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我用来申请香港大学并成功的
PS
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【我这篇是比较长，两页半，还是建议大家两页以内甚至一页半哈
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< br>就是发上来给大家看看，
就当攒人品、造福吧。恩觉得写得好您就拿去看，
觉得写得不好就
忽略我好啦。首先感谢多次帮助我的
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张洋
(231216758)
，我爱死你
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是这样，
我申请了香港大学建筑院的城市规划专业的授课式研究生，
2
年学制
（
M
Sc in Urban
Planning
）
，而且我是真心很想去这个专业。所以现在也算初步圆梦了。
（由于家庭原因等，我只申请了香港，有港大、港科技、港中文、港理工、港城市，都拿到
offer
。
PS
基本上都
是一个思路，但是最后一段有更改，因为最后一段一般写“
why
school
& why program
< br>”，所以一定要根据每个学校所申请的不同
program
修改自己的文章。
）
我发我的
PS
，主要是给各位借鉴个思路。我的思路中，最主要的一方面就是：
PS
以一个主
题为主线，然后
PS
中每一段都要多多少少提到该主题，使文章成为一个整体。
恩，我写的肯定不是最好的，大牛多了去了。不过怎么说呢，
每个人申请的时候，
PS
都是
挺难的一
关，总是不知道怎么写。所以，有了别人的
PS
看看，总是件好
事。
但
我觉得，我能成功，还有很多其他因素。
1
、面试认真准备，面
试后为了表达真心，发了
Thank you letter
给
课程主任；
2
、材料准备全面，各种奖状、
PS
、
CV
、
Portfolio
等；
3
、自<
/p>
己全面了解了该
program
，以及和
申请
HK
有关的一切（上港大官网、寄托等网站）
，这样
不论走到申请的哪个阶段，我都心中有数，不会太慌张。
反正说白了，申请是
自己的事情，我觉得想做就要做好，不然不如拉到。
行吧不废话了，上
PS
了。
Personal
Statement
Standing
on
the
playground
with
arms
akimbo
and
sweat
dripping,
I
could
not
help
breathing heavily, yet feeling proud
that I strained every nerve to run and broke my
record
again. Deep love of track and
field sports has sustained me to keep running
every day.
Although suffering from
exhaustion, I love to experience the process of
holding on to the
end. People do not
always understand my passion for running. It may
be because that they
can see my effort
on the track, but can seldom know how many
valuable lessons running
has taught me.
Much
like
my
insistence
on
running,
my
striving
for
academic
excellence
in
the
undergraduate study is endless.
Majoring in Resources Environment and the
Management
of Urban and Rural Planning
(REMURP) at Wuhan University, one of the top
comprehensive
universities in China, I
have systematically studied foundation knowledge
and applied skills
in a wide range of
fields, namely
Geographical Sciences,
Natural Resources, Geographic
Information
System,
Remote
Sensing,
Mapping
and
Surveying,
and
Urban
and
Rural
Planning
. REMURP is a highly
multidisciplinary subject. Therefore, in the
initial stage of
learning
specialised
courses,
I
felt
puzzled
how
to
cross
the
threshold.
However
,
such
difficulty did not frighten me.
Persevering in working hard is to my study what
holding out
to the end is to my
everyday running. Being aware of the obstacles I
need to overcome, I
got
up
earlier
to
memorise
formulas,
took
notes
more
earnestly,
digested
lessons
and
asked
questions regularly, and undertook more
practicals. Putting more efforts, I gradually
mastered all the courses, which
resulted in the fact that my GPA and academic
ranking had
kept ascending over the
past three years.
However
,
my academic progress also brought me trouble, as I
could not tell clearly which
particular
area I would love to commit myself to in the
future. Then in junior year
, I finally
found the answer when I took the course
Urban Planning Principle, in which my passion for
urban planning was ignited. After
learning the theoretical knowledge, I delved
deeply into
case studies of existent
planning projects, analysing their problems on the
basis of my
acquired
knowledge
and
operating
schemes
to
improve
them.
In
practice,
despite
the
complexity, I felt inspiring because I
could indeed make use of what I had learnt to
resolve
issues
related
to
urban
development.
Actually,
on
account
of
the
fact
that
Beijing,
my
hometown, is a high-density city mixed
with locals and outsiders, I have already noticed
that massive urbanisation has created
uncurbed sprawl of cities and population
explosions
in China. Such pressing
circumstances are now imposing a continuous
negative influence
on our life and the
image of China, calling for urgent actions to be
taken at once to deal
with them. Thus,
the course Urban Planning Principle exactly gave
me the chance to equip