is both a
record of mankind and a
mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day
when my
time machine comes out..
2014. Writing (
作文
) Write at least 60 words about the
topic
year
“以
(
“明年此时
”为题，写一篇不少于
点符号不占格
)
“
This time next
60
个词的短文，标
你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的
期待？你能为此做些什么？）
The following
sentence patterns are for reference
only. (
以下句型仅供参考
)I hope to /I hope that... Perhaps I will... It
will be exciting
/ necessary / terrible
to ...
This Time Next Year
It is exciting to imagine what I will
be this time next year. Life is
changeable and I will be different.
First, I
’
ll be
a senior student next year. I really hope I can
achieveydram
and attend my favorite
high school. Furthermore, I will get many new
friends with
whom I will spend my
precious moments. Perhaps I can take part in a
summer
camp abroad as my English will
be good enough to communicate with foreigners.
Of course, to realize the wishes,
hardworking is still necessary for me. Finally, it
is high time that I should help my
mother with more housework.
Anyway, I
will be better, kinder and more diligent this time
next year. Let
me look forward to it.
This time next year
It's
exciting to imagine what the happy life will be
like.
At this time next year, I will be
a senior high student, and I will make a lot of
new
friends. I hope to be more
independent so that perhaps I will be taking part
in a
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