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1.
T
he bar chart illustrates
that the trend of call types in the united
kingdom for 8 years from 1995 to 2002.
2.
T
he bar chart
compares the figures in terms of minutes spent on
telephone calls, splitted into three
types.
3.
T
he bar
chart gives information about telephone calls. It
is in three
types Local, National &
International and Mobile call minutes from
year 1995 to 2002 in UK.
4.
T
he graph compares the total
using time of 3 call types in the UK over
a 7-year period from 1995.
5.
T
he bar chart
presents the amount of phone calls in billion of
minutes
make in the UK over a period of
seven years into the categories of
local, national/international and
mobile phone calls.
ANSWERS FROM
SIMON:
The main problem
seems to be that people are making the sentence
too
'difficult'. If you read my
introduction (at the bottom of the lesson), it's
easier
and clearer than the students'
sentences. Just keep your introduction as
simple as possible!
Here are
the problems:
1. The main problem is
the use of the word
illustrates the
amount of time / the trend
2. The main
mistake is the word
3. The
main problem is the phrase
what the
word
4. The phrase
5.
Problems with
Posted by: Simon |
Friday, February 19, 2016 at
11:27
FROM SIMON
(continued):
Here are my
suggestions:
1) The bar chart
illustrates trends in different types of phone
call in the United
Kingdom over 8 years
from 1995 to 2002.
2) The bar chart
compares figures for UK phone calls in terms of
minutes spent
on three types of call
(between1995 and 2002).
3) The bar
chart gives information about three types of
telephone call, namely
local,
national/international and mobile calls, in the UK
between 1995 and
2002.
4)
The chart compares the total number of minutes of
three types of phone call
made in the
UK over a 7-year period from 1995.
5)
The bar chart shows the amount of time spent on
three types of phone call,
in billions
of minutes, in the UK over a period of seven
years.
有关电话的短语：
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amount of time
the time
spent on
in terms of
throughout the period
the
period shown
a dramatic increase in
increased steadily
reached a
peak
the figure for
the rise
in
Collocations related to the 'phone
calls' topic:
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local calls
national calls
international calls
fixed
line / landline calls
mobile calls
overall usage
user minutes
填空：
Use these
words:
at, in, on, to, for,
by
1.
t
he amount of time spent
_____ people in the UK _____ three different
types of phone call
2.
c
alls made via local, fixed
lines were the most popular type, _____
terms of overall usage
3.
t
he figures _____ all three
types of phone call increased
4.
t
he amount of time spent
_____ local calls using landlines had
reached a peak _____ 90 billion minutes
5.
t
he rise _____
the other two types of phone call continued
6.
t
he figure
_____ mobiles rose _____ around 45 billion minutes
by, on
2. in
3.
for
4. on, at
5. in
6. for, to
练习题
The chart below shows the total number
of minutes (in billions) of
telephone
calls in the UK, divided into three categories,
from 1995-2002.
Here's my suggested outline for a
4-paragraph report:
1.
I
ntroduction:
rewrite the question statement in your own words.
2.
O
verview:
point
out which category was highest in each year, which
was lowest, and which saw the biggest
changes.
3.
D
etails:
compare
the 3 categories in 1995, then say what happened
up until 1999.
4.
D
etails:
notice
what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards,
and
contrast this with the other 2
categories. Finish with a comparison of
the figures in 2002.
开头段：
The bar
chart compares the amount of time spent by people
in the UK on three
different types of
phone call between 1995 and 2002.
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