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1.

T

he bar chart illustrates that the trend of call types in the united

kingdom for 8 years from 1995 to 2002.

2.

T

he bar chart compares the figures in terms of minutes spent on

telephone calls, splitted into three types.

3.

T

he bar chart gives information about telephone calls. It is in three

types Local, National & International and Mobile call minutes from

year 1995 to 2002 in UK.

4.

T

he graph compares the total using time of 3 call types in the UK over

a 7-year period from 1995.

5.

T

he bar chart presents the amount of phone calls in billion of minutes

make in the UK over a period of seven years into the categories of

local, national/international and mobile phone calls.

ANSWERS FROM SIMON:

The main problem seems to be that people are making the sentence too

'difficult'. If you read my introduction (at the bottom of the lesson), it's easier

and clearer than the students' sentences. Just keep your introduction as

simple as possible!

Here are the problems:

1. The main problem is the use of the word

illustrates the amount of time / the trend

2. The main mistake is the word

3. The main problem is the phrase

what the word

4. The phrase

5. Problems with

Posted by: Simon |

Friday, February 19, 2016 at 11:27

FROM SIMON (continued):

Here are my suggestions:

1) The bar chart illustrates trends in different types of phone call in the United

Kingdom over 8 years from 1995 to 2002.

2) The bar chart compares figures for UK phone calls in terms of minutes spent

on three types of call (between1995 and 2002).

3) The bar chart gives information about three types of telephone call, namely

local, national/international and mobile calls, in the UK between 1995 and

2002.

4) The chart compares the total number of minutes of three types of phone call

made in the UK over a 7-year period from 1995.

5) The bar chart shows the amount of time spent on three types of phone call,

in billions of minutes, in the UK over a period of seven years.

有关电话的短语：

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amount of time

the time spent on

in terms of

throughout the period

the period shown

a dramatic increase in

increased steadily

reached a peak

the figure for

the rise in

Collocations related to the 'phone calls' topic:

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local calls

national calls

international calls

fixed line / landline calls

mobile calls

overall usage

user minutes

填空：

Use these words:

at, in, on, to, for, by

1.

t

he amount of time spent _____ people in the UK _____ three different

types of phone call

2.

c

alls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, _____

terms of overall usage

3.

t

he figures _____ all three types of phone call increased

4.

t

he amount of time spent _____ local calls using landlines had

reached a peak _____ 90 billion minutes

5.

t

he rise _____ the other two types of phone call continued

6.

t

he figure _____ mobiles rose _____ around 45 billion minutes

by, on

2. in

3. for

4. on, at

5. in

6. for, to

练习题

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of

telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Here's my suggested outline for a 4-paragraph report:

1.

I

ntroduction:

rewrite the question statement in your own words.

2.

O

verview:

point out which category was highest in each year, which

was lowest, and which saw the biggest changes.

3.

D

etails:

compare the 3 categories in 1995, then say what happened

up until 1999.

4.

D

etails:

notice what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards, and

contrast this with the other 2 categories. Finish with a comparison of

the figures in 2002.

开头段：

The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three

different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.