-常住人口
续写积累
姓名：
______________
班级：
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一、环境描写的素材
环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入
手，主观则从观察者角度描
写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。
客观环境描写：
Part 1
环境描写的
adj
要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道
the blue sky(
蓝天）
the songs of
birds
（鸟鸣）
the
thundering clouds
（电光闪雷鸣）
the fragile flowers (
娇嫩的花）
;
（
the dark,raining
evening
雨夜交加的夜晚）
the green
grass
（青
草）
the fragrant
roses
（艳丽的玫瑰）
; the
setting/rising sun(
落日
/
冉冉升起的太阳）
…
Part 2
环境描写的
verb
（
vi&vt
）
要求
一
)
．
Wind
（
blow/click
/howl/wail/roar
）
1.A gust of wind blew and parted the
drooping branches of the weeping willow like a
curtain,…
一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗
帘。
wind, soft and cold,
clicked through tree branches and stirred the
bushes that
sprinkled the slope.
风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。
3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet
park.
凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。
4.A cold breeze wafted through my
hair.
(
冷风吹拂过我的头发）
The wind was perfect for kite flying,
blowing just hard enough to give some lift.
（今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）
二
)
．
Wat
er (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)
声音：
one point, the faint
sound of water tumbling through the
valley.
在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
颜色
water was deep blue and
sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear
surface.
水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。
3.A little way off was a small brook,
rushing and sparkling along between green
bank.
离此不远
,
有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。
4.
It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent
girl whispered to her loving mother
.
似乎它在温柔低语，
就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。
(action, sound, colour)
三
)
．
Sky
(stand/ appear/turn)
1.
The sky was a curdled gray
burdened with lumps of clouds.
天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云
skies stood tall and far
蓝蓝的天空高高耸立
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主观环境描写：
found sth adj/doing/done
某人发现某物（状态
/
动作
/
被）
...
saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done
某人看到
/
听到
/
感到
/
闻到某物（状态
/
动作
/
被）
was so adj that we find/feel
它是如此
....
< br>以至于
kept sb
spellbound/amazed/
景物使我如此陶醉
/
惊讶
/
sth
held sb entirely in their power
景物让我完全惊呆了
looked/seemed/appeared/felt like
…
景物看起来像
…
二、场景描写的素材
（来自原著：追
风筝的人）
1. At least two dozen
kites already hung in the sky,
like
paper sharks roaming for prey
.
Within an hour,
the number
doubled
, and red, blue, and yellow
kites glided and spun
in the sky.
A cold breeze
wafted through
my hair.
The wind
was
perfect for kite flying,
blowing just
hard enough to give some lift, make the sweeps
easier.
（放风筝的场景描写，从各个角度，立体描述）
空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝，如同纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头，这个数
字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我
的头发。这风正适宜放风筝，风速不大，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于操控。
< br>
2.
The
water
was a deep blue and
sunlight
glittered on its
looking glass-clear surface.
湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。
3. Then I glanced up and saw
a pair of kites, red with long blue
tails, soaring in the
sky.
They
danced high
above the
trees on the west end of the park, over the
windmills,
floating side by side like a
pair of eyes looking down
on San
Francisco, the city I now
call home.
（场景、比喻）
我抬起头，
望见两只红色的风筝，
带着长长的蓝色尾巴，
在
天空中冉冉升起。
它们舞动着，
飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车
，并排飘浮着，如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这个我现在
当成家园的城市。
4.
Blue
skies
stood tall and far,
the sun l
ike
a branding iron
searing
the back of your
neck.
Creeks
where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring
turned dry, and rickshaws
stirred dust
when they sputtered
by.
（场景、比喻）
天空一碧如
洗，
阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。
整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂，
到了夏天它们
也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰尘。
5. Somewhere,
a
branch
snapped,
an owl
hooted.
The wind
,
soft and cold, clicked
through tree
branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the
slope. And from below,
the faint sound
of water
tumbling through the valley. <
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在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，
还有猫头鹰的叫声。
寒风微微拂动树枝，
吹过山坡
上的灌木丛。而
下面，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵微弱的声音。
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