turn2021届高考英语读后续写深度解读(十)

2021

高考英语读后续写深度解读（十）< /p>

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故 事。

Washington is home to lots of trees

—

it is the Evergreen State, after all

—

and lots of fireplaces

and wood-burning stoves too. With these, you can keep yourself from the freezing cold weather.

But what if yo

u lived there and couldn’t chop

(

砍

) wood

or couldn’t afford to pay someone to do

it?

Luckily, Shane McDaniel and his twin sons, Harrison and Henry McDaniel, 21, are happy to

lend an ax. The three men chop truckloads of wood

—

then donate it to those people who need it

. “I

want

people

who

are

burning

cardboard

because

they’ve

got

nothing,”

Shane

explained

to

the

press.

“Or someone with no money who has a broken shoulder and can’t cut wood.”

The idea started as a father-son bonding project, he told the press.

“I had to cut wood with my

dad. He just loved doing it,” says Shane, 48, a divorced father of six. He wanted to pass along that

feeling, so he and the twins spent the whole summer of 2018 chopping wood. The result was a

great

wall

of

wood

piled

up

around

their

house

in

Lake

Stevens,

35

miles

outside

of

Seattle.

Technically, it was 40 cords

—

a cord measures four feet high, four feet wide, and eight feet deep.

To buy that much would cost about $$10,000.

It was too much for the McDaniels to use themselves. When the weather turned colder and

colder that November, Shane started thinking of others. He wanted to keep as many people warm

as

possible.

So

he

posted

on

the

Internet

:

“IF

YOU

ARE

IN

NEED

OF

FIREWOOD

AND

CANNOT

AFFORD

IT,

PLEASE

PM

[personal

message]

ME!...If

you

know

someone

who

BURNS WOOD, and they’re looking at a cold house this

holiday season, please help us help them.

Please help me and my boys make sure NO ONE GOES COLD

IN OUR HOOD.”

续写要求：

1.

所续写短文词数应为

150

左右；

2.

至 少使用

5

个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

The response was immediate.

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Paragraph 2:

However, not every receiver was as grateful.

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【思路点拨】

1.

文本细解读，确定续写结局

本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了

Shane

McDaniel

和他的双胞胎儿子乐于砍柴无偿奉献给社

区 居民过冬御寒的故事。

Shane McDaniel

父子利用

2018

年夏天砍了价值一万美元的木柴，

到了十一月，

天气越来越冷，

他们自己御寒用不了这么多木 柴，

Shane McDaniel

就想到无偿

捐赠给那些需要的人们，并在互联网上发起倡议，让爱心人士都能帮忙援助。

续写部分是倡议后的反响，

根据常识以及续写部分的段首句可知 ，

不同的人群看待这件

事的观点也不相同。

2.

段首句解读，确定续写方向

续写第一 段首句写道“很快有了反响”

，第二段首句写道“然而，并不是所有受赠者心